Druid in the Fairy World

There are very creative novels, but there are too few. I finished them in less than an afternoon and it was very uncomfortable. You can still find novels from the starting point that can make people read. The novels in other places are so speechless. One by one, they either poison people to death or read disgusting novels. To find a master, you have to start from the starting point.

I feel that it is more suitable for the path of the Earth Immortal, the Druid, and the Cultivator, plus the Earth Immortal, the three cultivation systems.

Emmmm, it's okay. It's okay to write about cultivation of immortals and farming. It's just that the writing problem caused the contact between people to be too abrupt. But after all, I came here to see farming. In addition, the focus of this book is also farming. You can read it. You can read it. As far as the writing is concerned, it is okay.

Almost all non-elderly positive characters who come into contact with the protagonist are female, and these females appear in almost every chapter. There are even many chapters where they communicate with the protagonist and the proportion of them in heat is much greater than what fits the title and introduction of the book. Am I here to see the druids or to see the breeding? '

The first chapter is the chain of contempt for the profession of cultivating immortals. It is obviously a farming article, but I wish the whole world knew that your farming is different from others. I wish the whole world knew that you are special. I have just finished testing my spiritual roots and have not yet cultivated immortality. Everyone in the hospital knows that you have understood the Taoist heart This is what chapter I came into contact with the city lord's daughter (the character of the city lord's daughter is still a silly girl) and I taught her how to deal with the refugee problem There is also the classic villain who said harsh words. The classic said that I didn't want to pretend to be cool, but actually after pretending to be cool, I said harsh words to the villain rich young man and scolded him on the spot Is this the starting point in 2005?

What kind of Druid are you, aren't you just an ordinary Druid? Selling dog meat on a sheep's head

The painting style is not very harmonious. The golden finger and character of the protagonist are that of a Taoist who is as light as a chrysanthemum and cultivates the land. The story plot is an old-fashioned underworld cultivating immortality. All kinds of conflicts, slap in the face and show off, super dramatic. Excellent subject matter, inferior novel

Advantages: The setting of the world of druids and cultivators is good Disadvantages: The writing is average, the ideas are ignorant, and some settings conflict Summary: It's bad, but I can bear to have a look at the settings in my mind.

The characterization is poor and the protagonist's IQ is not very high. During the free period, you can still take a look at this kind of subject matter, but once it is put on the shelves, no one will read it.

The idea is really good, but unfortunately the writing is too poor, the setting is too vague, and the plot is too cliche. Online game novels don't have the flavor of a fairy tale at all, and their positioning is wrong. It's job transfer and training, and the two systems have little overlap. Should the author check out Shennong Daojun? He is also a farmer, and he also has an online game setting, but the integration is very good If you want to write about immortals, you should downplay the presence of the system and rely on the ancient style. If you want to write an online game or system, you just downplay the skills and practice, add some experience points and that's it. Don't occupy both ends. After writing down the experience points, you can only change jobs and not add points, and you also have to write down the training techniques.

This opening is particularly like that, the protagonist chooses a summoner and everyone looks down on him and doesn't understand him. The same goes for choosing a priest, or awakening a talent that is particularly high, and the profession is particularly good and then is looked down upon. The development is particularly like this 🙂🙂🙂

This is the best Druid text I have seen so far.

A good book becomes more and more inferior as it is written. Oops, I don't even know what level the author is. If he becomes popular, it would be unforgivable.

Click to open the introduction of farming and cultivating immortals. When you open the novel, it is all about slapping people in the face and pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. There are only a few strokes about Druid cultivating immortals.

The first reaction was to copy the latest chapter of the official document

Damn it, I'm interested in druids and cultivating immortals, I thought it was interesting, so I took a look. But this first chapter is really amazing, it makes me have brain hemorrhage. As a driver, why can't you cook vegetables and plant flowers when you get home? You've all become immortals. If you're so awesome, you can do whatever you want in the wild. Who cares about you?

The front is okay, but what is written at the back? It's the intrigues and clan fights again.

At the beginning, the forced selection of spiritual masters was ridiculed by the crowd. It felt weird. Aren't these professions such as alchemy, weapon training, beast control, spiritual cultivation, etc. All elective after training? They also chose their own main profession, regardless of talent. . . Shouldn't the main profession be training to improve one's cultivation level?

No, dude, I was fed a bunch of shit as soon as I got back to the starting point... You forced the chain of contempt on me, and the plot is also a classic within a classic.

The opening is too poorly handled. I really can't stand the first chapter. I suggest you revise it.

Don't listen to their nonsense. Just keep writing according to your process. Don't listen to their nonsense and rewrite. If you really rewrite, many people will support the book. If you support it, your book will be nurtured to death. You feel a little difficult to write now. You can focus a little bit and change the style of writing. What I originally thought was You need everything. Now you can highlight one key point and downplay the other points. Your book now has a large audience and readers. It would be very disgraceful for you to rewrite it. I bet that once you rewrite this book, the reading of this thing will definitely drop by at least half, and depending on how you write in the future, it may continue to drop. It's better to write at your original pace. If you feel like you can't go on, then focus on one key point and don't think about doing this or that. For example, if you feel that the drama about the suppression of the nobles is a bit unsustainable, you can completely use mechanical deity to arrange the attention of the king. Or something like that, raise the status of the protagonist, so that you can eliminate those difficult-to-write dramas about noble suppression, and focus on the integration of the Druid profession and the immortal cultivation system. This is definitely better than rewriting what you think, and your current readers can also retain most of it.

If the author wants to rewrite, basically few people will chase you. If you write slowly and revise slowly, there will still be people chasing you. If you just start again without saying a word, it will be very different.

If you don't calm yourself down, if you write five more books, all five of them will be unfinished.

It's been 11 days. Where is your new book?

When will the reboot or new book be released? I started reading your books starting with Juggernaut, and there was one book, The Last Book, and two The Eunuch. This fourth book will be a reboot?

This is an interesting book. The title of the book is "Xian", and the "Tao" is a suggestion of a large circular ecological chain. Humans and nature can coexist harmoniously. You can understand your own Tao right from the beginning.

I just subscribed to the latest chapter. Are you rewriting it?

That's not what you did, it's a very bad character.

To be honest, it would be good to be a druid in the world of martial arts, and then organize a small country, or something like that And it can also help plant treasures of heaven and earth.

How many authors have struggled to write books without achieving such good results as yours? It's true that I don't know how blessed I am.