A Witch's Anatomical Notes

I'm S... No, this is a hundred! (You are not allowed to write ´ᯅ` in the introduction)

Emotions accelerate too quickly and awakening is too deus ex machina. From fairy grass to food in an instant, what's the point of getting into the meat show so eagerly? If I want to see meat, I won't go to Blue P. Why am I watching the author dancing in shackles here?

The beginning was pretty good, but it just went off the rails. Lily should not be the main core of this book, after all, this is not an urban daily light novel. The world view is weird and exploratory, and it can be embellished with a little emotion, but if you don't grasp the relationship between the weight and the main plot, it's overturned again. If you have this problem for several books in a row, you should learn how to deal with it. After all, you make money by writing books. It's not shameful to learn whatever you want. You can get into a niche market and your basic writing skills are not bad. Your writing is obviously not interesting.

I thought the writing was good at the beginning, but the genetic resonance part was a bit too abrupt and awkward, and the progress was too fast and I was caught off guard 😅, which ruined the impression for me.

The emotional scenes were obviously written much worse, and all the plots from the moment the princess came out seemed rushed.

Chapter 55 and after that, I suddenly started to do it strangely more than once while on the run, it was so disconnected. Reminds me of Twin Cities Season 2, when Cupcake and Vi suddenly started having sex in the cell. Could it be said that this is a common problem when writing about lesbians?

Inexplicably, a meaty scene was introduced. Does it mean that there would be no other world without meaty scenes? There is a sense of weakness that the protagonist is waiting to be raped, which is totally unacceptable for this world view.

I personally liked it before leaving the tower, but after that I kind of...

I think this book should be on a female channel, because the female protagonist is more interested in women and makes more money.

The main problem with this book is that the main tone changes too much around chapter 50. The first fifty chapters give people the feeling of being precarious and nervous that they may not survive tomorrow. After adding the object, it instantly becomes relaxed and daily. These are two completely different novel styles, and the result may not be pleasing to both sides. The other thing is that the pace of the novel is a bit slow. If you want to write good grades, you should speed it up. The first 50 chapters are quite attractive. I look forward to the author's next work.