I Train Like Mad, My Fists Subdue the Stars

I don't know since when martial arts became insulated from science, mecha, and bioengineering. Martial arts must go all the way to the dark side, and other biological engineering, alien implants, and ancient martial arts mechas must be abandoned. Strange.

I see that there is a fight between the new martial arts and the old martial arts in it, and I hope it's not a case of trying to seduce others. The protagonist Niu cannot represent the old martial arts Niu;

There used to be a mecha category in the science fiction category. The ancient martial arts mecha in the mecha category. In the past, mechas could also practice martial arts. The power channels inside are the meridians.

The progress is too slow, only one chapter is Braille. Cheluglu said the words again and again. The author needs to pay attention to this. The content feels OK

From a personal point of view, this female character named Lin has a condescending feeling from the beginning to the end. The protagonist is just a tool for her to climb up, and the protagonist thinks she is a friend. I think friends should not be so cheap. Two people want to communicate but have not communicated, and they are not on the same level. I don't know how these two became friends. Is it quantum entanglement? Or telepathy?

If the purpose of the interstellar era is to develop resources, politicians and capital will not be so eager for quick success. What is the point of raising some people in the interstellar era? Efficiency can only be achieved by using all the people!

The writing is okay, but this kind of bad world is still a bit too classic.

It's really too risky to read at Qidian. I cut it randomly.

They are all old martial arts and new martial arts, the protagonists are all old martial arts, they are all old streets, they all started in martial arts schools, and even some plot descriptions in the novels are similar.

When writing about the opposition between old and new martial arts, the logic is not valid. If the old martial arts are more demanding, they will naturally gravitate towards the new martial arts. It will only make you more tired as you write, and the readers will have no sense of empathy. Just write that the protagonist is awesome.