Witch's Anatomy Notes

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I'm S... No, this is a hundred! (You are not allowed to write ´ᯅ` in the introduction)

Emotions accelerate too quickly and awakening is too deus ex machina. From fairy grass to food in an instant, what's the point of getting into the meat show so eagerly? If I want to see meat, I won't go to Blue P. Why am I watching the author dancing in shackles here?

The beginning was pretty good, but it just went off the rails. Lily should not be the main core of this book, after all, this is not an urban daily light novel. The world view is weird and exploratory, and it can be embellished with a little emotion, but if you don't grasp the relationship between the weight and the main plot, it's overturned again. If you have this problem for several books in a row, you should learn how to deal with it. After all, you make money by writing books. It's not shameful to learn whatever you want. You can get into a niche market and your basic writing skills are not bad. Your writing is obviously not interesting.

I thought the writing was good at the beginning, but the genetic resonance part was a bit too abrupt and awkward, and the progress was too fast and I was caught off guard 😅, which ruined the impression for me.

The emotional scenes were obviously written much worse, and all the plots from the moment the princess came out seemed rushed.

Inexplicably, a meaty scene was introduced. Does it mean that there would be no other world without meaty scenes? There is a sense of weakness that the protagonist is waiting to be raped, which is totally unacceptable for this world view.

Chapter 55 and after that, I suddenly started to do it strangely more than once while on the run, it was so disconnected. Reminds me of Twin Cities Season 2, when Cupcake and Vi suddenly started having sex in the cell. Could it be said that this is a common problem when writing about lesbians?

I personally liked it before leaving the tower, but after that I kind of...

I think this book should be on a female channel, because the female protagonist is more interested in women and makes more money.

The main problem with this book is that the main tone changes too much around chapter 50. The first fifty chapters give people the feeling of being precarious and nervous that they may not survive tomorrow. After adding the object, it instantly becomes relaxed and daily. These are two completely different novel styles, and the result may not be pleasing to both sides. The other thing is that the pace of the novel is a bit slow. If you want to write good grades, you should speed it up. The first 50 chapters are quite attractive. I look forward to the author's next work.

The emotions in this book were not handled well. The one with Dorothy was obviously handled more delicately than this one. The emotional line of this book ruined the tone. The author started to create a dark but hopeful worldview. As soon as the emotional line was written, it immediately turned into a book with a dark background but a happy plot like Commissar Kane.

The character portrayal is still too flat, I can barely read it. At least it's passable without the otaku smell in the male video Lily

😢Author, you should write the entire outline before writing a book, and then arrange the borrowed things in a row. The previous book borrowed from Disha Seventy-Two, but the original writing failed. This book borrowed from the Death Wizard Notes, but the original writing collapsed again. It's not that you can't learn from it, but you have to merge the two things. Now, water is water surface and surface, and they don't match up at all.

Our novels are in decline...

It is true that wizard novels rarely write about this, but the logic is the same when it is replaced by fairy tale novels. Mortal rulers who have a certain status are from aristocratic families who have repeatedly produced high-level cultivators. However, if they have no inheritance and no high-level cultivators in their clan, they will not have any say. What is the situation in the wizard tower? Consumables are dying in batches. Why do these nobles have the confidence to communicate with wizards on an equal footing? They are more useful than the consumables in the tower. They should be respectful and fearful. Don't bring the impression of Medieval literature with you.

It's different from the previous work. I suddenly started buying meat. The mystery I wanted to see was destroyed.

This book is excellent both in terms of the structure of the characters and the actual plot, but there is only one big problem in the worldview. The worldview written by the author is extremely awkward. First of all, since the author writes that the plane is preparing for war, a large number of wizards must be needed. Then this group of wizards with extremely high productivity should not leave the bottom alone or even create some kind of slavery. Instead, they should increase productivity to greatly increase the population base to produce more official wizards, star-ring wizards. Secondly, as we all know, power mainly comes from violence, so why do these nobles with no extraordinary power become nobles? The author did not use the traditional setting of a common gathering of immortals and heroes without aura, but created some kind of organization to stipulate all this. I really don't understand their reason for doing this. Overall, the biggest flaw of this novel is that some of the female characters are apolitical. But since the author has submitted his book to a male channel, please improve your world view. You can even find someone to create one.

As the title says, the heroine will make a gorgeous appearance in a few chapters. Do you have any comments or suggestions? The original setting is: Ophelia Beckett (nickname: Phia)

It seems that the author's recent performance is not very good. Let me make a few points. The first one is off topic. From the beginning of the Death World to the present, is there even a little bit of anatomy content? Still thinking about your mortal play house? Still spending a lot of time writing? Omit what needs to be omitted and focus on the key points, okay? You are a wizard-style person who has chosen anatomy as your own theme. What are you writing now?

Why do you feel like you have to be like last time, intermittently, and then nothing?

Md, I found that I have stepped on all the author's books 😒

The first 50 chapters are really good, but the second half feels like there is no outline and I have written everything I want. The two paragraphs about the princess and the competition in the middle are a bit unclear. Once I entered the death realm, it felt okay, but the speed of expansion of combat power was a bit outrageous.

This classification is wrong. Symbiosis and machinery are body-transforming wizards, and elementalism is elemental wizards. Anatomy is a single subject rather than a school of thought! How do you fight after learning anatomy? You can't fight. You can only use the knowledge of anatomy to advance to other schools and learn other spells. Both the physical symbiosis and the mechanical factions need to learn anatomy. This classification is nonsense. What about the classic transformation system and the summoning system? It is nonsense to list anatomy as a separate school.

Have you signed a contract? Can I give you a reward? Unfortunately, I don't have a monthly pass.

The plot of the Death World felt too rushed. The protagonist was still an apprentice, and he was immediately involved in a god-level battle. The method was too simple and crude. The chief judge felt no different from a wild monster. If you participate in high-end combat too early, what should you do next?

I thought I would stop updating, but why won't I write again in the future...

At first I thought this book was really good. Maybe it was because I read too many junk books on other platforms. I thought this book was at least okay. Except for the heroine developing too fast, I thought it was acceptable.

Sure enough, it was cut again. Is this the third or fourth book? But this cut is too fast 😥

Not much, update soon