The True Immortal Duobao

Your cultivation technique is too easily obtained and too easily learned, making it unreadable. Try writing more realistically, from the perspective of an ordinary person. I think novels focusing on ordinary people are very popular on Qidian right now; the genius/trash trope is outdated.

Chapters 68 and 69 have a poorly arranged plot regarding the female ghost. The female ghost jumps out to do evil, but is guaranteed by the protagonist and escapes punishment. Then, the female ghost breaks her promise and is untrustworthy. Moreover, the person who was kidnapped is the protagonist, an ordinary person who would have died long ago.

Following readers' reminders, the overpowered cheat system is prone to collapse later on. Therefore, some settings will be implemented for the cheat system. First, it will have a cooldown period, meaning it can't be used anytime, anywhere. Second, as the user's strength increases, the cultivation techniques, magical treasures, and pill formulas granted by the cheat system will also become more powerful.

"When poor, cultivate your own virtue; when successful, benefit all under heaven!" The ancients were truly wise! Limited power, insufficient status, always trying to stand out, always hitting walls. You have a cheat code, but you haven't established yourself. All sorts of petty people befell you—you deserve it! As the saying goes, ghosts fear wicked people, and petty people are like ghosts!

Shinto realm: Unranked (ghost soldiers, ghost soldiers). From the ninth rank, clerk/official; ninth rank, land official; from the eighth rank, wandering deity; eighth rank, merit officer. From the seventh rank, judge; seventh rank, county city god. From the sixth rank, assistant prefect; sixth rank, deputy prefect. From the fifth rank, chief judge; fifth rank, prefectural city god.

Well, it's mostly narrative with little plot, it's a bit sleepy 😪, and the plot progresses slowly!

Do words possess energy? Shouldn't we reflect on life, understand its essence, and prioritize morality in our personal conduct? Is the consensus we share correct? What are your thoughts on spirit and life? What are your thoughts on life and morality? "Great virtue carries all things," right? Shouldn't we learn more about morality and culture?

After reading four chapters and flipping through the table of contents, I discovered a problem. Why does the protagonist keep encountering problems after transmigrating?

I couldn't continue reading after chapter 30; the writer actually went into the mountains to cultivate.

The subplot involves the protagonist swapping bodies with Wu Xiucai; Wu Xiucai is now in the modern world, while the protagonist is in this world.