Open a Branch Next to Hogwarts

It felt quite novel at first. After all, I had never thought about opening a branch. The portal of Marvel's Doctor Strange was okay and there was no conflict. The wandering swordsman and the Star God were added later, and I could bear it. However, the more I read, the more it became more and more verbose. It was just two people playing back and forth. I wrote several chapters on one thing. I watched Hogwarts, but the magic was gone, the main plot was gone, Harry was gone, Voldemort was gone, the big shit egg was gone, and the relationship was completely covered.

That's a big deal. If you open a school that's comparable to Hogwarts, but end up recruiting a Hermione, even if you teach Hermione to the point where you're awesome, it's not called a school.

The creativity is good, the writing is decent, and the logic of the characters' behavior is very fatal. Some plots are very taken for granted. In order to promote the plot, the logic of the characters' own behavior is very weak. It is the kind that will break down if you don't think deeply about it. In short, the lower limit is high but the upper limit is low.

The content is too short, and I feel that it is not expanded enough. It would be better if there were more. The disadvantage is that there is only Hermione as a student, and there is no plan for the course. There should be at least three students, and then divided into classes. The course should not be divided into classes according to the classification of Hogwarts, but according to the normal magic types. Use other novels and normal magic schools to compare the backward discrimination of Hogwarts. For example, 1: dnd, protection department, conjuration department, prophecy department, enchantment Magic system, evocation system, illusion system, necromantic system and change system 2. Arcane divine throne: force field system, element system, necromantic system, summoning system, alchemy system, astrology system, illusion system, change system, electromagnetic system, thermal system, light and dark system, in my impression The Arcane Throne is linked to Science, which is quite suitable for Hermione 3. The normal Western fantasy magic schools, wind, water, fire, earth, wood, ice, thunder, darkness, light and non-system magic, this feeling is so-so etc.

I feel like it's well written, but it's too weird to have only one student. It doesn't feel like teaching.

Rather than opening a school, why not open a cram school next to Hogwarts? "Defense Against the Dark Arts Tutoring Class" starts until Harry defeats Voldemort, and then you go directly to Hogwarts to apply for the Defense Against the Dark Arts professor.

. . . . Opening a school with just one student? Aren't you just recruiting an apprentice? If it is true that a school with many students is worth mentioning, just one student would be called a master-apprentice, and a master-apprentice system would be created under the guise of opening a school. . . Title party?

It's too long-winded. I don't know if the author wants to write about training or building a college. The current content is too watery. Dozens of chapters are still about one person, instead of how to discover the college. Why not just write about the cultivation of masters and apprentices, which is more interesting? !

Each chapter follows the title, and then is filled with chatter. This is not the sea, which is all water, this is the Milky Way,

It is said to open a branch next to Hogwarts, but the protagonist only recruits one person. It is a tutoring class at best, not even a school, which seems boring. In fact, you can consider adding game characters, which will not destroy the original team and can follow the story line. I don't see the need to open a school to develop in this world, which is completely forced And to be honest, Hermione's potential is actually just that, not to mention Voldemort, Cedric may be stronger than her So although the content of each chapter is okay, but if you think about it carefully, they are actually completely meaningless actions In comparison, it is better to simply write it as a useless senior who has just graduated, teaching others to get rewards, at least there is a direction for efforts.

In Harry's world, there are no more than 10,000 wizards in the entire UK. Excluding the elderly, middle-aged, young and young, and excluding young children, the number of school-age students is only a few hundred. You still open a branch school, where are the students? Why are you competing with a thousand-year-old prestigious school for dozens of freshmen?

I wanted to read it when I saw the limited exemption, but when I looked through the catalog, Miyano Shiho... Suzuki Sonoko... Does the author have no confidence in his own level? Or have you just started writing and run out of inspiration and want to mix up the word count in other worlds? The comprehensive world is inherently poisonous, so why don't you try to find someone who is more compatible with it? Does your novel's title synopsis match Conan?

What can I say? It looks like sugar-coated shit.

It's actually quite interesting, but one student is still too weird. Let's wait and see again.

There are no major poisonous points, but there are constant minor poisonous points. After more than 100 chapters, there are basically no comments. It seems that no one has chosen to continue reading! The only good thing is that it is free of charge😃

Why does it feel like it's not a magic academy when it only accepts one student?

Chapter 18 is a bit unacceptable, so I'd better polish it off first, come on

Um. . . The author loves Detective Conan as deeply as he likes to have female apprentices. . . When the school opened earlier, the Harry Potter world only accepted one person, Hermione. After that, there were no other Harry Potters. What happened? There are obviously many good characters gone? Then after reading the chapter titles and spending some coins, I saw that one person successfully enrolled in the original Harry World of Goodfellas. This Detective Conan World accepted 4 in one breath, and there were even more as the plot progressed. . . . Guess who the students are. They are the Miyano sisters plus Maori Lan and Yuanzi. . . Good guy, Harry World accepted only one student, which seemed to be very selective for talent, but then he went to another anime world with another style of painting and accepted 4 students at once. What do you think? I think it's reasonable to replace Sonoko and Miyano Akemi with Anko, at least if they don't have the talent. If the original world didn't dig deep to lay the foundation, the management school would just take a roundabout way and go to the anime area to recruit people (not to mention that anyone who is in the magic book must be accepted, it just depends on how the author wants to write it). The result is a management school with boring teaching and a messy branch branch. It's a joke. It's just a hobby training class. The protagonist has no plans to run the school well in the future, but if he has some, he will prepare for the future and build a super magic school. He also needs to find talents. Even if there are no places in the magic book, students can find some talents to introduce additional teaching and become teachers in the school. There is no need to kill the possibility with a stick, right? There is no need to say anything unnecessary. The summary is not about creating a super school. It is more like a hobby training class written by the author according to his interests. Only 3 of the 5 students are talented and the other two are just out of the author's interest. 🙂

Only creativity and typos are not shortcomings. Are the authors Japanese? I finished reading it for free, except for the backdrop of Hogwarts, the rest are all Japanese comics.

Why does it prompt every time after updating your chapter: Code is in progress, please refresh later. . . It affects the reading experience too much. Don't post it until you finish coding.

I didn't expect you, brother, to be so awesome that you could win the resurrection match.