Look, This Is How Master Fa Plays!

It stands to reason that I am a person who has lived my whole life again. I have seen another world, but my thinking is still shackles. I am trapped in this world system and go against the flow, struggling with a bunch of people who have learned relevant knowledge for more than ten years. Is there no idea of ​​​​doing some tricks and finding a new way?

When writing a single female protagonist, don't write so many plots where the heroine is ambiguous with the male protagonist. I really like it. I wrote a bunch of beautiful female characters surrounding the male protagonist and flirting with each other from time to time. In the end, it ended up being a single female protagonist. I was upset.

Looking at it, it feels like a replica of Nine Star Poisonous Milk

It seems to be pretty smooth, but there are too many little pitfalls, such as space invasion for many years. The proportion of awakenings in the college entrance examination every year is not low. It must be a state of blending between extraordinary people and ordinary people. However, in the novel, ordinary people have little understanding of extraordinary people. They are like people from two worlds. For example, they yell when they eat more. The author also always likes to use some bad jokes. For example, the boss is surprised when he eats too much. Special violation. When souls are parasitic and soul-departing, special care must be taken not to let others know about it. The protagonist uses it frequently, even if it can be solved by other methods. It's like everyone except the protagonist is a fool. As long as the protagonist doesn't tell, no one will know. If the protagonist has a new ability, he must show it before the official competition. There is no fear of information leakage. The enemy must be like a fool and use the previous analysis of the protagonist to deal with it. This happens again and again. Anyway, except for the protagonist's collective wisdom.

I just wrote that Purify is an area-of-effect skill, but after two chapters it becomes a single-target skill. Also, even if I want to write a comedy genre, readers don't want to see a stupid protagonist.

The writing is smooth, the writing style suits me very well, and it is very comfortable to read. For me, it is definitely a novel above the level of food and grass. The character description is quite full, but the shortcoming is that the author hopes to focus on the insufficient description of the environment, and there is not a good sense of immersion. For example, I cannot imagine the appearance of Tokai Fortress City when I close my eyes, including the appearance of Tobu University and the enthusiasm of the competition. I cannot imagine it well after reading the author's words. However, even if the author does not make subsequent improvements, he can maintain the current level, which is quite nice.

What we're saying is that we really can't continue writing full-time fan fiction.

Can Shen Nong tell me how it was written?

The biggest poisonous point in the early days of this book is that in order to make the existence of the rich second-generation waste fat man grow small, mecha is forcibly set as an independent profession, but at the same time there is no threshold for use.

I like Nian Nian so much 😆 Al's picture of running by himself

Whether there is Shennong or not, what is the setting and plot?

A little suggestion, the protagonist's current abilities are: control, purification, meat support, plus fast training, and a certain fire attribute attack, but if you encounter someone with high will attribute resistance, you won't be able to play. Basic masters will not have low will, so you need to use movement speed or strong control skills.

The plot is too cliche and there is nothing eye-catching.

What can I say about realm positioning? It feels amazing. This kind of thing that is obviously very personal and can be as much or as little as necessary is here a kind of event that requires passing the so-called sizing competition. By competing with the opponent, if you win and the official recognizes it, then you are in the corresponding class. It gives people the impression that even if you are an ordinary person with no strength, as long as you have the ability to pass the ranking competition, you can directly become a strong person of the corresponding level in one step.

How can I put it, I feel that the rest of it is not as good as the first hospital conversation in Chapter 1

Two chapters are updated on time at 8 o'clock every night. Please, even if you are raising a book, please turn to the last page, please 😭

There are more than 800 chapters and the World Championship is not over yet... According to the length of your update It has already been played twice, right?

It's good to read Shuangwen without thinking about it. The later plot is based on the full-time mage. The realm assessment is very vague. Many places are nondescript and not clearly stated.

You can write down the name, background, extraordinary occupation, natal space, space spirit and natal star skills you designed

I recommend a million-word niche book "I Can Go to the Past and the Future". The first chapter is voiced by a female Loli author. It is a light novel with a male channel. The background is a passionate adventure in the fantasy future interspersed with daily love. It mainly uses the floating city in the interstellar era as the world view, and the magic potion sublimation + sequence as the core. Timeline setting text, wits fighting + decisive killing, the plot is interlocking, there are many foreshadowings such as grass snakes and gray lines, details are controlled, the setting is party, there are no bloody routines and brainless plots, the overall is relaxed, interesting and semi-invincible. Brothers and sisters who are interested can come and take a look

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Are there so many abstractions now?

The male protagonist's avatar really shocked me when I first saw it. It's the same as my WeChat avatar.

The plot is very similar to Ye Fan, a full-time mage, but he always emphasizes political correctness.

I have read more than half of the French book, and more than 300 chapters of this one. The book is very good. I have always liked the author's writing style. It is crisp and clear. The protagonist escapes but has a bottom line and a pattern. It is decisive, the writing is smooth, the characters are vivid, the emotional line is sweet enough, the places that should be fun are fun enough, and there are no obvious big surprises. With these points, it surpasses 80% of the starting point. It is worth reading during the book shortage period. But I am a little confused. There are obviously several flaws in the writing of this book. For example, how did the protagonist escape in the Xishuangbanna laboratory? The soul-leaving curse cannot instantly seize the body regardless of distance, the horizon control cannot transfer the soul, and can the space ring release a living person with an intact soul? If you can release a living person with an intact soul, it will conflict with the previous infiltration plot. If you release a soulless protagonist, how can the protagonist use the body directly without side effects? This paragraph has a good mood and sense of joy, but the writing is contradictory. I hope the author can explain it a little bit. There are more similar bugs in the article than this, which makes the book flawed and will make logical people feel torn. In addition, the descriptions of some scenes are too general and difficult for people to imagine, especially the descriptions of some mecha battles and grand scenes. They could be a little more specific so that people can outline the pictures in their minds. Some suggestions are all personal reflections, and the author has the sole right to serve as a reference. The overall shortcomings do not hide the good points. I personally like this book very much. I will give you a monthly pass to support the author.

Come on

Doesn't anyone want to complain about that magnetic skill? What the hell is it that can use magnetism to control living things? Is that Wolverine? In fact, it's just direct gravity control, right?

My grades are not as good as my previous studies 🙂