Girl, Please Kill the Demon.

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I have to say that it has been a long time since I was so interested in a transformation novel. It was very comfortable to read. The last time a transformation novel was written by Cang Yue was similar to transformation. You can still write this kind of book in an era when transformation is dead. My friend, you are the real hero.

I just saw a gay friend come to my door, and I want to make a suggestion. In male videos, try to write female characters next to female protagonists. It's not that you can't write male friends. It's just that if the number of male friends exceeds the female, or there are too many scenes or the relationship is too close, it will make people a little scared.

I don't want to write an invincible story that overwhelms the understanding of combat power, but from the moment I fight the insects, the protagonist behaves like an NPC in the game. He is very busy, but he doesn't know what he is busy with. The protagonist's self-confidence is inexplicably high after killing a few little monsters. Regardless of whether they are gods or ghosts, they are going to be reckless first. Being reckless can only rely on the sword to save the situation. What should I do if the sword is not there? Run then relies on external force to solve this copy. It can be said that my hard power is very low, and my reputation is all based on being abusing food and riding a car, including Chongben. Without Taoist priests, I can't open a altar, but without Taoist priests, I'm just waiting to die in it. This so-called Qingshu, the difficulty of the tasks is cross-level, the rewards are reluctant to give out, and the task description is a mess. Rather than saying it's the protagonist's fault, it's better to say that the protagonist is its chosen worker. Then there is Zhang Yanben. I can't figure out what the role of this character is? Does he want to avenge his family or simply wants to drag a few more people to die together? Why do some people think that team fights push other people's buttons, and they are expected to win team battles? And the most disgusting thing about this character is that he is purely self-interested in the end. He doesn't think about why his wife died and he didn't contribute at all. He doesn't think about how to avenge his family. What is he thinking about? Ah, if you can't kill this boss, then let millions of people be buried with me. And what is the description of Zhang Yan's death? Why can such a selfish guy, who thinks nothing of his own problems and only thinks about harming others, have a "good death"? Man, I can't tell you. Anyway, I saw this at 2 o'clock in the morning and it was already red. As long as it is changed to "Zhang Yan knows that his wife is dead and wants to avenge her, but the old demon is powerful and the official does not do anything, so he can only rely on himself to gather some powerful people to eliminate the demon. Then they gather together, complain, return other people's equipment and join the team together, and then die as the main character, and finally his wife comes to hell with him." This kind of plot is old-fashioned, but useful. I don't know what the later books are like, but after reading this Zhang Yan book, I really have no interest in reading it any more Do you feel that the protagonist is not strong enough and she has been working as a nanny? Do you feel that every book is disgusting and the rewards after completing the book are poor? Do you feel that the protagonist keeps getting stronger, but then becomes deflated after abusing the food? Do you feel that the protagonist is not lacking in highlights, but you just can't feel happy? It can be seen that the author likes to write high-difficulty novels. Starting from the insect novel, they are all difficult novels, and none of them can be solved by the protagonist on his own. The difficulty is no problem, but the rewards for clearing the difficult version are poor and the method of clearing is not eye-catching. Oh, I won't talk nonsense. Maybe some people will say that I teach authors to write books, but I found this book at ten o'clock. When I first read it, I thought I had found a treasure. Then at two o'clock in the morning, I saw Zhang Yanben at the point where it was just released, which should be refreshing or meaningful, so this basically pure emotion was output.

Has the author really polished the plot? It doesn't matter that the special department in the previous tomb robbing task couldn't bring weapons on the plane, the archaeological team went to the tomb to destructively excavate, and the sense of deja vu of the seventy-two changes in the earth does not matter. Did Zhang Yan write this plot to make it difficult for readers or something wrong? It is presupposed that a very fast thief stole the protagonist's sword, and also stole various border defense maps, heirlooms and other things to lure people to save people. The thief's childhood sweetheart in the official love affair was covered up by him, which almost led to the death of his life. In the last chapter, in the blink of an eye, the wife turned black and was blackmailed by the protagonist. In the end, he got his wish and died together with his wife, and the protagonist and his gang risked their lives to wipe his butt. It's not what you wrote. What story do you want to tell? What do you want to express? Others make readers feel frustrated because they want to express their emotions first, or to express some emotions or thoughts. You are the protagonist and his companions who were slipped away for more than ten chapters and then given a reason to fight the monster. It is purely suppressive. Are you on the same level as before it was released? I was really speechless, I had a lot of hidden words in my chest and I couldn't spit it out. At first I felt that it was the same as Disha 72 Transformation, but the difference was in the characterization and plot. However, as soon as it was released, readers were confused, thinking that you were a replacement or undermatch of Disha 72 Transformation, but it turned out that you were the Iron Fan Princess transformed by Bajie, and the pig's feet were exposed as soon as it was released. Others imitate Oreos and they are Oreos, but you make a whole Oreo. I can't tell whether you did it on purpose or if your level is like this. I hope you can maintain this score. I can't stand it anymore.

Dude, what you are writing is about transformation, not the female protagonist, and certainly not a female channel. Don't give in to emotion and plot in everything. This would only make people feel retarded in a male channel.

I skipped the thief and stole things, and I just finished reading the volume Hanban. I feel that this system is more harsh and stingy than the infinitely terrifying Lord God. Every time, my life hangs by a thread, and then a consolation prize is given out. And he is still a pure Riddler with a messy mission description. Infinite Horror can at least know in advance what the next copy will be and who the opponent will be.

I have read almost all of them, except for Zhang Yan's book. I didn't want to eat it at the beginning and skipped it. Therefore, I should be considered to have a say in some issues in this book. 1. The upgrade is not systematic and scattered. I have managed to maintain my spear skills, but my other abilities are scattered here and there. It is neither a certain skill nor a certain career panel. The current text effect is that at the end of each copy, there is no integrated ability improvement, or further development following a certain ability system. The popular Paradise of Reincarnation, The Devil's Cage, and Li Risheng's book Black Lantern Xia Huo are all considered this type of novels, or in other words, the routines, you can refer to how others arrange them. The start may not be so fast and systematic, but it must give people a sense of coherence. I don't think the coherence is enough in this book. 2. Non-physical power The gap between the enemy and the protagonist only has a few non-physical props in hand, and it feels like reaching the sky in one step. I personally think Yufeng is not a strong response and cannot solve the problem. A reckless man hits a mage, but there is no guarantee that he can resist or dodge 100% and get close enough to hit him on the head.

There are bugs in the plot of the novel, and many monster removal novels have this kind of bug: there are monsters outside the city! The government can only control the cities, so how do you solve the problem of grain production? In ancient times, the grain-producing areas were all in the rural wilderness. Controlling the grain-producing areas by monsters is actually equivalent to being besieged. Sooner or later, they will starve to death. If ordinary people starve to death, the upper levels will not be able to escape (if the bottom layer of the pyramid collapses, the upper levels will not be able to escape either).

Shennong is here. Free chapters are good grass, you can chew them to relieve boredom. As soon as it was put on the shelves, it was a mess, and all the good impressions I wrote about it were lost. Isn't it better to feel dark... The level design, hitting a monster back and letting people escape without being hurt is really messy. Is there an air wall on the opposite side?

It's not clear what rewards the protagonist gets, and the power system is unclear. And everyone else wants to see the protagonist getting stronger and stronger, but in the end, you are dead and no matter how awesome you are, you still have to send two peanuts. So what's the point of this plug-in? With these two points in mind, no matter how exquisite your writing is or how good the plot is, you still won't be able to retain people. After all, the audience limit is only that.

Long time no see, I've seen your success I've made a lot of progress It's pretty good

I'm afraid some people won't read the introduction, so I'm going to explain it here.

The more I look at it, the more disgusting this setting becomes.

Brother, the title you chose focuses on slaying demons and slaying demons. The readers you attract are here for this and transformation There are no problems or poisonous points about transformation, but there must be problems with the focus of this slaying and slaying demons After reading the latest chapter, you need to set up a Zhang There is no problem with Yan directing the entire plot of the dungeon. How can I not mention his characterization? It is enough to pass the level. If it is not written well, it can be understood and forgiven. If the plot has a bad point, it seems to be reasonable in the plot, so it is okay, but brother, we should at least distinguish the priorities, right? During the release period, you have always written a guiding character, which makes people feel that he plays a very important role later, and then what? One day after it was released, the emotional climax of killing Zhang Yan has not yet been triggered. It feels like the plot is still laying the groundwork. The poisonous point could have become more enjoyable, but it was spoiled by such a delay In the end, Zhang Yancao died, and the emotional feedback given was completely unworthy of such a long article--to be precise, such a long time-- If you had been on the shelf on the day it was released Just write about killing Zhang Yan, and then the killing will be longer, and finally the emotional feedback will be stronger, and the killing of the demon king will be left until the next day, so that there is enough expectation. There is no problem at all. The most is just a curse, but if you want to write more detailed, then it must be right. I guess the readers just want to persuade you to be more concise next time What is the situation now? In the past two days since it was released, I have been promoting the pursuit plot. Because of Zhang Yan's plot, it held readers' hearts but did not give enough emotional feedback. The final feeling is, why are these people so ink? Why is the protagonist so useless? Why is this Zhang Yan so disgusting? Why haven't you killed him yet? I came to see slaying demons, not these insects! What dancing, what discussion, I don't want to see it, I want to see a battle, a hearty battle! Usually you don't say anything in the introduction, but man, this is the release. A character who stepped on the poisonous point has been whetted for two days, and it took only two days to give an emotional explosion. It has not yet exploded. The more readers read, the more extreme it is. That is completely understandable. You see, you are anxious... Summary: The plot is a small problem, the arrangement of the plot is a big problem, and the attractive battle was not released within the critical day of release

The concept of a godly thief can steal the protagonist's spiritual magic sword, the treasure of the town, and the army's defense map. It doesn't matter whether he is a master or not, he can take out his backhand and run away, and he can't catch up to the pursuit of soldiers and horses.

It's not that the protagonist's problem of being an afterthought is getting worse and worse. It has been like this from the beginning to now. Author, have you thought about it carefully? This is really uncomfortable

First of all, why does Zhang Yan think that his wife can survive after he leads to the right path? Can revenge be avenged? The article said it was for revenge and to save his wife. There were two purposes. If he takes the right path to seek revenge, he will definitely not survive in the end. If he succeeds in the right path, his wife will die, and if he fails, he will most likely have a hard time. In short, saving his wife will definitely not be achieved. Thinking about it the other way around, if he does not take the right path, his wife will survive, but he will not be able to take revenge Only one of the two goals can be achieved Think about it again, why does he think that the right path will fight with the little demon king? If there are enough righteous paths introduced (there seems to be a lot in the article), it would be better to kill the demon king smoothly, but it can only achieve the goal of revenge If it is troublesome and risky, why does he think that the righteous path will not trade with the demon king? In the end, his wife may die, but he cannot live, and his revenge has not been avenged Well, in the end, Zhengdao can really kill the demon king smoothly. He cannot live, his wife cannot live, and the demon king naturally cannot live either, and he can only take revenge This speculation It feels like Zhang Yan not only put the people of Qingzhou in danger in the end, but the ending is also very likely to be imperfect. The two goals cannot be achieved at the same time - unless the protagonist clearly wants to save his wife In the end, the protagonist saves his wife because of his face. Isn't this a bad life? Wouldn't it be better to use this honor to order French fries and learn martial arts? If in the end those people in the martial arts world and the court (especially those who serve in the court) are suddenly filled with the atmosphere of the world, it will be worse than the previous one who forcibly conforms to modern values ​​without regard to the background era. After all, I can barely explain it personally, what else can such a group of people explain? Why does it bring harm to her family? Why does she have to live a bad life even though she has done nothing wrong? Next time, does Zhang Yan know that the protagonist will protect his wife? Are you sure? Dare to bet? He had really thought about the outcome of this plan, and it felt like he came up with it in a flash... - It couldn't be that Zhang Yan still had a trump card and could let his wife escape in front of a demon king and a bunch of righteous and righteous blockades, right?

The pace of this book is much better than the previous one. The more I write, the better it gets.

It's nice to read. It has no shortcomings except for the slow update. It's written more smoothly than the previous book and the author is capable.

You... Do one small practice every three days, and one major practice every five days, right? This almost catches up with the rest frequency of 3 days fishing and 5 days drying nets. Can we guarantee an average of one update per day? Even if you take a break, will you add one more chapter later?

I don't know what to say. It's originally pretty good. Even if some people think it's not good because of the writing in the middle, it doesn't matter. Not everyone will like the novel. Some people don't like to read the four major classics. Why does our online novel have such high requirements?

It's good to read, and it's a rare piece of writing so far. There's no back-and-forth gender entanglement, and there aren't all kinds of embarrassing emotional dramas. The writing is smooth and supportive.

I was quite disappointed. I was too busy with work some time ago. I planned to read the rest in the next few days, but then I saw the notice of discontinuation. Unfortunately, I didn't have the time to read the rest.

After abandoning it for a long time, I looked back and couldn't help but sigh. Zhang Yanpian's dissatisfaction is the beginning. In reality, heaven and earth may be unkind. However, in the novel, a good person who is forced to have no choice but does not receive a good reward or even a good death - the perception is greatly reduced. Even an important supporting role cannot be saved. What kind of people are you saving? Save those background passers-by? I originally thought that the setting of this book was to focus on modern times, with ancient times considered as modern copies, used for cheating and improvement, and ultimately to show off one's skills in the modern world (which is cool). However, the more I looked back, the more I realized that this book really lives up to its name. It turns out that in modern times, it is about leisure time, while in ancient times, killing demons was the focus. Half-dressed, it feels like playing a game, without any sense of immersion in ancient times. Besides, I don't know, who likes to watch demons slaying? Constantly slaying demons and demons, are you playing Monster Hunter? Which of you can feel where it feels better? The author's writing style is online and he is the best in writing about transformation. He suddenly came to a dead end and it would be better to get out in time.

Come on, come on, bite the white pigeon with wisdom teeth🕊️

In fact, I think the length of the Gu Insect chapter is quite good. Although the previous chapters are also good to read, I feel that they are a bit sparse and unsatisfactory. Then I got to the Gu Insect chapter, and the content is also very exciting. I fell in love with this book from then on 😍

I never imagined that updates would stop~~

I haven't published a new book yet, it's already March