The Military Journey: Starts with a Recruitment Letter in the Mail

Alas, the author's protagonist's character is so inconsistent! You, a child from a rural area with poor family conditions, don't have the time, money, and energy to pay attention to so much military knowledge (). Of course, there may be exceptions, but you have to write clearly why you became this exception. What makes you, a child from a farm family, so obsessed with caring about war and military affairs? Without this original intention, how can this kind of love support you to think about such distant things?

I read earlier that the male protagonist has an average high school student physique, and his family conditions are average. He usually eats sweet potato rice and doesn't eat meat very often. After being reborn, he didn't specifically mention that his physique is abnormal. How can he be so much stronger than a veteran who has been in the army for several years after exercising for a month? Even if you have a strong willpower, your body has its limits. It's not like you didn't run to death in the military training in the past. In order to emphasize that the protagonist's body is awesome, you have to be practical.

A diploma is a passport for advancement. The lower the diploma, the harder it is to move up. The higher the diploma, the easier it is to advance. If you don't understand this truth, you really think that those big guys who dropped out of Harvard are really starting from scratch 😒

So, if the protagonist wants to take the commander route, he can't even wait for half a year, so he can't get a high school diploma and then join the army? Just go into the military with a junior high school diploma? Don't you know that the diploma issue will make you spit out all the extra time you grabbed later?

Although it is a military novel: but the plot description completely treats all other characters as "silly..." First: Reborn in 1998, an ordinary family, the protagonist was too mediocre before the third year of high school: suddenly wrote a letter... Haha (this is a military theme, not rigorous and unreasonable) because the protagonist himself: has no advantages, skills, achievements (including family) Second: (not a military family or has been trained and trained since childhood, etc.) Suddenly came to the "army" and made various firsts and meritorious services Technical theories, etc. Are too "exaggerated" and describe other characters as "stupid..." Third: The army is a collective family and a small family: not a personal performance show Hmm: In addition to military families, martial arts schools or families have elders who have retired and include "special agent families". They have been trained since childhood and have accomplished various firsts and meritorious deeds in the "army" that are impossible to get away from. The technical theory and so on are "excellent" to the point As mentioned before: military writing is exciting, but the plot framework (protagonist profile) should also be arranged more reasonably.

During the exercise! A group happened to meet a herdsman who came from more than ten kilometers away and asked for help. The key point is that your group was passing by, but there was no doubt at all! ! ! And when the directing department could be contacted, the directing department was not contacted. So he pulled a regiment that was practicing to rescue the sheep. No reporting, no notification! ! ! What I don't understand is, should such a leader be pulled out and killed?

Is it really unbearable to see so many violations of the protagonist's rules? What is the purpose of military exercises? Testing the combat capabilities and development methods of the troops is not your personal show. Moreover, what position can the superiors take to forgive these illegal operations of yours? Would such a thing happen in a real war? Both sides of the exercise are Chinese, and they are using ordinary people to participate. Who do you think will not help? But would such a thing happen in a real war? Moreover, the informatization we see later is all high-tech, what does it have to do with the protagonist? You both have the same technology. Can you win? So what's the point of all this? Is it possible that the higher-ups don't know?

During the recruit period, it was first explained that the protagonist's talent was not the best, and he wanted to use hard work to reflect the protagonist's will. But the overall feeling was not captured. Then we came to the subscription stage, the recruit competition. It can be seen that compared to the 82 recruit protagonist, there was no advantage. As a result, in the last 100 meters of the 5 kilometers, there was a wave of fall and he won the championship. Isn't it too abrupt? You were ranked fifth, but after a fall, you won directly? During the time when I got up, everyone else had already run 10 or 20 meters. How is it possible to win the championship? The plot is really blunt and inconsistent.

I feel that before I was 25 years old, I liked the single-soldier army and the special forces. After I turned 25, it became more romantic for men to fight with large armies and combine land, sea and air. It was very strange, and the changes were subtle.

Why not take the college entrance examination? The starting point for taking the military academy exam is much higher.

Are you saying that a high school student's body that has resisted a log at home for a month and carried a flag for 20 kilometers is more powerful than a veteran who has been training for several years? If you play the system flow or write a sentence to travel through the body, it will be stronger. It is said that you have extraordinary talents. You can't resist anything just by willpower?

I'm about to graduate from high school. Wouldn't it be better if I didn't go directly to the military academy? I could go somewhere to enlist in the army...

It's more like a popular science article than an online article. It's not that there's something wrong with the choice of the protagonist, or that he has to show off to others, it's just that the focus of the narrative feels wrong. When you focus on describing daily articles in large lengths, it will inevitably slip into science popularization. What attracts me is just the value of science popularization. It is not that it is unattractive, but it is foreseeable that the follow-up will be weak. The key, in my opinion, is that the protagonist is reborn in vain but lacks a goal and challenge worthy of rebirth, and lacks a real purpose to support the protagonist's abnormal persistence and hard work, making the inhuman efforts become a slogan and a form, a thin shell with nothing underneath. If you think about it carefully, the plot is very thin. The only thing that can arouse emotions is to pretend to be inferior. The words and deeds of the protagonist are also perfect, with a sense of a saint who wants nothing. The author never answers the question of what is there in the military camp that is worthy of the protagonist's pursuit.

There is a saying: Pigs can fly into the sky when the wind blows. It is unthinkable to go against the wind. The merging of military reform, academic qualifications, and professionalization is the trend. To be honest, you said that it is unrealistic for you to participate in the military reform. It is difficult for leaders to give you space to display your abilities.

What the hell is written next? You, a student, went across military regions to establish a similar school? Where is the face? You really think that there is no one in the army. You are laughing so hard.

The author's new book, "Be a soldier, be a soldier well, don't make a bunch of relatives ruin your family like the previous book. The plot is disgusting, and don't teach people to start a business."

I couldn't get over the first few chapters. In an era when information is not very transparent, it's not normal for the writing to be so advanced.

The author's writing style is really good and he is a great guy 👍

Let's put it this way, after being reborn in the novel, apart from being a scientific research soldier, there is no sense in time-traveling as other soldiers. It just doesn't make sense.

Brother, update, your writing is really useless

Hurry up

Bad ending, 😭😭😭

It cost me hundreds of RMB to pursue it until now, but in the end, there is no follow-up.

It's so beautiful. Please update it soon. Come on, come on💪💪💪

Are the books going to be discarded? I've been saving for months and now I've just updated 8 chapters? ? ?

If the next one doesn't work, just write a parallel worldview. It should be better this way.

Can you finish the book?😁

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