The Devil Walking Out of the City of Light

The writing is really bad, so I can just curse in a few sentences, 😅

I have read a few chapters, and the following is just my personal opinion. First of all, on the whole, the frame plot feels quite mature, but if you look closely, it will feel a bit messy. Then, what I personally care about most is the vocabulary. Although the novel does not pay much attention to vocabulary, and the accumulation of vocabulary is also a taboo, but overall I feel that the writing style is a bit (how to describe it) relatively plain and not too vivid. I can't imagine the scene based on the words (it just doesn't have a high sense of substitution, and it's easy to watch). You can think more about the vocabulary. Take the first chapter as an example. If the two "a moment later" are too close together, it will appear that the vocabulary is poor and the sentences are thin. The above are just my short conclusions after reading a few chapters. However, since the work is so long, there is always room for improvement. However, I am not particularly interested in this type of subject matter. I will cast some recommendation votes tomorrow and see if I can attract experienced readers who like this type of subject matter to come and take a look.