The Power of a Poor Family

How should I put it? There were a lot of debates in the book review section, which led to my expectations being a bit high. After all, if the book is really bad, not many people will pay attention to you and argue for you. The plot in the first few chapters is indeed very controversial. The logic on several key points is particularly weak, and the image of the protagonist is even more affected. In addition, the charm of the words and phrases is not deeply rooted in people's hearts, and the entry point of the timeline is too early, causing my high expectations to drop by half. But the more I write, the better it gets. The pace is moderate, the plot advancement is logical, the historical background is detailed and real, the characters stand up, and the controversial plot in the front is also explained at the end, including identity, etc. The main character's oral commentary on ancient commentaries on the present has the author's own ideological output (he dares to write), has timely humor, and has appropriate copywriting to show off. Coupled with writing techniques such as multi-thread parallelism, blind lines, and seeing the big from the small, the plot is laid out layer by layer, and the plot is constantly brewing. The more you read, the more you enjoy it, and the more you watch, the more you admire the author's writing skills. My personal opinion up to Chapter 80: I read it at night by candlelight and couldn't put it down. The more you look at it, the more suspicious you become. Was the controversial plot at the beginning deliberately arranged by you? Just to stir up controversy and stir up excitement? ? Is that kind of design that suppresses the protagonist's starting situation in order to suppress the protagonist really written by the person who wrote the subsequent plots? Finally, if you are interested in the fictional historical genre, it is recommended to give it a try, it is worth it.

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You can tell from the introduction that you are brainless, and you also write historical articles. Don't you think about Yi Yin Huo Guang's story? ? Don't you see what happened to Zhang Juzheng? You want to be a loyal minister, but once you get into that position, you can't help yourself. Your butt determines how big your head is! I don't want to rebel. So. It can be imagined that the nine tribes are already enjoying their happiness.

Brother, do you know what kind of work a book boy did in ancient times? Serving tea and water is just the basics. At night, you also have to warm the bed of the young master you are serving. What would happen if the other person was a Longyang lover? What do you think would happen? People in ancient times wanted to reach high places without any stain on their face. Cao Cao was great, his ancestors were adopted by eunuchs. Even after Cao Cao was criticized for being an eunuch for several generations, it would take a very powerful person to become the prime minister as you mentioned in your introduction. At least I think Zhuge Liang is a bit doubtful about his rebirth.

Why do authors nowadays write protagonists who are refugees and beggars in the beginning? Why do they always use the word "humble family"? People from a poor family are not beggars. The refugees can be compared to those who are serious and well-connected.

After reading the book review section, people were dumbfounded. Are you right? Are you serious? One by one, they are holding on to book boys and other things, slaves and property, so what? Can't we rise? Isn't Yi Yin a slave? Fu said he was not a slave? Wei Qing is not a slave? Shi Le is not a slave? Deng Ai can still say that it is not a shame to be born in a humble family. He can be a husband only if he can bend and stretch. It's hard to imagine that people in this era would take class and family status so seriously. The teacher has made 1.4 Billion people stand up mentally, but some people are still kneeling in their hearts, right?

The word "poor family" has different definitions at different times. What most people know about the poor family relative to the gentry (who control the core political resources) refers to the small and medium-sized landowners who have a certain economic foundation but cannot join the core circle. His distinctive feature is that he has not held a senior official position of more than 2,000 shi for a long time. It is said that there is no poor family in the upper class, and there is no noble family in the lower class. The main focus of the poor family is political status. But this refers specifically to the clan political system and cannot be applied to any dynasty in ancient times. After passing through the Sui and Tang Dynasties to the Song and Yuan Dynasties, clan politics was shattered and under the impact of the imperial examination system, the definition of a poor family became broad. It generally refers to families with acceptable economic conditions but lacking a prominent political background. In both periods, the poor families were higher than the common people, that is, the level of Qianshou, relative to the gentry. By the time of the Ming and Qing Dynasties, when the gentry were completely disillusioned and the landlord class fully emerged, the political definition of poverty was gone and only the economic definition remained, which meant having a certain financial strength and being able to afford education for their children. So, in the set background era, the status of merchants in Jiangnan was gradually lifted, and the protagonist's family's financial strength was acceptable, so there was no problem in being called a poor family. Furthermore, the protagonist's true background has not been mentioned yet, so readers, please don't worry. The purpose of explaining this is to avoid causing too much discussion that has nothing to do with the plot and causing misunderstandings for new readers later. I will only explain this once, I wish you all a happy reading.

The main character's family is not considered poor. The meaning of "poor family" was that his ancestors were richer than he is now.

Does the author have any misunderstanding about the poor family? Don't say that he was bought to work as a book boy for a wealthy family. Ordinary people with household registration are not qualified to be called a poor family. They have to have a certain status in their ancestors, and now they are qualified to be called a poor family because their family is in decline.

Lee Jae-myung was elected President of South Korea. After looking at his life experience, it is really a legend from a poor family. If it were written into a book, it would definitely be criticized as too fake... But it happened that a 12-year-old rural child who was forced to drop out of school and go to work in the city became the president of a country. Let me ask you, is it strange? !

Did Zhou Jian sell leather glutinous rice to the protagonist? If you insist on taking him with you for everything, are you SM?

The servants chatted and laughed with the young, ignorant and unskilled master, calling them brothers and sisters. The master's family still had imminent difficulties. It really brought me back to my time in those days.

It's too much to start as a slave. In ancient times, this was quite taboo.

The author's introduction is terrible. You should be a powerful person and write a memoir like a memoir written by a modern gangster, full of sense of separation.

Sleep with the most beautiful people and ride the fiercest horses. It smells like a diaosi's fantasy. Nowadays, Qidian historical articles no longer write about these diaosi.

Slaves cannot be filial, this book is over

Summary: The writing style is not too bad.

Brother, don't mess up anymore 😭

I am still following your last book "The First Powerful Minister". I particularly like the characters portrayed in the article. Even a small character is very vivid. When reading many fragments, the scenes at that time can appear before your eyes, as if you were there. I also like Xia Jingyun driving the car from time to time, and the little Jianjian beside the white clouds... Hahaha, very happy... The battle scenes are also very realistic and detailed. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it! Moreover, there are shadows of intrigue in the article like the Langya Bang, and suspense like that of Qing Yu Nian. In some places, the descriptions are not inferior to the works of the Beacon Fire Opera Princes! ! As for other, fictitious articles, sometimes there is really no need to compare the 5,000-year history of China. Unreasonable places can also be reasonable! So, I hope you don't care too much about other people's evaluations and stick to your original intention I am an old bookworm. I started to read online articles from Lao Zhu's "Purple River" to "The Legend of Wukong" by Where Are You Now? I really like historical articles. I have read many online articles by authors who were not popular at the time but became popular later, so I will not list them one by one; in short, I am very optimistic about you! ! I believe hard work pays off, you will get better and better, and every work will become a hit 🔥 Come on!

Everyone wants to be an emperor, but the protagonist wants to be a dog

This historical plot is quite good in terms of plot, whether it is a business war or a plot. But one thing that is a bit weird is that the protagonist often makes some remarks that are far beyond the limitations of this era, pointing out the country from the perspective of a keyboard warrior (bragging), and has not integrated into this era at all. In fact, many remarks were considered treasonous by the ancients (similar to heretics and heretics), but when the protagonist in the book said it, other characters seemed to automatically understand it. One person was shocked at one moment, and the other person was shocked at other times. Were the ancients who co-authored it all primary school students? 😅 Let's play~ The originally exciting plot is mixed with a lot of modern knowledge and concepts, making it read like no fish or fish.

Let me start by saying that the author's writing style is okay and the narrative is rhythmic, but there is no common sense, and many historical gestures are ridiculous to understand. However, there are many places where he can understand the situation more correctly. It is like a left brain with shallow cognition and a wise and knowledgeable right brain fighting each other. But in most cases, the left brain wins, and it is neither better nor worse. . . It's like doing a math problem. The first and second steps are obviously wrong, but the answer in the third step is inexplicably right. . . I very much suspect that some of the author's views were forcefully instilled, so he only knows what they are and doesn't know why. . . This is embarrassing. It makes reading very uncomfortable. One moment I have to use my brain, and the other moment I can't. . .

I don't know if the author was stimulated in the middle period (referring to Qi Zheng's first time in Beijing). His writing style has obviously become more calm, but it has also reduced some of the more exciting emotional lines. Let's talk about the advantages first. The most criticized thing in the early part of the book is the old-fashioned slaps in the face, the old-fashioned twists and the embarrassing jokes that ruin the atmosphere. Since entering Beijing, the author has indeed changed a lot, becoming more calm, and the polishing and control of the plot have become more mature. It can be said that the author has really entered the state. The writing style and plot control from the middle of the book are indeed on a level higher than that of a masterpiece. But again, the author sacrificed a lot of things. Disadvantages Let's start with the interaction between men and women. Now there are more than 500 chapters, and the male protagonist is married to two female protagonists. But are the two female protagonists' scenes too few? Author, are you avoiding something? It is true that historical texts that do not use harems or relationships as selling points do not focus on the emotional line. An appropriate amount of emotional lines can alleviate the reading fatigue caused by continuously following the main line. However, you can't have nothing, right? It's hard to think about the heroine Xin Jiusui who is both married. I don't even know what she likes about the male protagonist because the author never portrayed her. It was clear that Qi Zheng took the two heroines with him the whole time when he went to suppress the bandits, but the only interaction he had with them was Xin Jiusui making fun of the three fools of Taiyuan at the beginning. After that, even the portrayal of the heroine Meng Qingyun was much less. Emotions are always brushed aside, and I really laughed out loud today when I saw that even the plot that should focus on describing a major life transition like marriage was skipped lightly. I started out as the first powerful official, and I don't believe that the author doesn't have this ability. The first powerful official's portrayal of the emotional line is not very good, but it is obviously above the qualified level, but now the author seems to be deliberately avoiding this plot. Secondly, the description of the supporting characters is also much stiffer. For Zhou Jian and Ling Yue, the author probably wanted to copy the template of Bai Yunbian and Jiang Yuhu in the previous movie, but from the middle stage onwards, the portrayal of them has been obviously flat and labelled. Now every time they appear, I know without even thinking about it that the author will criticize Ling Yue's opposite, make a fuss about Zhou Jian's extraordinary talent, and then trust and worship Qi Zheng in a formulaic way. You must know that a character's personality traits are not the same as labels. You cannot portray that character well just by repeatedly emphasizing their labels and memes. Finally, even Qi Zheng is a bit unreal, lacking his agility and childishness as a young man. The author later depicts Qi relying on his resourcefulness and exhaustive strategies to overcome difficulties, but it is too single-minded. In the middle and later stages of Qi Zheng's life, there is a lack of poetry plots, family and bonding plots, and emotional line plots. Now it seems that Qi Zheng has nothing to remember except his intelligence. They only know that he is awesome, but it will not make readers feel too happy to watch it.

I'm very happy that there is no heroine. Among the CPs in this book, I admire Qi Zheng and Shen Qianzhong the most. Of course, I also really like Qi Zheng and Lu Shi'an, the old fox. As long as these two people get together, the people or groups they care about will be in bad luck.

Everyone here is a common people Bai Ding 😎😎

It's wonderful, I'll give you all the monthly tickets I saved, come on!

It's so boring. Am I hopeless? I used to be obsessed with all kinds of historical novels, but now I can't read them. Is it because my taste has improved? Or were you overwhelmed by the cool news? Nowadays, as long as the plot is not novel, everything seems to be boring and unbearable.

I am heartbroken, I am a few years older than him, and I am a sibling. In this relationship, no one has let anyone down. He said he wanted to find a woman who loves him, and when he is with me, he always feels like he is always looking forward to my mercy. My heart is very tired, but I also sincerely do so! The relationship of more than two years ended today. I returned the peace charm he gave me for blessing in Hangzhou, and he wanted to return the gold bracelet for the computer watch I bought for him. I didn't ask for it, so I left it with him~ I said we broke up so we could get together, and gave him a breakup fee of 4,000 yuan... I don't know why I gave him money. Maybe I was used to it. Before, I introduced him to my circle, gave him resources, and allowed him to grow, but he proudly said he didn't need it. He needed a computer to learn technology, so I bought him a 13,000 high-configuration engineering computer without any hesitation. As a result, within a few months it became a dedicated computer for playing games. I'm used to giving him the best I can. I said, I will give you a down payment of 50,000, and you can pay more than 1,000 per month. Buying an apartment is better than renting, but he was unwilling. I said, then I will sign you up for a driving school and you can learn to drive. You can also help me drive when I get tired from driving. Besides, it's a skill, but he said he was too busy and tired to learn it. For more than two years, he also said that he loves me like crazy, but I am always busy, which gradually makes him feel that he is always waiting for me, always waiting for me, and I am often not around when he needs me... He said that he doesn't want to be like this anymore, but is it wrong for me to work hard to make money? I want to give you an easy trip. I want to drive 318 together and cross the desert boat. I want to see three mountains and five mountains, great rivers and mountains... Doesn't this require a financial foundation? ! However, he said that as long as I stay with him... Stay with him and live an ordinary life. Why should we live an ordinary life when we can obviously live a better life? Now, it's all over. When I got home, I cried a lot. I didn't want to do anything. I was very hungry but didn't want to eat... My head hurt and I didn't have any strength. I just wanted to lie down... We had blocked WeChat before. After thinking about it for a long time, I couldn't help but send a text message. There was no reply. I called and found out that I had also been blocked. It seems that the relationship between sister and brother really does not end well.

I haven't read much. I'm not very good at reading. I scanned the pages carefully and passed by. I saw King Wei just took off his vest and then the Lu family found the second- and fifth-year-old boy who jumped back. It was strange. Was this protagonist always unpredictable?

Is it okay to have some potential, don't be a wage earner?