My Computer Leads to a Life in the Dungeons

To be honest, the book has a pretty good concept, but the protagonist talks too much nonsense, has a strange sense of morality, and has unnecessary psychological activities. To be honest, it's 2024 already, and it's really not that many people still have to weigh things in their minds before killing a villain who wants to harm the protagonist.

The protagonist said this world is real, but it turns out that even the most worthless scoundrels can fight to the death without flinching, and they won't retreat even when they're completely wiped out.

Each section contains too much information, making it difficult for readers to follow along. Ideally, the dungeon should span two or three worlds. Keep progressing. I have the desire to keep up with the updates. There's too much and too much clutter. It gave me a headache later on. If you absolutely must set seven or eight, then ten or so worlds. It's recommended to choose a more traditional and familiar worldview, like the infinite flow genre. Readers will find it more relatable.

A one-pound hammer can crack a skull, and a six-pound spear can exhaust an athlete. Has the author ever fought in real combat? Who owns a six-pound weapon? Three minutes of fighting would be exhausting.

In the Middle Ages, a knight's horse was worth six oxen, chainmail was equivalent to one horse, a helmet to half a horse, a pair of leg armor to half a horse, and a sword and scabbard to more than half a warhorse. In addition, knights needed specialized equipment such as lances, daggers, short swords, shields, and bows and arrows.

This was written by a young person, right? They probably haven't been in the workforce much! First of all, if you take your gold jewelry to a jewelry store, they'll ask you to show an invoice or other proof that the gold's origin is legitimate. If you have nothing, aren't you just asking to be taken in for questioning? It's best to take your things to a pawn shop or a small jewelry store!

Chinese people often project their own country's situation onto foreign countries. In the US, when Mexican gangs die, the police basically ignore it unless they're threatening wealthy people. Especially in remote areas, nobody calls the police, and even if they do, nobody cares. Do they really think gangs are intelligence agencies? They'd be searching for people forever; they'd probably never find them anyway.

Seeing these scenes of the protagonist entering the village and encountering the mercenaries, I noticed a problem! The goblin camp that the protagonist single-handedly took down was something the village chief couldn't handle even with several mercenaries, suffering losses in the process! What kind of combat power do the mercenaries in the original world have? Why would they accept missions?

I only ordered two chapters, so I won't go into too many questions. In this web novel, padding the word count is a minor issue; the biggest problem is the protagonist's overconfidence that he is the protagonist and nothing will happen to him. The first instance involves selling gold jewelry of unknown origin while still possessing a substantial fortune. Was this gold truly gold? It's unclear.

Seeing the protagonist want to use the magical weight-loss technology from the dungeon to start a company making exoskeletons, I thought it was ridiculous. Something that can't be explained scientifically would get him summoned for questioning within 24 hours. Huawei had already applied for and received a patent for foldable screen technology before even releasing a tri-fold foldable device.