I Am Struggling to Master the Proficiency of Being Able to Penetrate Ten Times the Lifespan of a Mortal.

It's too much to persuade me to quit, it's a fanfic, this is a fanfic The protagonist is a time traveler, it's so embarrassing, so inconsistent, a mortal transplanting a dragon scale fruit with bare hands.

Boiling a frog in warm water? The content I wrote went by too slowly. The front is okay, but the back feels particularly boring.

After reading for a while, I have some thoughts and thoughts that I would like to express. Mortal fan fiction has seen a lot of settings that are self-justifying, demon modifications, eclectic and different directions, etc. In fact, they cannot avoid the contact with Old Demon Han. Relatively speaking, I think the author's way of getting along is more appropriate, but the mortal plot is not compact enough. Of course, the author said that you developed it according to the plot in your own memory, but now it seems that you have not used enough power to add plots, especially the unimportant small dungeons and plots. The writing is procrastinating. It is quite interesting to read at first. People with obsessive-compulsive disorder have a kind of magic and interest that attracts readers. Thinking about the original sentence of "Ten years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully young people, suppress first and then increase" has made many books popular. In essence, readers will be drawn in and get a sense of satisfaction. So the characters at the beginning are attractive and the climax of subsequent plot conflicts can be developed around this point. The protagonists written by Xionglanggu and Foxtail both have psychotic traits, and there are many interesting points developed around them. The core of the novel is always the refreshing newness and secrets. To make readers happy, it doesn't matter whether you set loopholes or the fan plot is insufficient. However, I see that mental illness is hardly reflected in the plot now. In the fight, the obsessive-compulsive disorder is not committed, and the magic is not committed, and then it is just hard work and separated from the mainstream plot of mortals. It is boring and boring to watch.

Well. This disease would really kill someone in the world of immortality. With no background and no connections, I am seeking death. There is no justice for you not to die. I don't want to read Jiang Zhiwen

Obsessive-compulsive disorder, mysophobia, and obsessive-compulsive disorder. How do you survive if these three diseases are extremely serious? Obsessive-compulsive disorder: If it's mild, it just makes you feel uncomfortable. If it's severe, you can't control yourself. You're very strict with your own affairs and often have thoughts about others. If it's extremely severe, how do you live for so long? Mysophobia: A crowded environment, spittle when talking to people, living environment, etc... Too many Coerced paranoia: In daily life, you can disguise yourself when interacting with people, but natural disasters, man-made disasters, novels, comics, animations, movies in recent years, etc.... What should I do with these? Is there anything you can tell me? Very curious🙂🙂🙂

Is obsessive-compulsive disorder a neurological disorder? After seeing the description in the book, this is mental illness! In the future, you should stay as far away from people with obsessive-compulsive disorder as possible!

Neurosis is neurosis, it must be written as obsessive-compulsive disorder. . I looked at the six pictures, and the more I looked at them, the more speechless I became. Is it because the exercises cannot be cultivated until the Taoist ancestors stop practicing them? ?

Introduction to poison! The protagonist's character is not likeable! It really disgusts me to say that cultivating immortals should be a legal profession! I am a typical Eastern chauvinist who looks down on Western things. Wizards, wizards, and cyberpunks are all rubbish to me!

Your pace is slower than that of the original novel. You write so many chapters about martial arts training in the Qixuanmen. It's still boring content. It's hard to read. I'm also writing a novel, and I plan to write a mortal fanfic for my next novel. I just want to see how many people will follow your writing like this. Anyway, I can't stand it.

Ten times the longevity, do you want to start the game with Han Li? Why do you think Han Li has transformed into a god and ascended, are you still in the golden elixir stage?

Extremely poisonous, the protagonist has top-level obsessive-compulsive disorder, and everyone must spoil him. Shennong is dead💀

Regardless of priority, are you writing about cultivating immortality or martial arts? The protagonist hasn't officially started yet? Please rewrite it quickly!

This book is finished as soon as you read the introduction.

The author's book has a very good subject matter, but the protagonist has found the wrong direction for his obsessive-compulsive disorder. Among mortals, the farthest and strongest direction of effort is to become an immortal. All you need to do is work hard in that direction. The protagonist must practice one martial art to the top before practicing the next one. You can also do it. You have to have the top backstage to protect you and slowly lay the foundation. The basic skills you practice are also the top in this plane. You are from the bottom and you are in a mortal gang. You also know that this is the mortal world of immortality. There are practitioners. You just have obsessive-compulsive disorder. You are not a fool. You definitely know which direction to work hard. This is because the outline is wrong. It is a detail that the author must pay attention to when writing novels in the future.

The logic of the protagonist's behavior in Xutian Temple is so speechless. In order to guide and intersperse the plot, the protagonist was inserted abruptly, as if the protagonist was particularly nosy. Is it understandable that Xutian Cauldron is forced to retrieve the treasure? What the hell is he doing if he lets Han Li go? The fortune teller said that the protagonist can live for a thousand years, so can the protagonist be able to jump into any trap?

I'm really speechless. Is this a fellow mortal cultivating immortality? Who is a cultivator who writes dozens of chapters of inexplicable martial arts? It's still the kind of thing that's inexplicable even in martial arts, and the plot is dragging and meaningless.

Has the character changed? Taking a beautiful woman on an adventure? Back to the old ways again? What about proficiency? Can't walk when you see a beautiful woman? I thought I could get away from vulgar taste, but I didn't expect it to be another traditional article on how to pick up girls, and a harem?

There is no reason for his poor grades. There is no need to keep emphasizing his obsessive-compulsive disorder like this. It is too deliberate and has no sense of substitution. He just feels that the protagonist looks like a psycho. Who would read a novel and be willing to see a psycho?

What can I say after reading the first few chapters? To put it nicely, it means concentration, but not to say it means iron-headed boy. Every trivial matter is more serious. If you want to plot against the protagonist, focus on the character of the protagonist. It is so targeted. The one who has the strength to cultivate immortality among mortals is not Lao Liu. The author does not suppress the obsessive-compulsive character of the protagonist. The growth of the protagonist is to develop into a cool novel. If the author suppresses the growth of the protagonist, no matter what the protagonist does, he will develop in the direction of a little master who commits suicide. If he does not work hard at cultivating immortals, he will smile on the banner of thousands of souls. The plug-in for the protagonist is to double the lifespan of the sixth one. Instead of doubling the number of lives, it will be the same as being stabbed.

After reading a few chapters I can't stand it anymore. I don't know why I have to create such a character. I feel disgusted and disgusted with my family and friends. Why don't you learn all about boxing? Obsessive-compulsive disorder? Obviously, with the system in place, I feel like I can do whatever I want and let myself go.

I would like to ask, after the protagonist can practice internal vision, he sees that his internal organs are asymmetrical. Is it necessary to force symmetry? There are also advanced exercises that should be more efficient and have a higher upper limit. After cultivating the low-level exercises to the upper limit of 10, and the advanced ones to 100, the upper limit will still be 100. So why don't you use low-level ones instead of high ones? If you have obsessive-compulsive disorder to this extent, then you should force symmetry if you have internal asymmetry and then take it away.

I took a walk and found it a bit poisonous. The same goes for obsessive-compulsive disorder. It's there when you need it, and it's gone when you don't need it. . Not to mention the power system, the talent and resources of the protagonist can be improved so quickly, and everyone is a dragon among men. What's the use of the plug-in's lifespan?

If you have a psychotic protagonist, how do you let readers take on the role?

The results of this novel could actually be better, but it ended up killing me

This protagonist is a psychopath.

Garbage characters are indeed what everyone said. The first impression given to people is that of a sick person. In reality, such a person can be completely defined as a person with severe mental illness, complete lack of social skills, and severe obsessive-compulsive disorder. The obsessive-compulsive disorder itself shows that the person concerned cannot control his own behavior through will.

In the past, there were two chapters a day, although there were few words. Why is the update unstable now?

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, the key point is that the dog meat is still half-cooked carrion, which is highly poisonous!

This book is quite good, but it's a pity that it ends hastily at the end.

You, please explain the situation 😥