Mortal: Proficiency Cultivation

Your starting point is that Han Li has a cold nature and is indifferent to emotions, and then Han Li is serious-minded. You said that you shared your cultivation experience twice, and then suddenly stopped talking. Han Li felt that you were deliberately hiding your secrets, saying that he was too thoughtful. He also said that Han Li in the original novel was not too sad about Zhang Tie's matter, but was emotionally indifferent. To be honest, you are carrying a lot of private goods. This kind of beginning really persuades you to quit. My impression of Han Li was that he was a foolish boy with no eyesight in the early stage. In the middle and later stages, although he became more thoughtful and acted mainly to protect himself, he was not cold-natured and thoughtful. Compared with most immortal cultivators, his moral level is still above the horizontal line. Han Li didn't take the initiative to backstab his companions for profit. At most, he took a few steps back to observe that something was wrong. The best thing to do was to run away first. When writing fan fiction, don't include too much personal stuff.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the protagonist (the author) is really stupid. He is such an awesome plug-in, but instead of practicing martial arts, he only practices the Immortal Cultivation Technique without any offensive power. This Immortal Cultivation Technique does not practice spells and magic weapons. It is so useless that he is not as good as a mortal who only practices martial arts. Has the author forgotten that Mo Juren is just a mortal who knows martial arts? As for Mo Juren's martial arts, the protagonist stayed in Qixuanmen for five or six years. During these five or six years, he could easily kill Mo Juren by using plug-ins to practice martial arts, right? As a result, the protagonist has reached the fourth level of Qi Refining, and is still being manipulated by Mo Juren, so he can only make plans on his own. There is nothing that can be done against Mo Juren, and he is always afraid of being killed by Mo Juren. Don't tell me that there is a soul of an immortal cultivator in Mo Juren's mind. This soul is useless and cannot run out to kill people. So whether the protagonist of a novel has an online IQ depends on the author's IQ.

Why do they write that mortals are short of resources, etc. Then why not just go to the back where the spiritual energy breaks out, and then go to practice under the sea near the seal. There are several top-quality spiritual stones everywhere, and aren't they the same as top-level spiritual veins? Then work hard until the statement comes out. Is there anything else that can't be accomplished?

When Luan Xinghai takes Ling Yuling as the Lord of the Star Palace, the human world will basically have no shortage of resources 🪖

You said it yourself, if you don't care for yourself, you will be punished by heaven and earth. Just kill Han Li and kill him with a gun. Now it's easy to kill him.

If you download the dungeon, you will gain something. After doing so much bullshit for a long time and getting nothing, why are you writing this dungeon so disgustingly?

You wrote the protagonist so awesomely, why do you always stick to Han Li to write it? Why don't you just go further and open the map yourself? How can I be so careless and despise others for being childish every day?

You've already written three books, why do you still write like this? There are so many private articles and they're boring, just like a running account! The character design of the protagonist also needs to be described as high and mighty, so just write it directly; if he wants to be a lowly person, he should develop it honestly! The four characters written are not as disgusting as the Douluo protagonist who has a dark heart!

This copy is terribly written. No benefit was gained. Suppressed everywhere. The old devil was not so aggrieved even in Xutian Palace.

This is the first book about the protagonist Nangong Wanhe playing a three-player battle with Han Li

Pfft hahahahahaha

The front was fine, but when I saw that I gave Han Li the Ascension Token, I didn't want to see it anymore. I could exchange it for spiritual stones after selling it, so I gave it to him directly. He also said that he couldn't get into Han Li's heart. You are a big man. He doesn't want to see you, but you still want to lick him? Who is the hero? When I read fanfics, I want to see the pretentiousness slapped in the face. If the original author is licked for everything, I might as well read the main text. What kind of fanfics are there?

This copy was written in a suffocating way, and there was nothing exciting about it.

I do everything with Han Li, and I won't be able to write without Han Li.

I saw the latest, and I would like to express my personal opinion The rhythm and writing of the previous writing are very good, although there are some minor flaws, but the flaws are not concealed. It's just that when it comes to Chaotic Star Sea, it's a bit confusing. You may have a golden finger to create achievements in novels, but you have no experience. You can create realms that Leng Chuang doesn't have. Even if you have Qing Yuan Sword Jue as a reference, the thing you create has already jumped out of the Qing Yuan Sword Jue framework.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       <br Write a book. At the very least, write down the levels. You can't just say that my technique is awesome. It just needs to be better than the original version. First of all, when people read your book, they read it as a fan. Their first preconception is to use the original work of a mortal as a benchmark. If you want to write something of your own, you must write well and describe some things vividly and make people believe. Then talk about achievements. Let's talk about the most basic thing. Superb ones all say that the formation is powerful. You should first give a reason that you can make people believe, and then say that my sword element is more powerful than the Dageng sword formation.                                            In order to integrate various natal magic weapons in the later plot, I just created a Tongtian Lingbao, 5 sets of exercises, and an Immortal Vine, but it is understandable. I originally thought that you would use spiritual techniques and parasitic vines to create more clones, and train the clones to gain proficiency to strengthen the function of the golden finger, but the magic weapon you created is really huge. To put it bluntly, it is still a sword (there is only one), and your Dayan Jue is no different from Bai Lian. Appraisal, if you can see it in the early stage, it will be cool if you fool around like this in the later stage.

The liver is so bad, fighting with the same level is so strenuous

Just let the author suppress his cultivation and randomly change the original work

1. The combat power collapsed, and the spirit world became a god and merged into one. 2. The Dan Formation Tool Fu Yu, the cultivation system has no levels. 3. In the spirit world chapter, the combat power in the later period is chaotic, the tribulation period has been cut off, there are ordinary Mahayana periods everywhere, the human Mahayana period is not separated into measurement units, the division of true spirits is also messy, and the true immortal Ma Liang is even more outrageous. 4. In the human world chapter, the relationships and personalities of various characters are very well described, but not in the spirit world chapter. 5. The heroine has too few roles, and the heroine is just a passerby, and she doesn't appear as much as Yin Yue. 6. In the later stage, the strength of the protagonist's enemies is somewhat forcibly improved. The fish shop owner, the fusion stage and the thunder beast fusion are comparable to the strength of the Mahayana stage. The Sakura Fairy of the Spider Clan in the Shura World controls the laws of time and space. 7. The most awesome heroine in the spirit world chapter is Baohua. She has several Xuantian treasures, such as the Ruyi Blade, the Thunder Slip, the Xuantian Treasure Tree, and the Xuantian Domain. 8. In the human world chapter, there are affectionate people, Xin Ruyin, Qi Yunxiao, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Wen Siyue, who sell themselves to save their father Gongsun Xing'er.

Playing high profile in a rubbish sect like Yellow Maple Valley is just seeking death.

No! I just started reading it a few days ago. At that time, it had more than 700,000 words and was being serialized. It was quite promising! Result? ? ? ? The author pulled a big one? ? ?

I felt numb halfway through reading it, and had a strong feeling of "forcing myself to express my sorrow for the sake of writing new words".

Alas, I saw Chapter 139! Just give it up! What I wrote before is fine! It's just that the main character is acting too mother-in-law. The life of a eunuch.

Nascent Soul is coming soon, the author is about to finish 🙂

Name: The wizard who traveled through the Eastern world

Everyone is numb! Just write about the human world? Are you kidding me? 😒😒😒😒

Overall, it was pretty good, with more than enough food and grass. Some book friends say that the front part is a bit toxic, but I feel it's okay. Maybe I forgot about the front after reading the back 😰🤭

The 138th book I read and purchased on December 21, 2025, the first one ranked second and the fourth one ranked top two.

There is a shortage of books, so keep writing books. Author

Now it's really about generating electricity for love, right?

This book is very comfortable to read, better than most mortal readers. Some book friends emphasize character issues, but I don't think it's a big deal. I'm just here to watch the story and plot, as long as the arrangement is roughly reasonable.