Star Dome Train: Star God Emerging from the Space Station

What is a miracle? Resurrection from the dead is a miracle!

It feels like you, the author, started writing a book before you have understood the background of the plot. It is too casual. There are not many people watching, but it is okay. If there are more, you may be pointed out wrongly one by one. Instead of talking about MiHoYo's backstabbing, you just talk about a lot of hidden backgrounds. It is not clear at this stage.

Build a building for the oldgrandma

Clara

Let's explain the issue about the Black Tower Space Station First of all, the text in the game has changed. The text in the third test was that Esta built the space station. The text in the open beta was that the space station had already existed. After Esta became the station manager, she provided most of the items in the space station. I didn't understand it before. The initial setting was that the space station had already existed. Later, some readers said that the space station was built by Esta, so I believed it. Later, I checked the information online and found that the text had changed. The space station was indeed not built by Esta, but by the Interstellar Peace Company. So to explain in unison, the Black Tower Space Station actually existed, but the setting in the book is based on the three measurements, which means that the space station was built with money from Esta.

After boarding the Star Dome Train, I felt it was not as good as before. What was it like to watch the plot again?

Rongcang End

One moment is the Universe Peace Company, and the other is the Interstellar Peace Company. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

Why do they write that Xingmei is disdainful? I actually think she is cool and gentle.

After reading the first chapter, there is one point I want to make. My dear author, If you want to write about a person who never loses his temper at critical moments, you have to write about a person who often loses his temper, but does not lose his temper in a certain important scene, saving the whole scene. Instead of writing directly in the book "At the critical moment, never lose the chain." This makes me feel that it is insulting my IQ as a reader.

I remember that the Black Tower Space Station was built with money from Esda. What did the author write?

Star

7 Points, thanks to the author for letting me see single-digit chapter costs

Esta

Carter

I hope to become a star god as soon as possible in the future. I will be awesome in my own way.

Chen Hao

Come on, the information given by the game now is actually enough to write a fanfic, and dozens of hours of information can be compiled on b. Don't be afraid of backstabbing, backstabbing is normal. If you read too much fan fiction, you will be very tolerant of backstabbing. I would like to make a suggestion. I feel that the character image of the protagonist has not been fully established yet, and the description can be more detailed (you decide whether it is watery or not). Honkai, Star Iron, there are so many famous sayings, use them frequently, otherwise it will be too bland, and it will not have that [Star Iron] flavor. The protagonist's character is not a "strong character" and needs more story additions. There is also [Miracle] to expand and write, and you can learn many short stories. It's rare to come across a seedling fanfic that I've read in the past.

The first Star Iron fanfic I've seen, support me, come on (ง •̀灬•́)ง

I just read a few chapters and found that you have a lot of bugs. The most important thing is that the Black Tower Space Station was built by Esta with her own pocket money. You seem to have a Black Tower Space Station popping up out of nowhere.

I read the latest two chapters. One chapter is 1,400 words, and the other is 1,500 words. I just made a question mark face 🤐

I hope that the subsequent plot will not completely follow the main line. The general framework can follow the main line, but the content still needs to be innovative.

A fan of Good Guys Star Dome Railway

Good guy, the latest chapter feels like I have redone the main plot. Can you write more of your own stuff?

Black Swan: So I took action.

This way of resisting arrest is really unexpected and reasonable. It really surprised me. Come on, author, this unexpected surprise is really great! 🤭

😅The protagonist's name is too funny

Why is the male protagonist's name so boring?

Click in twice, the author is Chen Hao? Every time I see Chen Hao, I have no intention of reading any more. Can't you just look at what the immortal boats are called? If that doesn't work, you can try looking for a historical figure. You Chen Hao is so stupid.

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