
Beast Taming, but the System Got the Timeline Wrong
御兽,但是系统搞错时间线
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- Ongoing
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- 1.3M Words
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- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 2mo ago
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- Qidian
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Schools assume that teachers sell addictive drugs to students that are difficult to quit, and cultivate addicts under the pretext of increasing their strength. Even if the United States is not so crazy, being destroyed by the evil god may still be a good thing.
This book has shortcomings and advantages. I feel that the old author's writing style is pretty good, at least fluent. It should be a source of food. The disadvantage is that the protagonist's family has to raise a child in poverty, and the child is contracted to the outside world. It seems that the little green snake with low potential is not ready to repent in time. The protagonist clearly stated that they do not want the Yalong bought at a high price, and they agreed in their hearts, but the Yalong was not recycled (to recover the loss) There is also potion, which is sold openly by a slightly addictive teacher. After the protagonist's parents bought this high-priced potion, they discovered his addiction, and knew that their son would not drink it and did not return it. The world view is relatively depressing. The world is written as a place where people fight for money, and there are risks involved in fighting for money. My suggestion to the author is that the little green snake felt too defeated at the beginning. He should have written a pre-sale that looked good to the outside world, and then cultivated it to a higher level through golden fingers, instead of the current old plot that is a bit pretentious. And the author needs parents to confess to their children in a timely manner. Little Green Snake has already written it and cannot change it, so let parents discuss it with their children and use all resources. In the eyes of the outside world, for the time being, the little green snake has been piled up to two stars. In the eyes of the outside world, it is regarded as a transitional pet to solve the problem of pretentiousness and slap in the face. In addition, we must return the Yalong pets and potions that we bought at a loss in the early stage to recover the losses, and train the little green snake with all our strength Of course, we must have fun as soon as possible, advance the plot, and write down the advantages of the little green snake over other peers because of the protagonist. My evaluation of this book is that the writing style makes these small blocking points written by the author temporarily covered up. Therefore, if the author does not change it, it can be read without thinking. If the author makes some slight modifications to the subsequent plot changes, it will be a good pre-sale article.
Inspiration from watching movies?
Even if your parents have resources, why don't you use them? Are you here to deliberately raise your son in poverty? It's enough to start normally, you have the resources to be as good as if both parents were dead, and your pet has a certain bloodline, and then you tell the reader that the pet's talent is very poor...
I completely don't understand the thoughts of the protagonist's parents. They have pretended to be a gambler for more than ten years, pretending to be poor to save money to lay a foundation for their children. It's really a tadpole with a frog tattooed on its back. You're showing off your mother. Just pretend to be poor in a serious way. Pretend to be a gambler, but your son's credit is completely overdrawn. As a result, your son won't discuss anything with them. Now they do something good, such as getting some supplements, which in the eyes of the protagonist is called the prodigal son turning back (questionable version). To put it bluntly, the protagonist doesn't believe them at all, or he doesn't believe that dog gambling will change his evil ways. They haven't fully explained it yet. So is it so difficult to just pretend to be poor instead of just pretending to be a gambler?
Combat power and lifespan setting issues
After reading so many pictures, the author's idea seems pretty good, but there are two points I have to complain about, that is, the combat power and lifespan settings are too outrageous First, the combat power. You are a pet beast with extraordinary strength. The initial combat power description feels that it can't beat people. The combat power has few levels, but 0 stars can seriously injure 5 stars. What's more, the pet beasts have evolved to four or five stars and only live thirty or forty years? Long-lived dogs can live almost 20 years!
Seeing that the biggest poisonous point at present is that the whole world is tacitly borrowing money to cultivate, what the hell is distorting the economic view, cyberpunk wearing the skin of the beast, right, the end product of the beast, right?
Shennong couldn't stand it anymore
The book is okay overall, but it has too many flaws. The heroine is a drag, troublesome, withdrawn, and has a flawed character. I don't see the advantages. How did she become the heroine? The male protagonist is a rag collector. Can't she be more normal? She is not a green plum, and there is no climax of emotional entanglement. She is just a passerby. Now she becomes the heroine. She got together with the male protagonist. This is too unreasonable. Abandoned😅😅😅😤😤😤
The book is good, and the writing is also great. The only problem is that the so-called poverty-stricken family is raised by parents. Isn't this really a good thing? It's really a good-hearted person who doesn't regard parents as enemies. And in the end, what qualifications does a poor and well-off family have to be so-called poor family?
Your parents are both dead.
Like the title says, it would be better for both of these parents to die, and the school clearly knows that the setting they don't know is to go against the will of heaven?
How is your plot progressing? It's almost 200 chapters. How many days has passed since the plot? The 200 chapters of other books must have at least passed the early stages. You are still wandering around in Novice Village after writing this book. Do you expect this book to last you forever?