Dungeon Life: Starting with Mutated Skills

If you're going to write so much for one assessment, you might as well just skip the dungeons and keep taking exams until you're number one in the world.

It's normal to cut it; it's mediocre, too much self-indulgence, and the writing is verbose. Two hundred thousand words of content could be done in ten thousand words by another author. Writing should cater to the tastes of the majority of readers; too much self-indulgence is not good for a novel's performance.

Ruthless and taciturn

Front row seats, I hope it doesn't end up being all outlines.

It's been over fifty chapters and the arena battles aren't over yet, it's so tedious!

To write a plot of about 10 chapters and turn it into 20+ chapters, with the map even set in a single village... Really... I only came to read this because it already had some success. How can you possibly keep readers engaged when you've only written 20 chapters? I don't even dare to dream of average daily subscriptions.

I don't know what the author was thinking. I'm not sure about the sales figures, but the plot was clearly well-written. Without a reputation, it's destined to be difficult for you to become popular early on. Besides, although your previous book was supposedly finished, it had a terrible ending. That was already bad for your reputation.

It felt a bit forced and pretentious; the first part of the story was written like a video game. Then the pretentiousness became even more obvious in the assessment section.

I've come to check out the new book; I hope it's long and detailed. 😁

If they maintain this level, the herb may still be viable!