Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Eyes of Fate

The martial soul sharingan is written in the introduction. Don't you want to trick readers into reading the sharingan?

If the author has a next book, he would suggest either a person with a small talent and a small background who can lead the system, or a person with a big talent and a big background. You two are piled together. Uh, so invincible.

If you adoptive fathers have any thoughts or criticisms, please tell me. The author has a good attitude, and as long as his family is not involved, he will basically be fine. The heroine can also ask for what she wants, but Ma Xiaotao is exempted. The ending of this character is doomed from the beginning.

If there really is a "pie in the sky" cheat (system), then why bind a mediocre character, a waste that is even inferior to ordinary people? If it is such a good thing, who will get us normal people? So I would rather believe that the system is just a bait for some kind of existence, a "parasite" that domesticates people into puppets. The system issues tasks and the time traveler completes the tasks, which is actually training and assimilation. Still the same thing, if there really is a god-making tool called "system", why should you be chosen? The popular point is: in Douluo Continent, there is no need to write system articles. Originally, Douluo Continent is just a fantasy floor tile, and the protagonist has to rely on the system to defeat Buddha, which feels very lame. The most important point is that the system will alienate the protagonist's efforts and abilities, because in the eyes of the reader, everything the protagonist has is given by the system, and the protagonist is of no use, just like a giant baby. In other words: "If this system is bound to a pig, it can also achieve this kind of achievement"

Generally speaking, the previous logic does not make sense at all. It is written that the main character's martial soul was broken because of Ma Xiaotao, but you have to consider the real situation. You were picked up as a baby, awakened twin martial souls, innately full of soul power, dual extremes, and ruined it just for an evil fire phoenix. You look down on Shrek's people. Isn't it better to train you than to train Ma Xiaotao? Moreover, Mu En is about to reach her end of life. Is it possible that he won't protect the protagonist? I must be mentally ill to cancel the double-click twin martial souls for an evil fire phoenix that I don't know when it will reach its ultimate limit. It feels like it's just to force a conflict.

Do you want to take a look at what you wrote at the beginning? The protagonist was picked up by Shrek, and according to what you said, it means that everyone in Poseidon Pavilion, including Mu En, knows about it. You said that Yan Shaozhe chose to sacrifice a genius who was adopted since childhood with an innocent life and full of loyalty for the sake of Ma Xiaotao? Yan Shaozhe dared to do this and smoke it like a top 😰. The stability of the sacred fire is obviously greater than that of the evil fire phoenix. The innate soul power of the Poseidon Pavilion elder and even the pavilion master

It's funny. Shrek is brainless except for Munn. Doesn't Munn have any brains either? The sacred and fire attributes are expected to reach their limit. The sacred attribute can restrain the evil soul master. Why doesn't Munn accept his disciples? Munn knows that the academy is going to die out. There is a sacred spirit that cannot be cultivated properly. He also agreed to remove the evil fire from Ma Xiaotao. The spirit is broken, a fool's plot.

It's really too bland, and the plot is also written in a mess. It can't convey the evil feeling of the Holy Spirit Cult, but it's written like a good one. The first 40 or 50 pictures are purely for self-interest, and the plot has no development. The Sharingan is written, the system is abstract, and the emotional scenes cannot be seen. The plot is practiced fiercely, and the characters are the same. But the author's attitude is indeed good, but the attitude behind it is really unknown. He was poisoned by the front. Who will appreciate it? Don't write casually. When I read your comment, it was just that my brain was crazy at that time and I didn't think much about it. This is not good. If you write a novel like this, it will really make people unbearable. The future is promising, look forward to the second book (show hands)

The pinnacle of multi-female protagonists, the school belle's personal master, you can go and see how natural it is for people to have a harem. You don't call it a multi-heroine anymore, you call it a moron 🙂

The writing of the real male protagonist is really a bit ugly. In his previous life, an innocent young man went through two years of torture. Not to mention that he has mental problems, it is not a funny comparison. Moreover, the writing is so crazy that it feels like he has never seen a woman before. The emotional handling was not well written, it was very blunt, not as good as a single female protagonist.