The Dead Me Is Trying My Best to Capture the Witch

To put it simply, the content of the first volume of this article (about 500,000 words) is relatively cumbersome to put in an online article. Not just in terms of plot, but also in how the setting is thrown out. If you like daily and soothing novels, you can read it. But below I will talk about why I don't actually agree with this statement. This will involve spoilers and is purely subjective. It is normal to disagree. (The following content contains spoilers) First of all, there is the issue of procrastination. Seeing the devil and 45 participating in the death plan in more than 400,000 words left me speechless. For example, this is like Naruto catching up with the defecting Sasuke in Naruto before telling you that there is a Nine-Tails in Naruto. I can understand your setting of 40,000 words and 140,000 words, but over 400,000 words seems a bit mechanical. In the past, readers could more or less guess some things, such as the purpose of the protagonist playing house with the witch, the role played by 45, etc. But I really didn't expect that you would suddenly bring a demon. You couldn't just name the territory after the Seven Deadly Sins and I would be able to spread my thoughts to this point, right? There is really no foreshadowing at all, which affects the look and feel. I will write about the procrastination in the plot in the next part. Let me first talk about the parts of the plot that I don't understand. After reading the first volume, the changes in the relationship between the male and female protagonists are as follows: the female protagonist cannot live without the male protagonist, and the male protagonist cannot live without the female protagonist... The benefits brought about (with the help of the witch's power to fight against the stars + taking the opportunity to enjoy a quiet life). I think the biggest problem is that the description of the male protagonist makes it impossible to tell what his attitude is towards the witch: a person who is about to be brainwashed by the stars, in order to maintain his little humanity and stay in the mortal world to protect the people he cares about, he chooses the death plan, that is, to seek salvation by using the power of the witch. The novel uses a lot of space to describe the daily life of the male and female protagonists, but between the lines, what the male protagonist loves and enjoys is just the tranquility that comes with it, not spending time with the witch. To put it bluntly, as long as there is the power of the witch's authority + leisure time, the male protagonist does not have to be the female protagonist, she can be a cat or a dog. You may think this is nothing, but the protagonist's purpose is not fully revealed until the last few chapters of the volume, which creates a problem that I think is more serious: the previous hundreds of thousands of words of daily life, and the male protagonist's warm and masculine personality were all "pretended" to achieve the purpose. After all, the article said that under the destruction of the stars, he actually didn't have much normal human emotion left, and even the devil could not arouse the anger in his heart. So what are your daily routines? Who is this witch? For a man who can chop off the heads of dozens or millions of people by carrying out administrative orders in his territory, what does everything in this small town mean? To put it bluntly, it's like a warm man who is with a rich woman. The current plot can only let people see that the warm man is attracted by the rich woman's money, not the rich woman. Emotions require investment from both parties, and unilateral investment can only turn into a tengu. There are other insignificant problems, such as the elves being completely invisible in the explosive plot part of the first chapter, and the biggest explosive plot moment being as brief as fireworks. Paired with the protagonist's force value, it's like the classic scene in "Raiders of the Lost Ark" where the person on the opposite side wields a steel knife and is shot away by the protagonist who is in a hurry to go to the toilet. Feeling good? Paired with the volume of the first volume of 500,000 words, it feels so cool. As for the comments section about being a turtle or not, I think the one who is most likely to turn into a turtle in the future is the witch, so I think the male protagonist can give it a rest.

Don't pay attention to those in the comment area who say dog ​​lickers and trash, as well as those who argue about single heroines and harems. This book is really good. Don't believe what others say is bad. Read it for yourself. Chapter 96 is free. It feels really comfortable to read and the body is warm 🙂

Frankenstein (A) Corena (B) Dimension: Destiny Level Explanation: A and B are bound to two conflicting powers and continue each other through "coexistence". B is the key container for A to retain its humanity. Dimension: Power structure Explanation: A is the leader of the plan and has the initiative. B had no idea at first and was arranged, protected, and even manipulated. Dimension: Emotional level Explanation: A's care for B was originally for purpose, but it may also be the only way to express the remaining emotions; B's trust and dependence on A are based on not being informed. Dimension: Ethical conflict Explanation: A uses B to prevent himself from becoming a completely cold-blooded person, and to maintain the ability to protect others (such as C), but still at the expense of B. Dimension: Growth and Asymmetry Explanation: B grows from a doll to a human, looking for himself through dependence, but A is always burdened with the pressure of purposeful behavior.

It's very good, one of the best-quality new books I've seen recently. But there is one thing. I feel that the author's emotional portrayal is a bit too plain. There should be hysterical emotions buried in the plainness. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. The author, please work hard 🌹

It is a fantasy novel that focuses on daily life. The main plot is slowly being revealed. The sub-stories are well written and there are foreshadowings. Each character is well portrayed. It is difficult to imagine a new author. The shortcoming is that the current plot lacks explosive points, but as a daily novel, it does not matter, and judging from the recent plot, it seems that there will be a big explosive point. In other words, there is some wording, but it is not offensive, which can be considered an advantage for people who like this. By the way, looking back at the protagonist and the witch, I personally feel that the witch is becoming more and more like a human being. On the contrary, the protagonist always looks at most events from an outsider's perspective, which makes people feel a bit indifferent.

Contains a small amount of spoilers The supporting characters in the incident are quite rich and distinct, such as the merciful priest and the change in Catwoman's mentality. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is gradually progressing (detailed description), and there are many foreshadowings but they are recycled (such as a certain lady who has been hinted at). There are very artistic words in it that are as good as free money, and some of the descriptions are exquisite and just right. However, because the author is still a bit ignorant, the climax of the Pride chapter is not directly explained in the article (the author will probably change it in the future). It takes a while to understand it, so it looks very awkward and uncomfortable ( The premise is that you treat it as a cool article, because it is different from the previous way of thinking, but I think some article labels are very vague, it is better not to label them), and then there are the small flaws in the ending of the Pride chapter, which gave hope of getting rid of it, but in the end nothing changed (it was not explained clearly, but I can still guess some) All in all, its brilliance can cover up its shortcomings. The content is diverse and rich, and the pace is slow (you can watch it if you want to watch it fast, otherwise you will feel a lot of bad reviews). If you watch it slowly, you will feel quite comfortable

Apart from the slow update, it currently feels very satisfying. The plot framework is clear, and the development is sometimes fast and sometimes slow (praise). The character design of the protagonist is almost perfect except for looking like a pseudo-person (inhuman feeling), and the actions are mature, steady and sophisticated. I just hope that Little 45 is not arranged to be a chess piece or a mastermind behind the scenes just to influence the protagonist.

The author's description of the interaction between the male and female protagonists is smart, and the relationships between the surrounding characters are also clearly depicted. From the first hundred chapters, it is a high-quality, slow-paced, and good daily novel. But after a hundred chapters, a grand world view and various characters are suddenly introduced, which is no problem. I think the descriptions of Yak, the old priest and others are also in place. But the description of the development of events, the logic of things, and the interaction of actions is too thin. In particular, the change in the character setting is extremely abrupt, betraying the character at every turn, and becoming an undercover agent at every turn. The slightest foreshadowing or hint can never support such a major change in stance. You can't expect someone to do Infernal Affairs. Generally speaking, the author is good at describing the emotions of the characters, but the narration of the overall major events is really not good enough. Especially the recent chapters, they look mysterious and mysterious, and seem to be very elegant, but if you read them slowly, it feels like the author is talking nonsense as if he has taken drugs. If the author wanted to challenge himself to break out of his comfort zone, it would be a pity for the good quality of the first half.

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If you like Nishigen Nichiru, which is more about daily life, then this is a novel worth reading. Personally, I think the author's writing level is average to below average. In terms of setting, the male and female protagonists are currently considered to be one of the top combat powers in the world. The plot has only written a few hundred thousand words now, and it is mainly still in the daily-oriented stage, but you can feel the conspiracy of the incident (main line) that is gradually beginning to be revealed. Currently, it seems to be a single female protagonist, but the possibility of a harem for the male protagonist being involved with multiple people does not rule out the possibility. In general, I personally feel that it is a book worth reading without any poisonous points.

After reading the first ten chapters, why haven't you written about why the protagonist kneels and licks the witch so much? If you don't explain it clearly, it's so uncomfortable to just kneel and lick her, as if you've never seen a woman before. He just insists that his life is in the hands of the witch, so the reason for coaxing the witch is too far-fetched. He also repeatedly emphasized that the male protagonist should not be allowed to eat at the table. Is this cute? Why do you keep writing these things? The protagonist died because he was defending his territory. If he was a righteous person, he should not be so humble to the witch. The witch should have killed quite a few people (it is impossible for the protagonist to fight against the entire undead army alone). Then the protagonist seems to be fearless and wants to defend the civilians (if he fights against the witch, he will die), but on the other hand he is greedy and afraid of death and regards human life as trivial (it doesn't matter if his territory is destroyed), which is very contradictory. Then the comment section said that this is a light novel, it depends on the emotional line, but shouldn't normal emotional investment be from both parties? Now I only see the male protagonist being killed, his territory destroyed, and he is still kneeling and licking

No matter how good and kind Fran was in the past, Fran now is just an unintentional fake. All he does is to restore his emotions and let the witch have humanity to maintain his own existence. When he hears Onami's request, he will no longer make decisions based on his own kind heart, but looks at the witch: these suffering children are just tools to allow the witch to have humanity. No matter how well he performed in the past, it was just a choice he made based on his past self, an echo of the Fran who was still able to laugh. But now when he makes these choices, he is neither happy nor sad in his heart, only the calculation of how many goals he has achieved. The more good deeds Fran does now, the more it reflects how kind Fran was in the past, and the more moved and sad I am. The good deeds Fran does now can only be said to be a hypocritical imitation of his past self. No amount of good deeds can cover up the emptiness in his heart: he is neither happy nor sad doing these things. The disappearance of this kindness and emotion really makes me feel a little sad. Especially in this empire where upper-class anthropomorphic creatures are rampant, the disappearance of this remaining conscience is even more regrettable, so, When will the killing begin? When will the killing begin? When will the killing begin? I can't wait to see those insects in the upper echelons of the empire kneeling on the ground and crying, and the stars, when can I see those inhuman things from the Church of the Stars, and see the stars being kicked to death by Fran, with their faith shattered? 😋

Some people who think turtles have been obsessed by the opposition between men and women and have become single-threaded creatures who can only be defined by their characteristics. This man helps his wife carry her bags, what a turtle! This man lets his wife take care of his money, you idiot! This man listens to his wife, turtle! "What's going on with these people? How come they only know how to lick when chasing girls?" Don't you even want to believe in novels that love is mutual and does not care about gains and losses? Really finished

This book is not a eunuch, it is just a double book, and the energy is in the other one. I probably write about 10,000 words a day now, but I really don't have that much energy. Don't worry it's the eunuch who's trying to trick you, I won't reveal another book title. I can still write this book, but I write slowly. That's about it.

It doesn't matter how emotionless or fake the protagonist you set is, that's just your setting, but now too many innocent people are dying because of your protagonist's inaction, or even because of your promotion, people who didn't need to die in the first place, and most of them are idealists and good people. I don't know what you, the harmful protagonist, do? What exactly do you want to express? You said that your protagonist is not a good person, so he can kill people casually after stacking his armor? Are these your values? Are you already immersed in your own art?

After watching it, I felt the corpse was warm 😊

To give a brief description for those who haven't read it yet, it's an invincible novel, but it's not that invincible. The male protagonist is a "church" swordsman, but when the power backfires, he will slowly turn into a puppet of the church, so he uses the female protagonist to set up a trap. The heroine is an undead witch, and she has a huge army of undead under her control. The hero kills them all with no possibility of resurrection. Then the hero rushes to the heroine and is killed by the heroine with the law of death. But before she dies, he strikes the heroine's origin with a sword, cutting off her "divinity". Line, let humanity occupy the high ground of IQ, so the disabled female protagonist can only resurrect the only resurrected corpse around, that is, the male protagonist (her injuries were calculated by the male protagonist, and she only has the power to resurrect his corpse, and nothing more. If she is not resurrected, she can only wait to die). After the resurrection, the male protagonist began to live as a slave in name but actually as a "nanny" taking care of the children. The female protagonist was really a child (she had been controlled by the "divine" in the past and had little self-awareness), but now she has been trained by the male protagonist (still a bit arrogant).

If you want to watch the male protagonist killing each other indiscriminately, you can withdraw first. It is basically daily life. The male protagonist has not shown his strength (80) in the one I read. There are not many people who like this kind of novel. The main plot advances slowly (after all, it is a daily novel). Then there are some flaws. The author's transitions are rather abrupt. Sometimes it is a bit jumpy, but it is acceptable. Then the protagonist "licks" the female protagonist. This varies from person to person. I think it is okay, then Let's talk about it roughly The male protagonist is a sword master and a lord. The female protagonist broke into the male protagonist's territory and had sex with him. The male protagonist was not beaten to death. Although he was not beaten, he seriously injured the female protagonist. Then the male protagonist was reincarnated by the female protagonist. Now the male protagonist's life is in the hands of the female protagonist, so he is afraid that something will happen to the female protagonist. He raised the female protagonist like a daughter. Oh, by the way, there is another hidden reason for the male protagonist's death. It was mainly done by the kingdom That's about it.

Have you ever passed away? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

There are only male protagonists in the world of the heroine, but Fran has all kinds of people and things that he cares about. It seems that Miss Witch has almost fallen. I wonder how Fran will fall in love with our heroine Corena in the end.

For me, Xiancao is suitable for those who like daily novels without thinking. The character creation and writing style are good, and the description of the supporting characters is also excellent. As for the turtles and licks mentioned in the comment section, I can only say that the male protagonist is no longer able to produce human emotions, the female protagonist is similar to the three-person character (in the process of falling), and the turtle is also the female protagonist turtle. But in fact, will the readers who really read into it have the idea of ​​​​tucking and licking? I really want to say that the feeling of the male protagonist taking care of his daughter may develop into two defective people licking each other's wounds, and then coupled with the first-class writing style of pulling, I can only say that the author is the material to write this

Have you ever been an undead person? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

To be honest, if you like dog licking stories, you can read it

After reading a little bit, it seems that the heroine is a wanted criminal who goes around killing people and even indulges his undead souls to eat people. I am afraid of being poisoned. I want to ask if the heroine has been cleared in the follow-up, and if so, how? (It doesn't matter if you don't clean it up, but if you clean it up, my requirements are a bit high.) At the same time, reading the comments, I know that the protagonist's death was his own plan. But in order to get rid of dominance, so he finds the heroine to dominate him? Is it because you dislike the "stars" for not being beautiful? Is this reasonable? In addition, some comments say that the protagonist is a good person or even a saint, but in the book, he actively arranges for himself to be dominated by the heroine, without considering the possibility that he will help others in the future. Moreover, the behavior shown by the protagonist is not very objectionable to killing innocent people indiscriminately. Is the character design a bit strange?

I was attracted by the introduction, but the emotional connection with the witch turned out to be very slow and a bit boring.

Looking at this introduction, it smells like dog licking

Comfortable writing style and narrative style. It's so beautiful. I mean, the author doesn't have a group.

It's been a month, and my hanging heart has finally died.

Very nice. If it comes out as a physical book, I will buy it and collect it. But I stopped writing the wonderful part, leaving a hole in the ground. Not updated. That's all.

Over eight months and more than 60 chapters😐😐😐