Start Living Forever with the Art of Archery

Reduce the number of times you show off your writing, readers will get tired watching it. This is not a history channel, it is a fantasy channel, and there is no need for so many words.

The author is too fiddly with the writing style and does not consider the old sayings that the villagers who cannot read even big characters are talking about 🙂

Some people say that you show off your writing skills. But first, you must determine whether the writing style is the selling point of your book. People who say these things, will they subscribe to you when the book is on the shelves?

I really don't understand why I can't survive even if I always set the starting point with a drag bottle. What's the use of always carrying a drag bottle? Doesn't it seem bitter enough?

At the beginning, a bunch of villagers come to the protagonist's house to eat and drink. The protagonist shoots an arrow on the ground and then drives them away with his sharp tongue. Isn't that awesome? It's really cool that these villagers are so cool and dare to come and eat them.

After taking a look, everyone's comments are quite fair.

I feel like the author is too liberal arts student and not sensitive to data.

At the beginning, several villagers are talking and idioms are spoken one after another. Do they all need to take the postgraduate entrance examination?

Trouble comes one after another, and opportunities come one after another. This kind of gold finger, which is similar to God's reward for hard work, is originally about development. It is better to slow down the pace a little more and describe more comfortable life. The readers are more relaxed. In fact, most readers read to relax. It is not a bad idea to do some planting, weapon refining and the like. The protagonist does not like to rule and form cliques at first glance. He needs to make up for the power and development of guardianship from other places. There is no limit to a single breakthrough. There is no limit to growth, and there is no way to conquer an invincible world.

The author has literary talent and is good in all aspects. In my opinion, the most outstanding thing is of course his writing style. The key is that while the writing is good, the writing skills are also strong, and the characters and stories are not left behind. I think this kind of writing style is close to that of several famous works. Just read it slowly at first and get used to it. I will continue to pay attention, predict the minimum guarantee of high-quality products, and see how far we can go in the end.

It's not as good as Lawful Tyrant. It's also an advance. If someone cheats, just open it to the end.

It's not determined by your strength.

Literary, this is how rural children spoke in ancient times. Even if rural children are enlightened, the villagers still don't speak like this. You are tired from writing, and we are tired from reading, so why bother! !

I feel that there is nothing wrong with repaying an advance loan to practice martial arts, such as archery, which includes time, dietary energy, visual reactions, mental premonitions, understanding, opportunities, and physical growth. The loan advance must be evaluated for the future of the pig's feet. Well, the author will be the guarantor. It's too cheap to just repay time.

The author has not been updated. I came from the Wushu live broadcast room. I can be signed by the live broadcast. It must be OK at the beginning. But the follow-up is that the way the characters are developed is wrong, which leads to the poor performance of this book. It is recommended that the author prepare a detailed outline. Touch it.

Wouldn't it look good to write the advance directly and pay it back slowly at the end? It seems that no one has written the advance like this before!

When I first read this book, I thought it was too standard and cliche, and there weren't many emotions in the text. However, the editor praised it to the sky during the live broadcast. I'll take another look and see what happens.

I don't know how the author decided to achieve perfection.

A new mode of monster-fighting and upgrade flow. Can you be a little more modest? The plot is as compact as anything. What's wrong if you don't travel through time? After traveling through time, everyone wanted to kill him. Target him. Can the author think through it? There is no logic at all in what you wrote. Everyone wants to live a peaceful life, live a good life, and slowly practice martial arts. I just want to finish ten years of work in one day. It's boring to watch.