Mount Shu: The Zhi Immortal Seeks the Dao

The first half of the chapter: Senior tells you not to leave the cave unless you become a loose immortal. The second half of the chapter: Go out for a walk during the festival.

He is also a strange person. He is obviously not strong enough and prefers to go to places with a lot of things. Obviously you can't beat them, but you still stay at home and wait for them to knock on the door for the second time. Also speechless.

I saw the protagonist after his transformation, because he had no clothes on his body, he risked his life and stupidly went to the temple to steal clothes. This kind of idiot. It's strange how such idiots can exist, you shouldn't seek to increase your strength. Learn the means of protection.

When writing fan fiction, innovation is a good thing. However, the character traits and timeline in the original work cannot be written upside down, otherwise there will be a strong sense of fragmentation. Why is Xun Lanyin's character so domineering, and Shen Xiu has turned into a sonorous girl again? Baoxiang is still innocent, let me go, he is a slut to begin with! ! ! At the beginning of the Ming Dynasty, old man Xuexue should have ascended long ago.

Not suitable for old bookworms, the logical thinking in it is hard to explain in one sentence. Not to mention that the spirit transformed into a monster and dared to go to the temple to steal clothes after it was confirmed that he had extraordinary powers. We already know that the world of Shushan Swordsman is a big world that can deduce, confuse, and disrupt the secrets of heaven, and the network of cause and effect spreads all over the heavens in it. It is really reckless to rush in and hunt for treasures without getting the secrets of heaven and earth. You have met Emei people many times, so why don't you think more about it? What do they have in common? They have so many things in common, but they themselves are nothing more than a treasure.

This is really it, brother, you smell so good!

The logic written in it is all nonsense. This is just to contend with the Emei sect. It is said that the Emei sect is domineering, but at least Emei can only suppress evil ways. Look at what is left, they all do not treat people as human beings.

Not ruthless enough, decisive enough, too literal-minded!

The character setting is obviously very novel, but the author's writing is too poor and the protagonist is too stupid

The protagonist dares to go out and hang out even though he knows that he is Tang Monk's meat. How reckless 😰