Opening a Branch School Next to Hogwarts

That's a big deal. If you open a school that's comparable to Hogwarts, but end up recruiting a Hermione, even if you teach Hermione to the point where you're awesome, it's not called a school.

The creativity is good, the writing is decent, and the logic of the characters' behavior is very fatal. Some plots are very taken for granted. In order to promote the plot, the logic of the characters' own behavior is very weak. It is the kind that will break down if you don't think deeply about it. In short, the lower limit is high but the upper limit is low.

The content is too short, and I feel that it is not expanded enough. It would be better if there were more. The disadvantage is that there is only Hermione as a student, and there is no plan for the course. There should be at least three students, and then divided into classes. The course should not be divided into classes according to the classification of Hogwarts, but according to the normal magic types. Use other novels and normal magic schools to compare the backward discrimination of Hogwarts. For example, 1: dnd, protection department, conjuration department, prophecy department, enchantment Magic system, evocation system, illusion system, necromantic system and change system 2. Arcane divine throne: force field system, element system, necromantic system, summoning system, alchemy system, astrology system, illusion system, change system, electromagnetic system, thermal system, light and dark system, in my impression The Arcane Throne is linked to Science, which is quite suitable for Hermione 3. The normal Western fantasy magic schools, wind, water, fire, earth, wood, ice, thunder, darkness, light and non-system magic, this feeling is so-so etc.

I feel like it's well written, but it's too weird to have only one student. It doesn't feel like teaching.

Rather than opening a school, why not open a cram school next to Hogwarts? "Defense Against the Dark Arts Tutoring Class" starts until Harry defeats Voldemort, and then you go directly to Hogwarts to apply for the Defense Against the Dark Arts professor.

. . . . Opening a school with just one student? Aren't you just recruiting an apprentice? If it is true that a school with many students is worth mentioning, just one student would be called a master-apprentice, and a master-apprentice system would be created under the guise of opening a school. . . Title party?

It's too long-winded. I don't know if the author wants to write about training or building a college. The current content is too watery. Dozens of chapters are still about one person, instead of how to discover the college. Why not just write about the cultivation of masters and apprentices, which is more interesting? !

Each chapter follows the title, and then is filled with chatter. This is not the sea, which is all water, this is the Milky Way,

It felt quite novel at first. After all, I had never thought about opening a branch. The portal of Marvel's Doctor Strange was okay and there was no conflict. The wandering swordsman and the Star God were added later, and I could bear it. However, the more I read, the more it became more and more verbose. It was just two people playing back and forth. I wrote several chapters on one thing. I watched Hogwarts, but the magic was gone, the main plot was gone, Harry was gone, Voldemort was gone, the big shit egg was gone, and the relationship was completely covered.

There are no major poisonous points, but there are constant minor poisonous points. After more than 100 chapters, there are basically no comments. It seems that no one has chosen to continue reading! The only good thing is that it is free of charge😃