I Was a Ghost and a Confucian Saint in Gaowu

I still have some ideas for this subject, so let's leave a mark first! I hope the author can stick to it.

After reading a few chapters, the writing seems a bit childish and a bit embarrassing.

It's still a little bit poisonous, and the plot is a bit cliche, which is tolerable, but the author's combat descriptions are really too stretched. For example, a quasi-warrior punches someone in the face and the person flies dozens of meters away, losing a few teeth. He keeps mentioning the perfect footwork of Jiquan and swallowing the stars. It's too much. When it comes to the warrior, he punches an alien beast and flies out to break more than a dozen trees in a row. Is this powerful world so powerful? Brother, you are writing about Gao Wu. Of course, you have the final say in your world, but if our martial arts are so strong, what do we have to do with Confucianism and Taoism? What do you think?

There is a bit of a problem at the beginning. You are a Confucian and Taoist, but your physical fitness is so high. Why do you want to write in Chinese language? Are you afraid?

Very nice. Not poisonous. The plot is also reasonable. Just too little

If the water is too strong, it will look like it was generated by AI. One sentence will be repeated over and over again.

The writing was okay, but it was a bit different from what I expected. I thought you were creating a literary world and establishing a sect in the world of martial arts. Judging from the direction you wrote, it sounds like fighting is fun and a muscular man.

Very nice. Another book collapsed. It's too difficult for authors nowadays. He became a eunuch within a few sentences.

Why is it that Tongsheng never improves and feels so exhausted?

Why do you see weapons being used in competitions? Isn't this a martial artist? The more I look at the appointment, the more awkward it becomes. I feel like I'm getting addicted watching this. Since you want to write literary style, you should concentrate on writing literary style of fighting, otherwise it will look awkward and nondescript.

I clicked in after reading the comments. As soon as I opened it, in the first chapter, I owed 500,000 yuan at the beginning and quit again.

The response to this kind of entertainment-like novel is very important! And this book is basically just for my own entertainment, not any fun at all! ! !

I don't know why, but I always feel like something is wrong while reading this book. There are too many contradictions, but there are no other big problems.

There is a similar book, but in reverse

But at a glance, there is nothing poisonous about it.

The writing is childish, and I can't help but make fun of it.

It's more interesting to watch an invincible person

😊Come on! Write well and don't make nonsense!

Too watery, too novice. There are no big problems, and there is nothing very toxic, but it gives me the impression that I can only read the title and have no desire to read the actual content.

It's a bit interesting. You can read it in Shuhuang