Ordinary People: Start with Self-Created Physical Training

First of all, let me talk about the setting of the author. The idea is very good and he also works hard to describe it. However, it may be due to lack of experience that the writing is very contradictory and confusing, giving people a sense of awkwardness. This reading experience is very unpleasant, like driving on a bad road, bumpy and bumpy from beginning to end. If you have time, you can read it, but to be honest, the author might as well go and refine it. This book does not make people feel happy. There are also many bugs in the settings and evolution routes of the plug-in, and the logic does not match. Overall, no one will take the novel seriously, but the combination of several major problems directly reduces the quality of the book.

Physical training? You can refer to the three ancient clans of Xianni for this. The settings of the three ancient clans of Ergen are really good.

I prefer the current style. The self-created skills can be self-explanatory. It is not the kind of power that I am thinking about. I hope I can keep it.

I think the chip is really not as useful as the monk brain in the later period.

It's hilarious to see modern technology. The monk has hundreds of millions of thoughts in one moment. Can your technology keep up with the monk's spiritual consciousness? Laughing to death.

A good article about cultivating immortals must be written without spiritual roots, and it is necessary to practice physical training with flesh and blood. Can't you analyze the writing of immortality with AI assistance? I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw Huang Maple Valley. He kept talking about his physical training, and he didn't explain whether he had spiritual roots. Isn't it good to write about cultivating immortals normally? It's a headache even if you keep writing about physical training.

To put it bluntly, the author wrote about the protagonist embarking on the path of physical cultivation just for the protagonist to become a physical practitioner, and the physical cultivation among mortals is not a substandard product like the author who cannot even engage in martial arts training. In the later stage of physical training, the power of Xingchen, the power of Qi and blood, the power of frost, the power of Geng metal, the power of earth, etc., And even the power of incense and faith can be used to refine the body. Why does the author insist on not cultivating internal strength? What is the use of hard work? Mortal human body cultivation is not purely hard. It also has "qi" in itself, but it cannot live forever. Moreover, physical cultivation is in the spirit world, and there are countless creatures who have passed through the immortal world. Later, they are not looking for heavenly materials and earthly treasures to cultivate the immortal way. The mortal world where Chaoli is located is a desolate place where even ascended monks cannot escape. What capital does he have to practice physical training?

What did you write after arriving at Chaotic Star Sea? I was skipping the whole thing, and I was writing about your physical training the whole time, which made me dizzy.

Mortals already have physical cultivation, right?

It can be said that the first few dozen chapters are all useless. Mortals have physical cultivation, but it consumes a lot of resources and is difficult to get started. There is no need to create it on your own, and dozens of chapters are useless. Maybe you will say that if you can't get the skills in the early stage, isn't it just a way of practicing martial arts? You have to veto it, you veto martial arts, and you want to create your own. Do you think that for tens of thousands of years, you are the only one who is so good in the world of immortality? The higher the level of people in the world of immortality, their brains are no worse than quantum computers. They awaken their consciousness at the fourth level of Qi training and have photographic memory. Will the physical cultivation methods created above the divine transformation stage be inferior to your own creation? Everyone says that the author is in trouble. It is reasonable for you to write about how to get the fragments and how to get some exercises that can be used for physical training at Qixuanmen, and then continue on the road. But it is not reasonable for you to deny martial arts. Your setting is so awesome, why are you still interested in the blink of an eye sword manual? You have a chip, so it is not ready-made, but you still can't change it. It is not a physical training method.

I took a closer look at the front, but jumped to take a look at the back! This book feels like a dead end! (I don't know what other Taoist readers read about the fairy tale books! I like the mystery of Taoism! The world is colorful! The story is wonderful! The setting logic should be stricter!) In the World of Immortal Dao, this book has almost completely isolated the system of Immortal Dao Dao so far. It has no system and is stuck to it! If it weren't for the great Korean thighs! I guess it's cool Look at a fellow cultivator like you, you didn't even get the whole flower out and you knocked yourself to death! I guess if it was an original creation and the world didn't have the halo of being a fan, it would have been a long time ago! But it's soon! If you don't follow the heavenly mind, it's difficult to achieve the great path! Haha 😃

It's a pity. What kind of writing about body cultivation? If I write normally, it might become popular.

Han Li has completely become a tool for the protagonist to produce medicinal materials. Apart from producing medicinal materials, he doesn't see any use, and Han Li has no story of his own. The protagonist got in touch with all the female characters that Han Li originally wanted to get in touch with, and Nangong Wan even fell asleep.

The path is written crookedly, no matter what, you can try Dragon Snake, Yang Shen's system, spiritual martial arts, Yang Shen martial arts and immortals

A strong person doesn't need to steal other people's opportunities. If you steal other people's opportunities, that's not called a strong person, that's called trash.

The system is not clear. It is all about violent collection of essence, energy, blood, and body training, which consumes a lot of resources. It is not step-by-step, like the Yangshen system. It is better to do simple gravity exercises, compress the body density, accumulate enough Qi and blood, break through and use the Qi and blood oven to forge a golden body, the resources are small, and it is safe.

Create your own technique? That requires constant broadening of horizons and repeated drills and demonstrations, otherwise there will only be emperors carrying manure with a golden pole!

It's quite boring to follow the plot. It should be renamed "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality: Han Li and His Bodyguards". To be honest, what's the point of practicing the Qi to fight against the Talisman, then beating up the Mo Jiao, and then going through the plot with Han Li after building the foundation? The monthly pass is for you, I flashed it....

It is difficult to copy the protagonist's kind. After ascending, it cannot be passed down at all. Even if it is passed down, it will not be as good as the protagonist's. It is difficult to pass it down. How can it be called the first line of physical cultivation?

Will rich people panic because they have too much money? Do you know if you will take advantage of the original work? Why don't you come here for free? Still looking down on Han Li's opportunity and Xiao Ping? You are noble, why don't you die? You don't dare to compete for the greatest opportunity in both the mortal and spiritual realms, so what use do you have? Even eating porridge can't keep up with the heat. This is the premise, this is the basic point of logic. Others who want to succeed need to dance within this framework. Who are those people who compromise with the so-called Taoist of Time? The road travels alone. If your future height is not as high as that of Time Daozu, then won't you always be lower than others? Are you worthy of being the protagonist? If you are higher than the Taoist of Time in the future, then that's it. Even people lower than you can hook people across time. There's no reason why your future body can't do it. If you can't do it, just get off the plane and let someone who can do it come on.

I laughed when I saw the title of this book. I promise I didn't read a single word of the content 😁😁 It is said that it would be impolite to complain without reading the content, but I couldn't help it. I just said how thin the spiritual energy in the mortal world is. You even came to practice body training and created your own? ! Hahaha

It's a pity that such a good mortal fan novel 😭 This is a fan novel comparable to "I'm a Mortal Scientifically Cultivating Immortality". Originally, as long as you go beyond the human world and go to the spiritual world, it will definitely become a hit. Science Cultivation of the Immortal Human World and the Wonderful Spirit Realm started to feel a bit awkward, but the Immortal Realm chapter was a little better. It was only after he survived the Human World chapter that he became popular 😐 Hey, this book is too poor to subscribe to 😢 I feel sorry for the author

What do you say in this book... It's the protagonist's evolutionary system... The protagonist has always said that he wants to spread it out so that humans without spiritual roots can practice... But later on, he created a stitch monster for those humans to cultivate and become neither human nor demon 😅 Readers know that the protagonist's system mostly relies on mind pieces to cultivate... Couldn't the protagonist give the road that has been traveled apart from the current state a good framework for the road ahead, lower its difficulty threshold, let the humans practice, and then let the humans themselves perfect it?

Readers spend money and you show it to everyone?

I hope the author will not specialize the characters because of the original work, especially Nangong Wan. Do you even want to recreate the plot of Nangong Wan's injury? Otherwise, what is the meaning of Nangong Wan's existence! Disgust some viewers? And there is Xin Ruyin. Decades of companionship are not as good as an accident. Speaking of accidents, there is another question. You can set the protagonist to skip and read the original work, but is the setting too easy to use? No matter how important the original plot is in the original work, he knows all the plot information you need him to know, and he doesn't know anything he doesn't need to know in the original work, no matter how important it is. The representative of this is Mo Jiao Nang, this thing is simply Yue Lao's red line, and it's right once it's exploded. The inner demon in Xutian Palace is her! To bind two characters through an accident, I can only say that if you don't know how to write it, you don't have to write it.

The system created by the protagonist of this book is a mystery. I have already read the twenty-seventh chapter of the second volume. Although it is set in 1.0, 2.0, And 3.0, It is always enviable. The improvement of the protagonist is like a pure superposition of power, and there is no hierarchy setting. When you reach a higher level, why not go back and sort out the system path? Being able to reach 3.0 Shows that the road has been basically mature. In addition to the 3.0 Stage, ordinary people should set a clear hierarchy for it at the 2.0 Stage to better understand the structure of this new system framework. Just like the Immortal Qi training stage to the foundation building stage... What is the result of sublimation of each realm (level), but after the protagonist reaches a high realm, he does not sort out the system path he came from, just like he just keeps upgrading regardless of it, and what is the skill that the protagonist practices, or is it the Holy Elephant Skill and the Food Transformation Skill? There is also the classification of skills into each realm, which has always been a mystery

The author's new book is not as good as his old book. It's a piece of shit. I still subscribe to your old book because of the loss. I'm still chasing you when you publish a new book. You write too much about feelings, and you also criticize Han Li. You have double standards. I'm speechless.

As a fan of mortals, I recommend to all fellow Taoists high-quality fanfics such as "Mortals Begin to Seize the Body of Mo Juren", "Mortals Cultivation of Immortality Begins from a Casual Cultivator", "Those Years When Mortals Become Demons", "I Cultivation of Immortals Scientifically among Mortals", "Mortals Cultivation to Immortality: Mortal Immortals", "Mortals Fight Monsters" Upgrade I want to live forever" "Mortal I traveled a little early" "Mortal Immortality" "Mortal I am Tianlinggen" "Mortal I am Li Tianzun" "Elder Brother in the Mortal World" "Mortal Demonic Flames Towering to the Sky" "Mortal I Li Feiyu Attribute Cultivation to Immortality"

Fellow Taoists, please remember to share!

Is this the end? ? ? 😰😰😰