The True Immortal Duobao

Your skills are too easy to acquire and learn, so they are no longer readable. It is better to write more realistically and put in the perspective of ordinary people. I think novels from the perspective of ordinary people are very popular nowadays. The flow of geniuses and waste materials has become outdated. Ordinary people add a little chance. The protagonist can be very worldly and selfish because he is just a layman. It is impossible to become a saint after time travel. Just like what is often seen on Douyin, he can't get along well in China. How can he become a great person in the United States 😂😂

Chapters 68 and 69, the plot arrangement of the female ghost was not good. The female ghost jumped out to do evil, and was vouched for by the protagonist without punishment. Then the female ghost had no credit and broke the contract. Moreover, the person who was kidnapped was the protagonist, an ordinary person who died long ago. Because the protagonist did not follow the normal situation and took the hostage, he should be driven away by the ghost. It can be said that he saved the female ghost, but she backhandedly betrayed the protagonist and made the protagonist take responsibility. In this plot, it seems that the protagonist repays evil with kindness and helps the female ghost, but in fact, the protagonist sees small profits and forgets the righteousness. He is cowardly and soft-hearted rather than kind. If you have a little power, you will drift away, abuse your power, and think of yourself as the boss of Qingtian.

After being reminded by readers, the golden finger is too powerful and will easily collapse in the later stage, so I plan to make some settings for the golden finger. First of all, it should have time to cool down, so it cannot be used anytime and anywhere. Secondly, as the strength becomes stronger, the skills, magic weapons, and elixirs given by Golden Finger will also become stronger.

If you are poor, you can benefit yourself; if you are prosperous, you can help the world! The ancients never deceived me! Your strength is limited, your status is not enough, you stand out everywhere, you hit the wall everywhere, your golden fingers are wide open, but you don't stand up, all kinds of petty things happen to you, you deserve it! As the saying goes, ghosts are afraid of evil people, and villains are like ghosts! If you don't give the kid retribution, what's the point of having a golden finger? A scholar accuses a candidate, and a county magistrate steps on a candidate to get a higher position. That's great! 😎😎😎

Shinto Realm: Not in the flow (yin soldiers, ghost soldiers), from the ninth rank of scribes/can be called officials, from the ninth rank of land, from the eighth rank of wandering gods, to the eighth rank of meritorious officials.         From the seventh rank judge, the seventh rank county god. From the sixth grade, Tongjuan, from the sixth grade, Tongzhi. From the fifth rank, Daban, to the fifth rank, Fuchenghuang. From the fourth rank, the chief judge, to the fourth rank, the capital city god. From the third rank, he has a long history, and from the third rank, he is the imperial envoy. From the second rank, he is a counselor from the five directions, and from the second rank, he is a traveling envoy from the five directions. From the first rank, left and right Prime Minister, to the first rank, Emperor/Tianzun. In the Heavenly Court Shinto system, Earth God belongs to the lowest ninth-grade priesthood. On the land, there are the mountain gods of the eighth rank, the city god of the seventh rank, and the above priests ranging from the sixth rank, the fifth rank, the fourth rank, the third rank, the second rank to the first rank. Starting from the sixth level, the priesthood has become more numerous and complicated. The sixth grade includes four levels of merit, thirty-six heavenly generals, sixty years of gods, thirty-six heavenly stars, seventy-two evil stars, clairvoyance and wind ears, Jiujiang water emperor, and five lake gods; The fifth rank includes the Four Marshals, the Thunder God and the Lightning Mother, the Dragon King of the Four Seas, the Great Emperor of the Five Mountains, the Five Dragon Gods, the Five Water Gods, the Curtain General, and the Ten Palaces of Hell; The fourth rank includes Jiu Yao Xing Guan, Four Spirits, Twenty Eight Constellations, and the Four Heavenly Kings; the third rank includes South Dipper Six Star Lord, Big Dipper Seven Star Lord, Five Star Lord, Erlang True Lord Yang Jian, Zhenwu Great Emperor, Three Altar Marshals Nezha, and Tianpeng Marshal; The second grade includes Wen Zhong, the nine-day Yingyuan Thunder Universal Heavenly Lord, the three-qi fire star king in the south, the righteous god Luo Xuan, the purple-qi king in the north who always sits in the Kan Palace, Doumu, the righteous god Jin Ling Shengmu, Shui Dexingjun, the three official emperors, the ten-direction heavenly master, the four heavenly masters, and the tota king Li Jing; As for the Jade Emperor of Haotian Golden Tower, also known as the Jade Emperor, he is the supreme being of the three realms, transcending the ninth and eighteen levels of the priesthood.

How can I put it, it has more narration and less plot, which makes it a bit sleepy😪, and the plot advances slowly!

Do words have energy? Is it necessary to think about life and understand the nature of life? Is personal behavior primarily moral? Is the common perception of most of us correct? Spirit and life, what do you think? What do you think about life and morality? Being kind and generous, right? Do we need to learn more about moral culture?

After reading four chapters, I flipped back through the table of contents and found a problem. Why does the protagonist keep encountering problems after traveling through time?

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 30. I wrote about it and actually went into the mountains to practice.

The body of the hidden line is exchanged with Wu Xiucai. Wu Xiucai has arrived in modern times, and the protagonist has come to this world.