A Witch's Anatomical Notes
女巫的解剖学手记
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 325k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Mystic Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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Synopsis
Stats
152Chapters
8kRecommendations
12.6kFans
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All eyes are on me, I have an announcement to make!
I'm an S... No, this is a yuri (lesbian) story! (I can't write a synopsis ´ᯅ`)
Emotions accelerated too quickly, and awakening felt too mechanical and deus ex machina. It went from being a top-tier read to just mediocre. What's the point of rushing into explicit scenes like this? If I wanted to see explicit content, why wouldn't I go to a less popular site? Why am I watching the author dance in shackles here?
Restructuring
The beginning was quite good, but it went off track. Yuri (lesbian romance) shouldn't be the main focus of this book; after all, this isn't a light novel about everyday life in the city. The world-building is about the bizarre and the exploratory, and a little romance is acceptable, but you didn't manage its balance and relationship with the main plot well, and now it's backfired.
I felt the beginning was well-written, but the gene resonance section was too abrupt and awkward; the pace was too fast and caught me off guard 😅. It somewhat ruined my reading experience.
The romance scenes were noticeably worse; the entire plot felt rushed after the princess appeared.
Chapter 55 and onwards, it suddenly and strangely begins with them having sex while on the run, and not just once—it feels so disjointed. It reminds me of the second season of Twin Cities, where Little Cake and Vi suddenly start having sex in the prison cell. Is this a common problem in lesbian storytelling?
The inclusion of explicit sex scenes is completely out of the blue. Does this mean that isekai (another world) stories wouldn't exist without them? It gives off a weak, submissive vibe, like the protagonist is just waiting to be forced into a relationship, which is utterly disrespectful to the world's established lore.
I personally quite liked it before leaving the tower, but then...
I think this book should be published in the female-oriented category because the female protagonist is more appealing to women and earns more money.
The main problem with this book is that the main tone changes too drastically around chapter 50. The first fifty chapters give the feeling of tension, like you're living in constant fear and not knowing if you'll survive tomorrow. But after the addition of the romantic partner, it instantly becomes a lighthearted, everyday story.