Who Can Fall in Love When They Are Already in the Military?

After reading chapter seventy-six, to be honest, I was quite speechless when it came to the description of my ex-girlfriend. Either they would not see each other for a long time, or they would just be the heroine. You have always written that your ex-girlfriend has been willful about breaking up and has been contacting the protagonist after breaking up. She even went to his home. From sending messages to the protagonist, asking and begging at the beginning, etc., To later posting about her situation, plans and plans, it shows that she is changing. Why is there so much space for someone who does not plan to be the heroine? To be honest, the writing has changed a lot. The article also said that there is a trick, just come to me and I will chase you directly. In this way, the image of the heroine is directly established, instead of being a supporting role like now, writing more pages than the heroine and having bright spots. The real heroine only has that little space and nothing to read. The heroine is just like a passerby.

To be honest, the beginning was good, but why did the National University of Science and Technology suddenly pass it by? It ended suddenly, and there was no feeling at all. At least it was just a fading moment of the National University of Science and Technology.

Two poisonous points, ex-girlfriend and cousins. The writing is quite good, but it would be better if the author could change these two points. Is the protagonist's ex-girlfriend the shadow of the author's ex-girlfriend? So the author keeps writing plots that she regrets to make the author happy in the world of the novel? She appears several times when the protagonist performs meritorious deeds. Fortunately, after graduating from the military academy, I deleted her WeChat account. Although it was a small pleasure that my ex-girlfriend regretted it, it was a bit disgusting to keep mentioning her. I hope I won't see her again in the future, for example, if I go to give military training to college students, I will meet herself or something like that. Also, those relatives, that cousin or cousin, are also disgusting. There is no need to write like this. Even if such people exist in reality, there is no need for you to disgust the readers. It is still disgusting to repeat it many times. If you didn't write about ex-girlfriends and relatives, your book would be great and a classic. It's a pity that the author didn't change it and insisted on writing it.

Nowadays, when military novels are recommended, they go to the National Defense University of Science and Technology. I would like to ask you, dear author, to carefully understand what the National Defense University of Science and Technology does and what kind of school it is. If you are a field force and want to study, and then go back to become a military officer, you go to the National Defense University of Science and Technology.

From the introduction, I feel that first-class merit is like eating and drinking. In reality, most people who get first-class merit are heroes. The few who survive are also highly disabled

Is it serious to be promoted to major in two years? Is it wartime? It's still possible in wartime

I'm really touched to write this book to commemorate my unforgettable military years!

A bottle of potion increases the value by 5%. Assuming that a normal person's value is 100, and the protagonist is considered weak, he is given 80. The tenth power of 100*1.05 Is 160+. The protagonist drank dozens of bottles. Counting his 30 bottles, 80*1.05 To the 30th power, 80*4.32=345.6, Which is three times that of a normal person. Author, do you know the concept of physical fitness in reality? Even if it is a simple multiplication, three times the physical fitness of a normal person can be used as a punch to punch Tyson. Moreover, the protagonist with such physical fitness was only 1 second faster than that person in the obstacle course. Why, the supporting character also had a system to achieve success, right? And the key is, why should he? Why can a provincial athlete do this? The squad leader is only 1 minute and 55 seconds long. If a national-level athlete is co-authored, it will not take 1 minute and 30 seconds to kill the protagonist. This data is really outrageous. This potion is useless, so stop drinking it. There is no other author who can write a potion that increases the index so expensively.

I won't talk about the bug in the system, nor will I mention that it's only chapter 108 before continuing, let's talk about the four female characters that appear in the article. Ex-girlfriend, willful and pretentious, publicity lieutenant, green tea, cousin, no tutor, mother, not familiar with the behavior of a small family. Why, women can't have a positive side? Also, when you write about the protagonist's military camp, just write about the protagonist specifically. You can just cover other people and other plots in essays. Do you have to write it in a rich and colorful way? An ex-girlfriend wrote so much about her, a good friend wrote five chapters, and even a bad friend wrote a chapter. Is it useful? Did it have a big influence on the creation of the protagonist? After all, isn't it just that the number of words is just bad for the money? Finally, there was so much foreshadowing. I always thought that the protagonist would follow his squad leader to his company, but he ended up going to the next-door camp to work as a catfish... The key point is that when the next-door camp was conducting exercises, the results were not good. They also said that after the protagonist went there, life would definitely be difficult and he would not be able to accept it. A clichéd slap-in-the-face plot. There are reasons why it doesn't become a masterpiece.

I would like to make some comments on this book carefully: 1. The title of the book is somewhat inconsistent with the content 2. One of the highlights of the book is the system, which is ignored after recruit training. As an ordinary person, I don't think you will be so good if you don't focus on the system. 3. The author may hope to reverse the polarity of the views of people around him on being a soldier, and the description of family members and relatives to create a sense of pleasure, but my sense of perception is not good, and there is a problem with the value orientation (although it is a novel, it is a military article) 4. I doubt the killing and suppressing of the special operations team by the three rocket launchers during the battle? I am an expert in small-scale raid operations. I have 80 or not 100 counterattack plans in this situation. A platoon can handle you, let alone one person. (Personal opinion of a puppet army fan)

The 36-year-old senior colonel in the novel next door is already the commander of the Reunification Brigade...

Two years as a compulsory soldier, a lifelong military experience; Veteran barbecue, if called upon to fight, he will return; Country Garden five-star general, my rules are rules.

Either don't give it to the system, or activate it quickly. It's been more than ten chapters and the status is still only 40% unable to activate the system.

I just have an idea, my ex-girlfriend should either have a clean break or have more female leads.

I keep mentioning my ex-girlfriend in front of me. It's so disgusting. It's so annoying.

I suggest the author change the title of the book. This book is really delayed by the title. I have kicked my Internet addiction. In terms of pure content, it is worth following up on this book.

I'm sure it's not a fake, I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. Very messy. . . Based on this background, if a recruit dared to show off his face and show off his power on his first day in the camp, he would probably be waiting for a complaint. The writing style is also very white. My head hurts from looking at it 🙂

What's the matter? Who still falls in love? This title has been overused recently! Just travel through time! Is there a conflict between being a soldier and being in a relationship? I really can't stand the latest book titles!

Can the system text enter the military camp? Is the starting point to relax the policy or is it just a side test?

I can't stand it when I see a woman named Chai presenting her with a second-class merit medal. It's such a drama.

It's too confusing. Many chapters just read the title to know the content, so I skipped to order it.

Tsk tsk tsk tsk

Is this book nothing more than training and exercise?

I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of ​​writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...

The first part was okay. I thought I finally had a normal military novel. However, I became more and more disappointed as I read later. The whole book was full of pretentiousness.

As expected of me

You have finished revising the book. I am speechless. It has been more than 7 days and there is less investment.

I would like to give you a suggestion. If your recruits have been in the company for a long time, it will not be longer before they are promoted. Let's study in school.

There's nothing to give, I'll recommend it to you for free.

Just open it and check for updates, good