Knight of Light Plants the Sun in Eternal Night

Now that I have read Chapter 50, I can't help but complain about it. . . As of now, it can be said that it has no bright spots and is just a piece of cake. The only hope is that the author has written hits before, and with the blessing of the old author's name, it should not be at this level. Let's look at it later. Let me complain about the shortcomings I have felt so far: 1. The text is a running account, with no ups and downs that makes it difficult to immerse yourself in. Let alone follow the protagonist's perspective to experience the plot. It seems that I am accompanying the author to read the report instead of listening to the author's story. 2. The plot conflict is too simple and mindless, and the family conflict is like child's play with no highlights. There is currently no character that can make an impression on people, including the protagonist's cheating process, which is not interesting at all. The description of any character's personality is not highlighted through the plot but is directly stated in a straightforward manner. . . Sorry, I still haven't found anything that attracts me to watch it. In the past, when reading books, people were looking for books to read. There were few resources and high demand. Books were good to read, so readers generally didn't choose. They had the patience to wait for your highlights to appear. Now, everyone chooses books to read. There are more resources and fewer readers. Even after the fifty chapters, no highlights have been found. In a word, there is no sense of expectation! There are no twists and turns, conflicts that arouse curiosity, no novel and exquisite settings that arouse imagination, no steady farming, descriptions of a sense of gain or small surprises every day, and even no ambiguity! The countess fell asleep suddenly when the portrayal was obviously not enough, and she was able to cast a mental seal after sleeping, and she became a pig's foot tool from then on. This is a mentally retarded pornographic anime setting, is it too lazy? A thousand words can be said in one sentence, the author is the God of his own world! Whether this world is colorful, where dragons and snakes dance together, or whether it is pale and nihilistic, a bubble that bursts as soon as you poke it, everything is created and constructed by the author✍

The author still doesn't know what his advantages are! There is no need to be lofty. It is best to limit your peak strength to one planet and then develop it slowly. Now too many people have forgotten this kind of track! Really, the good-looking things are often from the front, and the author doesn't need to go to this invincible track at all. There are more fairy bugs, more dragons, and more different animals and plants! The reason why Dalong died back then was because of his creativity and cultivation. Taking his time and introducing us to the fantasy world is the right track for the author!

After reading Chapter 35, I can't stand this paragraph. The protagonist and the countess are having sex, but the lady suddenly wants to transfer her property. She doesn't want to hand over the title to the Changxiangtao family, and she also wants to use the family's wealth to train the protagonist. This gives me a sense of immediacy, like using the original wife's money to support a lover after an affair, or the partner's lover embezzling the husband's family assets together. In short, no matter how innocent and pitiful the author writes about the Countess, after reading this, I can't like the protagonist and the lady. She looks very inferior and characterless. Maybe there is something wrong with the author's writing in this paragraph. All in all, it feels bad and inexplicably disgusting.

You still don't understand your advantage, it's not being tall or being a woman (to be honest, the female characters you write are basically a pile of shit💩), your advantage is western fantasy like farming (Elf Bug series, Gemstone Metal Dragon)

How dare the little sunflower steal the throne of the sun god? 😎

Don't you find it embarrassing to write about these wings? Purely disgusting people. A routine that has not changed for thousands of years, I open my mouth and shut my mouth, I am the sun, I am the savior, I am so embarrassed that I get goosebumps when I watch it

After seeing more than 200, the author started to get sick again. This baron became an earl without doing anything. You said that it doesn't matter if the protagonist is granted the title after the founding of the country. Now I can't stand the viciousness of the writing, so I originally planned to book it all.

At present, I think Dalong and Tanedian Lianwu are the two best-written books, but it's a pity that both of them are unfinished. Have you made money and stopped thinking about writing? I didn't take the harem route in the past, but this book just opened a harem. Books that open a harem will definitely die.

It's too complicated and messy. The three main plots of farming, elves, and dragons are enough to last you a lifetime. If you have to create a bunch of messy skills and occupations to work part-time, it will be useless for advancing the plot. The lightning strike technique you learned earlier will be useless in the next hundreds of chapters, and the power system will be messed up. The combination of a priest and a knight to form a knight of light was acceptable, similar to a paladin, but later on, a part-time ranger was given a headache, and I immediately lost the desire to continue reading! ! ! The most indispensable thing for the development of farming in the extraordinary world is time. If your protagonist always becomes invincible after two or three years, and the development of your territory and subordinates cannot keep up, you will completely negate the system and characters you wrote in the early stage, and it will inevitably be unfinished in the later stage.

I read the introduction, and it's not a work of painstaking effort. This makes it difficult for me to handle it.

It's a bit unsettling, so it's over, 1 million words. . . But at least the author couldn't finish the book despite having so few subscriptions. It's terrible. It's not as interesting as the book you cut off in half. I read more than a dozen chapters of that book and planned to keep it. After a while, I lost it. This book is just killing your personal IP. Look at it. It's a story about farming with an elf and giant dragon. In fact, it has basically nothing to do with it. There is basically no description of farming. Not to mention the death of the big dragon, even the warm dragon is far inferior. Maybe the author felt that the book would be really doomed if the eunuch himself was in the vest, so he bit the bullet and finished it.

This author always wants to become a god with one book, but he can't stand it if his grades are slightly worse in the early stage. Maybe it's because he was too good at it. I hope this book won't become a eunuch in a few days.

A handful of good cards are played badly, and there is no one in the fantasy category. Even if you change the settings and play traps, it won't be like this.

After reading the first few pictures, I feel that the author's writing is strange. Mainly in terms of writing tone. I feel that he is teasing the readers as if they were children. It is too childish and does not have the sense of Western fantasy that people can get into at a glance.

After all these years, the writing method is still the same. It used to be very new, but now it is lost to everyone.

If it weren't for spending money to buy more than 400 chapters, I would have given up on the book. Writing about stallion under the guise of writing about farming. At least a third of them are about women, ugh😮‍💨

This book has become so cold that no one has commented on it. Is it good for the author? The world view is not as warm as the dragon world. Why does the world view become smaller and smaller as the setting becomes less and less? Is the author messing with Quan Qin? The unfinished toad does not behave like this.

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I saw in the comment section that the author only writes about women and not about farming... Hehe... Now I have to taste the saltiness 😁

Is this still the same person? . .

After reading this book, do you really think you wrote "The Great Dragon Dies"? The more I write, the more I go back

I hope the author will not create a separate track for the protagonist, and just use the warm dragon. The three stages of evolution of the phantom beast brought the order of the entire world to the ground, and it was impossible to control it in the later stage. So many of the later chapters also had the problem of outrageous golden fingers, and there were also problems with the character's personality. Each one contained one or two particularly disgusting things. Don't let him join the protagonist group, thank you

The warm dragon protagonist spends most of his time riding a petroleum dragon, but it's not a real dragon and it's not very satisfying. I rode Shadow Flame for half the time, but this was almost the end. Xiaomenglong, the real dragon that belongs to the protagonist, can only be ridden in a dream, which is so uncomfortable to watch.

In fact, your brother Yuhan is just like that. Halfway through writing, I entered an endless loop before I finished reading the free version. The extraordinary system has always been written poorly. How about referring to other authors for the next book? The system is obviously good, but the key points are lame. And if women are not good at writing, write less.

Farming is good, but what you grow is not nutritious.

Author, you have to hold on, you can't be a concubine anymore.

Returning to a familiar subject matter, I feel significantly better. Hope this gets written down. I will read it every day.

To put it bluntly, the level of the dragon knight, or the fourth level, is set too low. It would be great if he could be like a god after his ascension. A god is a god, no matter how close he is, he is still an ant.

Originally, the setting of Never Die was very high-end, with the sun at its disadvantage, but the author had an idea and set the ending of Never Die as a little Karami, and the sun actually became invisible in the ending.

Endless Shennong, come out! ! !