Dinosaurs Are Coming

It is estimated that the eunuch deleted the book before it reached 200,000 words. I will post it as proof.

Starting from the truck, to the dragon, to now, the author's strange colloquial language really tortured me to death, like a primary school student full of imagination. Each work has some novel ideas, but there seems to be no improvement in my level after writing so many books. In addition, the oral expressions with the same translation accent really made me unable to get into it. Every time there was a dialogue, it made me laugh out loud but I wanted to watch it again. I felt really uncomfortable. I couldn't just start with Heavy Duty and write it with AI.

Why do I become more childish the more I write, is it still me?

Your character has been ruined, this account is useless

Does the author still think that he is very talented? Does he still think that he is living in the early and middle stages of Dalong? No one is supporting you now. Those who have been in the palace are lower than other authors. They are not willing to write seriously and still want good grades. Find a job and work hard. Stop writing online articles. It is not suitable for you.

I feel like this author is a bit weird! I have written such a good work as The Dragon is Dead, how can I continue writing it? The more I write, the worse it gets.

I feel that the previous ones are not attractive enough, so why not divide the bloodlines of the contract partners in more detail [Beast bloodline, fierce beast bloodline, ferocious beast bloodline, king beast bloodline, sub-dragon bloodline, true dragon bloodline] Rest on your laurels, don't be shabby! Ride a dragon as soon as you get up, and the sense of anticipation is not that strong. Of course I am just blind, the author Twelve Heavenly Kings 👍 is still capable 👍👍👍

Come into the factory, okay? Don't get stuck with the dragon.

The writing is actually very good, it feels a bit like Dragon Age. Full of youthful feel. It's a pity that I heard that the results are not satisfactory, and he is a great author. Afraid of being cut

This is really cool. How many books does one picture take?

There are several words that the author found to be used very frequently. Fashionable and cool... I am not happy to say that some words like this, especially "fashionable", are too dated. In my personal feeling, these words were used more frequently around 10 years ago, but now I feel they have been abandoned by the times. It was just a flash in the pan, and it has long since lost much popularity. Nowadays, no one would usually say these words, right? I think this is a sign that the author does not follow the times and does not absorb and digest the hot words on the Internet in a timely manner. So much so that it feels like I am reading a book from more than ten years ago. I think the colloquial words used in articles must follow the times. Even if the vocabulary is not updated in time, you should still use some words that have not been abandoned by the times. Words like "handsome" and "beautiful" have not been abandoned and can easily replace the "fashionable" and "cool" in the text. Or, simply not be colloquial and use more formal words. It can be changed to mighty, magnificent, majestic, etc. Above. A little opinion, and I hope we can have a friendly discussion.

I feel that the name Qihuai is not as good as Qihuai. It is called You Qi. From now on, the protagonist Jianguo can be called Qi Guo.

How many years have you not seen the original stream of a game?

The author's heavy truck is farming and practicing martial arts to bring peace to the world, while he is studying science in another world. I like these three books very much

This is a real great man. He is releasing a new book after 6 years 🙂

You can write a post-apocalyptic type of article. There is almost no starting point now. If you write it, it will be the only one.

Is this too outrageous for you? There have been three bad books since "Warm Dragon" ended. I haven't searched for any of them. After two months, I couldn't find them anymore. At that time, you were writing something to save the 300-year dynasty. You wanted to have hundreds of thousands of words before reading it. Today, it disappeared again. It turned into a dinosaur. When I read it again, it ended at chapter 50. What are you doing, my dear? Can you calm down and write a book?

I cut two books in a row. Is the author so outrageous now?

In fact, the most comfortable book I read by the author was Studying Science in a Different World. . Great harvest 👍

On March 1, the daily introduction was updated, starting from chapter 49, updated one day ago, and the preliminary identification of the eunuch

You might as well rest for a while, think about the subject and make an outline. If you do it casually, readers won't like it. I'm afraid there will be a risk of following up. I used to like your heavy card book best.

I suggest you just cut it off, polish the new book first, and then see how long it will take to get it on the shelves.

I saw the finished 50 chapters at a glance, holy shit! You are used to eating tens of thousands a month, but now you are not used to eating thousands a month? If you have no credibility and can't write long, your previous base will be thrown away.

The setting is quite interesting, but it's a pity

Here I am. . . . . . . . . . Well done to you, author! ! !

What's going on? There haven't been updates for two days? ?

Why don't you write a fanfic about Game of Thrones or Dragons? There are dragons in them and there is a fan base.