Douluo: Wuhun Longyuan Sword, I Have Become the Scabbard

There is no QQ group. QQ groups are all good.

I clicked in after reading the title of the book that said a man becomes a scabbard, and thought it was some new idea. The result is the old-fashioned Five Elements Yin and Yang, and I suddenly lost interest in the power system of this book.

Two original female characters were created, one was named Ling and the other was named Wei'er, and they called the protagonist "Quan". The author believed that this was a term of endearment after getting familiar with each other. This embarrassing name disgusted at least half of the readers.

If it is the Seven Star Long Yuan, you can follow the path of the Big Dipper Unlock one star every ten levels, and the seven stars will successfully achieve the true form of the martial spirit The eight and nine stars also have left assistants and right bis to fill in It goes well with the Douluo system

The plot of the two sisters feels like a failure

I really don't understand what the author did in writing about these two sisters in the early stage. Can something like whale glue be told to others? The two women have better soul ring configurations than the protagonist. If the second ring of the millennium is discovered by others, they will be caught, tortured, dig out the secrets, and then silenced! In what age are you still writing such mindless plots?

Is the protagonist the father of the sisters?

Many fans say that Chen Xin is very powerful, so why not Sword Heart, but Titled Douluo is not very powerful. Compared with his ancestors, this Chen Xin is just a bad teacher. He can't even do it himself, but he still teaches his disciples (other fans), and the protagonist is rushing to become a disciple.

It makes me laugh so hard. You've already written a fanfic, but you still created an original female character? Do you have the writing power to write?

The author has really seen Douluo Dalu? During the Continental Elite Competition, you took a walk around the Killing City. The competition is not over yet? Tang San stayed in there for three years before coming out? Why can you come out? Did you come out without a backstage?

I don't understand why the author insists on writing two original characters. Author, you are writing about a fan, why don't you pay attention to the original characters? What do you think readers of your fan fiction want to read? If you really want to create original characters, it's best not to write fanfics but directly write original novels, so I don't have to waste time.

After reading the book, I really think poison resistance is no longer weak, but this book really disgusts me. It treats the readers like monkeys. I really want to report this book. It's disgusting. Reason: The protagonist spent a lot of money to get the inheritance of Poseidon. Good guy, I just don't inherit it. I cheated for 100 chapters and let Tang San inherit it. Even if you replace Tang San, I won't say anything. The current practice is that we have spent money, been cheated, and tasted like shit. It's disgusting.

It looked pretty good at first, but until the story about the two sisters, I really didn't know what the hell was going on. If you want to create an original heroine, just do it, but it ended up with a pit-breaking plot, where you just picked up the bow and shot without saying a word, and then said that the old bear came to block it for love. I didn't say a word of bullshit, but I still said it was reasonable, and the result was huh. After chatting for a long time, I came up with a Wuhun swear. I was drunk. Wuhun swears. Forget it, I asked the woman to get a bow and chased her. Oh my God, what are you thinking? That is a bow, not a crossbow or a pistol. The weird thing is that it is really sandy. Alas, the impression you created earlier is gone in an instant. Forget it, I am too lazy to complain.

Attention everyone, the poisonous points of all Douluo fans are summarized: 1. Don't read anyone who travels through time and becomes the grandson of a certain character, because he can only describe characters and cannot use resources to improve abilities. 2. If the martial soul is awesome, the result is that the innate soul power of the first and second levels will not be the same. If you want to read it, the author can't grasp it and thinks it's a counterattack cool article. I've already shown you that it's a piece of shit. If you click in to read it, it's like eating it. Don't be curious and if you don't read it if it feels better later, it's like giving you a shot. You've dug gold in the shit and want to eat more. 3. You must have judgment. If you are blind, you will know that he has too many private goods. If you read too much, you will only make yourself angry! Hope this helps!

I don't know what the protagonist is thinking. Even if Tang San has other opportunities besides fairy grass, what can the protagonist do? Kill Tang San in advance and show off to the original protagonist every day without any disguise.

I really don't understand why it has to be like Japanese comics and has to add some kind of bondage or something. I'm really speechless. I'm deeply poisoned by Japanese comics, okay. His main plot and these things are his main plot, and the protagonists of Japanese comics have brain problems. Most are self-centered. Like Naruto. There is no problem with which one of the protagonists is Pirates. It's easier to fool at a young age. When I get a little older, I really can't stand it anymore.

The two original sisters are jumping to watch it. There are so many Douluo female characters. Isn't it enough for you to write? Fans can't understand it. The names of the two sisters have been changed to Maple and Ling. Maybe more people will read it. Farewell

I haven't read it yet, but I read the comments. . . Withdraw, Douluo is a sewer, why is it so hard in the sewer? ! ! ! Are you still playing high-end games like Five Elements? ! ! Wouldn't it be enough to become the king in just ten chapters? ! ! If you don't understand, don't write anything. The introduction also says to compare it with other fanfics. . . What's the difference for you? ! ! ! Fifty steps and a hundred steps are enough to laugh, hahaha 😅😅😅

The biggest taboo in writing fan fiction is to add original characters and focus on descriptions. To be honest, if you really had that ability, you would have written a new book a long time ago. Why write a fan fiction?

This book is written to help the male protagonist play a supporting role, while Wei'er is the protagonist. There are two attached soul bones, one soul bone of the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger, dual realms, a Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear Soul Ring, a Thundering Purgatory Vine Soul Ring, and a Dark Demon Evil God Tiger Soul Ring. The martial soul has evolved from a weak one to a god-level martial soul. Don't you think the author is a bit too far away to take over the title?

Things changed when I met two women. I gave them all kinds of licks, soul bones, and fairy grass, but most of them were still confiscated. It feels very awkward to have all kinds of mythical beasts, geniuses, treasures, and realms. In addition, the original characters don't have a strong sense of immersion, and the emotional system is not good or even non-existent, so it is very disgusting.

Can Hu Liena also become a god? Anyone can become a god now? I really can't stand it anymore

It's okay to write original and stunning works, it's okay to have strong talents and want to cultivate them, and it's okay to teach secret techniques. But what is the relationship between Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong? He is such a kindhearted person who wants to lead others to become gods.

What you wrote is bullshit. The pig's feet are so cowardly that they even gave Yazi San'er a soul bone.

I would like to recommend a book. New book: "Douluo: I will repay Tang San severely after my second rebirth" has been released. A new writer has updated 100,000 words. Please give me some feedback and leave your valuable comments. Thank you very much! 🙂🙂🙂

I don't recommend buying it, just check out the free ones earlier. When I read Chapter 105, I felt that the protagonists were the two women, and the male protagonist was the foil. This has put the cart before the horse. Let me give you a brief introduction to the two women at level 60. The first one is Ling. The soul ring configuration is yellow, purple, purple, black, and black, the ultimate martial soul. The second Wei'er is yellow, yellow, purple, purple, and black, a god-level martial soul, and our male protagonist has a yellow, yellow, purple, black, black, and gray top-level martial soul. The skills are simple, all are amplification skills, and none of them are attack skills. These are the protagonist and heroine at level 60. I really can't say who I am willing to watch.

After taking it, it's okay. It's Tiandou City. Is that spring water? It's okay to be stubborn, running around with howling, wearing a mask to change the color of its coat.

What the hell, you know it's Lei but you still carry it with you. Thank you for forcing it to happen

I'm probably going to meet the Beast God and his party.

I'm quite curious. Why do you want to announce the soul core? To announce it, you have to become a god first, right? Otherwise, your own foresight seems to have no advantage. They are all titled Douluo. One is a god test and the other is a self-created god.