Mortal's Strengthened Immortal Cultivation

Death from poison. Goldfinger is not bad, and there are a lot of jokes. The protagonist is a pure gambler, and he takes the initiative to gamble his life even if he is cheated. (Lei Linggen voluntarily gave up the Foundation Establishment Pill in exchange for the Spiritual Stone and gambled his life in the Bloody Forbidden Land.) The character of the protagonist created in the early stage is a very crazy gambler.

If there are too few women and they are not very attractive, then the harem should be filled with as many women as possible. There should be three thousand beauties in the harem. This book is not very interesting. Another point is that these women are already common in the fandom and there is no freshness. In addition to including them, they also include some uncommon female partners to serve as concubines and furnaces to attract readers.

A red-faced old bitch eats young grass, a disgusting female thing hundreds of years old rapes a 20-year-old brat

There are too many jokes, seventy-nine, criticize me The characters' dialogues are in modern language, shit, crawling, movie lines, etc. It's easy to make dramas And Black Cat Yoichi There are too many entries, I will faint when listening to the book. Goldfinger is simple, clear and well received. Han Li's inner monologue is a bit arrogant. In order to set up a slap in the face, he sacrificed his character and received negative reviews. Chapter 4, a retelling of the original plot, procrastination, negative reviews. It's still a dragging plot, a meaningless plot. The protagonist has the aura of a king, and Chen Qiaoqian, the love brain, has been turned into a nymphomaniac. Fishing master Dong Xuan'er was also demoted. It doesn't matter whether you have a harem or not, but you can't force your wisdom for the sake of a harem. Boring plot, skipping chapters, skipping chapters. Chapter 11 is on the right track, strengthening the talisman. Explanation, explanation, metaphor, boring plot. Chapter 12, making plans, explaining, and explaining Dong Xuan'er's betrayal. This is a daily love Shura field light novel, the main story only accounts for less than a quarter, a small half of the love plot, a small half of the explanation plot, and the rest is the main plot.

Another operation where the alien spirit roots enter the Bloody Forbidden Land and sleep with Nangong Wan 😤

Deliberately selling off combat power. It broke through the late stage of pill formation early, and then fell to the early stage. Then you spent nearly a hundred years in the late stage of the breakthrough. Wasn't your breakthrough in vain? What a waste of time.

Byd is the sperm on the brain, and I want to be a Yuanying female cultivator. I also made up a story about Yuan Luan's Qi. It's so mean

Among the fans I have read, you are the most outrageous in accepting Nangong Wan. You took the initiative to trick Nangong Wan in person and caused all his disciples to die. Can you accept this? This feud has become big, okay?

The protagonist is purely a dog licker, without the mortal flavor of the original work, like a romance novel

About 100 chapters of female Yuanying, if you can't write it, don't write it. I'll kill you. Don't write that kind of Taoist couple plot. It's useless. You might as well write about the maid's furnace.

It feels like the author suddenly found a partner. After that, his partner is extremely controlling and has to point fingers even when writing.

It's great to open up the harem, I want to work hard with the supreme dual cultivation method, Nangong Wan will do it, the whole family of Mo Mansion will do it, Huangfeng Valley will do it, Luan Xinghai will do it, I will do it wherever I go. In the end, I became the ancestor of the dual cultivators of Chaos, with tens of thousands of beauties in the harem. I want all the beauties mentioned in the original poems.

After reading the first five chapters, I have no interest in reading anymore. I have two points to say. First, the protagonist is forced to close the relationship with Han Li (the protagonist sells information about the Ascension Token, and after Han Li buys the magic weapon fragments, the protagonist is picked on for Han Li). The plot is too rough; second, there are a lot of fragments. For example, the main character chatting with a group of casual cultivators actually takes up nearly a chapter. Author, you have just started your book, so you should do everything you can to attract readers, instead of adding some messy plots when readers have not yet become familiar with your book.

It's like a romance novel, but the author is a woman? Emotional dramas are all 🐶bloody plots, female videos have invaded?

It's outrageous to be able to get tens of thousands, hundreds of thousands, or even hundreds of thousands of spiritual stones when you just practice Qi. It's outrageous that you can get tens of thousands of pills without any background. It's not enough, it's a bit of a high-profile protagonist, and it doesn't look like a mortal.

The character of the protagonist is not a stable person, but a wanderer. Relatively speaking, I like extreme operations. I saw that the protagonist was persuaded to leave after entering the Bloody Forbidden Land. You said that your protagonist owns multiple top-quality magic weapons, multiple second-level talismans (with foundation-building power), hundreds of first-level talismans, and talisman treasures. When I entered the Bloody Forbidden Land, I still appeared in a cave. I didn't take out all my equipment and talismans immediately, which made me speechless. What makes me most speechless is that facing the peak of the first-order thunder monster, the protagonist has so many trump cards, but he doesn't use any of them to defend in advance, but just watches, and almost suffers a big loss. It's really speechless. This is different from playing Minecraft. When I go to fight monsters, I don't wear a full set of diamond equipment, but I wear a set of ordinary iron equipment without a shield. What's the difference? After reading a lot of comments and chapter reviews, other readers have mentioned many shortcomings, but I think I can still handle it. But for this stupid point, I really couldn't resist it. Knowing that there was a deep pool in front of you, you jumped in without doing your best to protect yourself. This is really uncomfortable.

In the original work, if the person named Chen didn't like the person named Lu, he would go to the woods in the middle of the night. How come in your writing, it became a marriage of interests? Xia Jiba wrote randomly,

Gg. This is as boring as One Piece and Funaru. It just repeats all the experiences of the protagonist in the original novel. I don't say how the protagonist survived without these opportunities, just that there are other opportunities. The protagonist not only pretends to be a passerby, but also pretends to be hypocritical to the audience. Who can watch the continuation of this plot? You are 👍.

Although I knew the book would be finished soon, I didn't expect it to be so unfinished. The monthly vote is in vain......

I read Chapter 11 and abandoned it. It was too embarrassing.

But the writing has a sense of frivolity Can't it be more serious? I have to add some Internet slang and talk to myself

I personally decided that I would advise everyone not to read a bad novel with a bad ending. When he bleeds to gain great blessings, the hundreds-year-old old woman and that Mrs. Wen, the hundreds-year-old old woman is still a second-hand commodity. There is nothing to read. There are so many characters, such as the newly released Merlin, Song Yu, and Zilin. Which one is not better than these two rags? And every novel has a blue screen, do I have to accept Chen Shijie? Damn it, how short of resources do you have? You also need to help them train them to become gods. Can you afford it? The reason why his combat power collapsed is that he can be killed later after being ordered, and it is also an eighth-level thunder attribute key.

This novel is the most disgusting one I have ever read. Even if you only accept one woman, why should an ugly woman like Shui Hongfu sleep with Mrs. Wen if the harem novel insists on it? Wow, what a thief are you? I want second-hand goods, and I have to reset one, and the virgin is real and fake. That Hongfu has been eliminated a long time ago, and Mrs. Wen must also be stepped on. Otherwise, most people will not advance so quickly in the later stages of the cause, otherwise there will be so many early stages of the cause.

The first part was well written, but the second part suddenly turned into a pornographic article. All mortal women with names entered the harem. Speechless.

Xianxia novel plays modern jokes and is directly poisoned to death

The essence of mortals, "Gou", has no trace. The Bloody Forbidden Land traps and kills the disciples of the Hidden Moon Sect, robs the disciples of the six sects, possesses tens of thousands of spiritual stones, and numerous boiled eggs, and even goes to the cave of the original model worker to commit suicide in various ways.

I shouldn't have given the monthly pass last month, it was a mess

Didn't he kill Han Li and seize the Palm Heaven bottle to cultivate immortality for himself?

It's not enough to watch at all. It's updated too slowly.

This ending is too bad, it was finished hastily