Mortal: I, Wen Tianren, Will Practice Some Immortality!

You have a golden finger for the plot. Why did you think that starting from the chaotic sea of ​​stars, you directly cut the golden finger in half, and then you desperately pressed the realm to impose a low plot word count, and you were convinced.

It's poisonous, and even becoming a god can't solve your problems 🥵🥵

I originally wanted to leave it out, but I liked your last book, so I decided to come back and talk about it. I hope it can help you. Whether it makes sense or not is just my personal opinion, so please don't complain. Most of the readers of the harem genre are in the genre that does not lick Han Li. If you don't have Nangong Wan, they will assume that you are an old slave. Nangong Wan has become a discriminator. In addition, you are late in the timeline and don't have many plots and beauties. You will not have much reader base. No matter how many beauties you accept in the future, it will be meaningless. So I don't recommend you to write this book in the harem genre. Without Nangong Wan, the reader base of harem novels is very small. Don't look at Huan, I haven't seen how many books they have supported. One of them was also started by Wen Tianren, and it was also a harem novel that has not had more than 10,000 readers after a few months of writing. Your book can only attract readers who like Han Li. These people don't see how the author writes the protagonist, how majestic he is and how many beauties he attracts. They see how you provide women, resources, and resources to take care of Han Li. If you don't write these contents, they will retreat after reading for a while. I have read more than 30 books, and the situation has been roughly the same in the past two months.

The main character is Chaos Xinghai at the beginning, and there is not much plot before he meets Han Li. There is no Nangong Wan later in the timeline. Why do I feel that this is written to please Han Li? Many books of Xuan Gu Wen Tianren have written this way. If this is the case, it is better to read another Wen Tianren. He has already written this way, and I have no interest in reading the same routine again. Author, you have to be a little more innovative, and you have to have new ideas to please.

I don't believe that readers like this kind of control. The feeling of a sharp sword hanging over my head. This sense of substitution is terrible. You haven't lifted it sooner. Still wandering around here and there. I haven't found a way to relieve it yet. And ran to look for opportunities. You 🧠 bow your head to Liu Dao. You wrote more than seventy chapters. The protagonist was restrained for more than seventy chapters. His cultivation has also been stuck at the peak of Jindan. The model worker builds your foundation and builds your elixir in the later stage. The model workers are all in the late stage of elixir formation. You are still at the peak of elixir formation. You deserve to die. Such pressure on cultivation. It's unreasonable for you not to throw yourself into the street

Damn it, why didn't Liu Dao know that his soul seal was so awesome? Even the gods can't solve it. If I had known he was so awesome, the soul marks would have been flying all over the sky. If he was so awesome, the world would have been flying all over the sky. Oh, how cool it is. Easily enslave the boss in the Nascent Soul stage to the God stage. The Dan Formation Stage can easily enslave the Nascent Soul Stage.

What I wrote in the early stage was pretty good, but now I have written rubbish and discarded it. I deleted it and wasted my money.

It turned out to be the Supreme Saint of the Six Paths. I thought the protagonist was a poor cultivator. He had to buy nothing but foundation building materials. After finishing the work, he was still thinking about Han Li's Dayan Art. The whole article revealed an indescribable feeling. There was no trace of Young Master Wen's strong character. It wouldn't matter if he was a monk from a down-to-earth family. This is the first person under the Nascent Soul in the original work. He doesn't lack anything. Do you understand?

After reading more than 20 chapters, decades have passed and it is still the peak of the late stage of pill formation. If nothing else, even if the Six Paths Supreme Sage is confused, he can guess that the protagonist deliberately does not want to increase his cultivation level. Why not use some means to force the protagonist to submit?

Seeing that the Six Extremes True Demonic Skill was to be replaced, he decisively retreated from the trap.

The soul mark of a late-stage Nascent Soul. So far apart. Threatening another late Nascent Soul with his head. It would be great if the power of this soul seal can be used to its original strength. Can be removed with a wave of the hand. And whether he can activate it or not is still one thing. After all, it's so far away. Transforming into a god is enough

It's too low and difficult to stretch. Wouldn't the author be embarrassed to pick his feet when writing?

I find it very boring. This is no different from Xuan Gu Wen Tianren's previous books. The protagonist still finds various excuses to be with Han Li, and I don't see any plot highlights. It's not licking enough, not exciting enough, and there's no ordinary mortal flow. It's an average book.

Brother, I'm so excited, I'm already addicted to my own world.

Is this still Wen Tianren? 🤔I can only say that it would be better not to write about Wen Tianren

Tai Shui, I have simply gone through two plots so far, and the rest of the chapter is full of water.

What kind of puppet are you playing? Those precious materials and resources might as well be used for refining treasures and practicing cultivation. A Nascent Soul stage puppet is extremely expensive. It would be better to kill the Nascent Soul cultivator by refining the pole and soul flag. Raise a few Yuanying ghost cultivators. Refining a few demon corpses. And with the protagonist's standard combat power. Yuan Zhong can kill Yuan Hou. Also wasting precious materials to make puppets. It's unnecessary. Kill a few Yuanhou monks and use them to refine corpses. Raise ghosts. Better than anything else 😏

When writing about Tiannan, most of the characters can be replaced by Han Li's name as the protagonist. Basically, the character "water" is used. The plot and characterization are almost gone. They are all written in one stroke and branch directly to the character "water".

From the introduction, it seems that the author approves the Immortal Realm Chapter, but since you agree with the Immortal Realm Chapter, do you think you don't want to live anymore if you plot against Han Li like this? Don't you plan to ascend to the fairy world? Or should we say that the author has already prepared eunuchs from the beginning? Since the author has approved the Immortal World chapter and not snatched the little green bottle, then he can't get along with Han Li like this from the beginning. You have already approved the Immortal World chapter and you are plotting against Han Li. Let's not talk about making good friends with Han Li, at least don't plot against him like this. If you are so scheming, it seems that the author has not considered the subsequent plot. The author has prepared eunuchs from the beginning just to make money 🙂

A plug-in that's half as good as the plot.

Why did Han Laomo look so covetously at Wen Tianren? Wasn't Wen Tianren himself killed after seeing Yuan Yao resurrecting senior sister and then running to find trouble? If you don't want to cause trouble, Old Mo Han is so busy looking for you?

I have seen more than 50 pictures, and my personal opinion is that I can pluck Hanli wool like this and take jujube pills.

This book is complete with more than 700,000 words. It just seems like the author is trying to suppress his level. Just like before. I started writing when I reached the peak of Dan Formation. I read dozens of chapters. Not yet giving birth to a baby. Or open a plug-in like a point adder. Keep running in circles. Not even out of the control of the Six Paths. One can imagine. There is no interesting plot. The main character did nothing. The word count has been improving. How come these results are so good😆🔨🔨

The previous book was well written, and this one is even better! It is easy to collapse the text after adding more points, but the author can adjust it by adding more points, which is fine. The pace is a little fast, and I have collected a group of people. I feel that the main reason for the fun of this article is the effect of adding the points, which is similar to the game text data flow. Come on!

Mortal: Start from the game store

"Mortal Plum Ningxiu Immortal Biography"

The first chapter is about persuading people to quit, and the plot participation system makes it easy to understand without even thinking about it.

It's been 100 years, I'm still dilly-dallying, I'm still in the late stages of elixir formation

Come on, it's pretty good

Thank you, the author