The Heir to the Kingdom of 1.4 Billion Citizens

No matter how good the author is in the early stage, he will be poor in the later stage. I will not ask whether the author can support this world view. I will ask the most basic attitude question - as an author, you have the obligation to write a complete ending. As the author of the starting point, you have the obligation to be worthy of the readers of the starting point. Readers have spent real money. No matter how bad your writing is and how limited it is, no problem, just cut off the foreshadowing and write a great perfection, and I will buy it. Do you understand? If you post a chapter about self-reflection and self-reflection, I will finish the rest instead of just cutting off the chapter just because I'm afraid it won't be good, and finally bring up the issue of illness to gain sympathy. I don't care whether your illness is real or fake, your attitude comes first. Finally, I hope you will recover soon, have a correct attitude, and don't let the characters down. This has happened in two consecutive books. Don't you feel guilty towards them?

110,000 words

The subject matter is novel, and the title of the book is also very eye-catching. The front part is quite satisfactory. I think it is very interesting starting from chapter 69.

Not bad. The first three pictures can persuade most people away. This is why Xixuan is not good.

I'm not talking about this book, I'm saying this, this book looks good and I like it very much I just commented a lot of comments I like the lofty ideals of the Chinese succubus I treat mortals like grass in fairy tales Remember the last time I wrote a review You are so powerful in the world of immortality. Why don't you let mortals live a good life? It's just a matter of moving your fingers, treating people's illnesses, building houses, and lowering their moral standards. It would be nice to have rain and let everyone have enough food As a result, a lot of people scolded me. I will write a book in the future. After the protagonist achieves greatness, he will add the rule that immortals must treat mortals well Now there are a large number of people watching the classic summoning of the Chinese succubus and their blood boils They promised to be kind to the lower class But they like to kill people and whole families at all times, and eradicate the roots Leave a child and still call the protagonist a coward ? ? ? The points are the same I don't understand Maybe I read too little But the more I read the comments, the more funny this world becomes I can only hope that the readers who like Chinese succubus and the readers who like to refine the Ten Thousand Soul Banners are not the same people Otherwise I am really worried about this The mental state of some readers You can scold me if you want, it's the feeling of reading a book and reading comments But I really can't stand a book that kills whole families at every turn and kills hundreds of thousands of mortals for a little thought So this book is quite suitable for my taste, at least the layout is much better than those things

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it's pure grass jelly, if it doesn't look good, I'll stick my ass out for you.

No more eunuchs! !

And unless you really rule the world in the future and live forever, or make a treaty that cannot be changed, it will be difficult for you to be promoted in this world, and you cannot expect to reach the level of socialism. At least civilians have the opportunity to be promoted and there are no slaves. Because this is an extraordinary world, and it is more difficult to achieve equality in the extraordinary world than in the technological world.

The more I look at it, the more similar it seems to me

The theme setting is very interesting. Everyone is considered a double cultivator. One entry represents identity and the other represents occupation. Identity entries will change with established facts. As for occupation, it is not perfect enough yet and has great potential.

This is very well written. Food included, food included.

I can write well, very well.

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I feel like the last remark in the introduction is mocking the Circle of Fate? 😂

No, this is too radical (), this is something that even the true gods of the old days couldn't do. We have to take our time, first establish rules for 🐔women, and then slowly improve 😥 (ps: Everyone apologizes here. I didn't note the source of the meme before, and I didn't play the meme well so that everyone can see at a glance which work this meme comes from. Everyone has caused unnecessary misunderstandings. This is my fault. This joke is based on a sequel to a certain novel. The protagonist group obviously has the power to destroy the world, but they feel that they cannot be too radical in dealing with the remnants of the feudal society. They have to take their time and improve slowly. When it comes to dealing with the issue of 🐔women, they chose to become madams and let official organizations endorse them to legalize and regularize 🐔women)

Crazy, how could this world exist without occult aristocrats and occult gangsters?

I really didn't expect that the book I was following would expose this melon

What you think is love is actually business, what you think is business is actually still business

"The mist in his eyes is better than all the flowers in the world to me." "Although I know the end, every moment in the process makes me yearn for it." "Plant a bouquet of violets in front of my grave. I still regret that your dress was stained that day."

This novel was attracted by the color red. However, the author's ideological level cannot support it. Strictly speaking, it is still the thought of Xiao Fu Zian. With such a big trick, so many people betray the class to help the protagonist, but the protagonist feels more like an aristocratic class with a little conscience.

Let's have a grand goal in front of you. In the middle, bala bala. People around the protagonist will always have backgrounds and identities. If there is evil around the protagonist, it is because others forced it. All those who can be saved are beauties. Beautiful girls. Japanese fairy tale light novels

Invincible cool writing, barely considered a period of growth, open to big,, huge, three views of a good person. The story and worldview are a little lacking in depth. A masterpiece that is not as good as grass jelly.

The subject matter is very good and the idea is very good, but unfortunately the more I write, the more wrong it becomes. The setting of "heir to the kingdom of 1.4 Billion citizens" itself carries huge narrative potential (the weight of power, responsibility, and a community of destiny), but the author wrote it as a light comedy of a small fortune and love affairs. It was supposed to be that everyone is the savior, but it was written as I am the savior. The narrative of "revolutionary aristocracy" - "Everyone is equal in words, but enjoys privileges in body". This is essentially a "progressive cosplay": the protagonist enjoys the dividends of feudal privileges (being served, respected, and followed), but it is packaged as a spokesperson for modern values ​​(equality for all, abolition of slavery). We can't see the pain of his true betrayal of his own class, only the pleasure of using higher privileges to crush lower privileges. However, this way of writing "Progressive Long Aotian" was indeed popular at the starting point (Wanding results), because it not only satisfies the sense of moral superiority (I am doing the right thing), but also retains the pleasure of privilege (I was born noble). The writing is okay, but it's different from what I originally wanted to read. I can only read it as a fun article.

It has both advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the setting is novel and interesting. The various super-standard gifts are very refreshing. The writing is also good. Sometimes you will be suddenly moved when you look at it. The shortcoming is that the protagonist in the plot is to liberate the mainland, but the author expresses the suffering in a very simple way. Basically, this and that one became a prostitute, whose wife was robbed, and hunger. Stealing women really runs through the entire article. You can write about it but you can't keep writing about it, right? If it doesn't work, search it on Baidu yourself. There is also the issue of updates. This author not only updates every day, but also often asks for leave. I am really speechless after waiting for a day to see the leave statement.

Maybe the facade can be taken care of at the beginning, but the secret will eventually be exposed. The author's ideological and political level is not enough to write a decent political analysis, let alone use it as a guiding ideology to build a framework for the novel. Writing hard will eventually reap the consequences.

I feel that the author has paid a huge price for this. Writing a book is not an easy task. He typed every day until he was bald. In the end, he ran out of money and accepted the ridicule of the entire Internet. After all, he is a college student who has not graduated yet and does not have much social experience. Everyone has to be merciful. I will continue to read the book. I have never read many novels before, and this one is quite interesting.

There is no woman in my heart, so I draw my sword to the God of Nature. What you wrote is still good. If you have money, all women will come to you. Calm down Update more Become a great god Make millions a month You will see a different world.

After reading the first volume, I didn't want to read it anymore. The front part is quite attractive, but the back part is already at the level of a persimmon novel. There is no central idea, the content is old-fashioned, the writing style is not enough, and the emotional drama is also very immature. What we want to do is obviously liberation, but in the end, we are relying on the power of the aristocratic class. How can we liberate the masses without going among the masses?

I have now read the ninth chapter of "The First Spark". Up to this point, the protagonist has not developed productivity, has not developed the economy, and has not followed the mass line. The route issue is understandable. If you want to follow the top-down transformation path of "Sword of Dawn", it is indeed very difficult for the extraordinary world to follow the grassroots route, but how do you delegate extraordinary power? There is no sign of it from where I have seen it. Could it be that you are counting on extraordinary beings to protect the interests of civilians on their own initiative? Or is it that if you give them a blessing, they will be grateful and loyal to you?

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