Dream of the Red Chamber: My Disciple Lin Daiyu Has the Potential to Be an Empress

You're trying to cultivate immortality, but the methods for cultivating immortality are right there in the Taoist scriptures. Why are you searching everywhere for them? It's strange that you don't read any of the Taoist classics from Longhu Mountain or Maoshan Mountain. You don't understand the Eight Trigrams or the Book of Changes at all. What kind of immortality are you seeking?

I'm not interested in Grandmother Jia, but could I take Granny Liu in? 🐶

Having read over thirty chapters, the writing is generally quite good. However, the plot revolves around the protagonist's initial disdain for the locals in each new place, followed by the protagonist's display of skill that earns their respect and admiration. This repetitive cycle can easily become tiresome if written continuously.

The writing is good, and the initial style was also good. However, after these street performers arrived in Jinling, they seemed to collectively lose their intelligence. Earlier, they knew to immediately flee after a fight with bandits suspected of having connections with officials, but upon arriving in Jinling, they clashed with a wealthy family with official backing and refused to leave…

I was lured in by the title. The novel has a supposedly golden three chapters, and I've already read twenty chapters, and the protagonist is just constantly indulging in narcissism and showing off, without ever getting to the core themes of *Dream of the Red Chamber*. I'm really losing patience. Can anyone tell me when the protagonist will finally encounter the characters from *Dream of the Red Chamber*, when he'll meet Lin Daiyu?

They're delaying getting into the main storyline, just hovering around outside. I don't know if they're trying to pad out the chapter count or if they're just too afraid to go into the main storyline.

It's like giving the main character role to Lin Daiyu. Perhaps because the main character is invincible, the narrative focus shifted, and it inexplicably felt like a female-oriented story. 🤔

The recent battles have been so boring; the earlier chapters, with their wanderings or mountain cultivation, had a much more carefree feel. I hope the battles are quickly moved on, ideally with a foreshadowing of a trip to Yangzhou to see young Daiyu. Following this plot, I hope Daiyu's brother and Jia Min both survive; Daiyu has suffered so much, she's always either crying or in tears.

I suspect this story is going to be abandoned. Couldn't they just stick to writing *Dream of the Red Chamber* properly? Why did they have to dig so many plot holes and add so many settings? Now it's hard to resolve them. When they got to *Water Margin*, I thought it was going to switch to a conventional multiverse fantasy genre.

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