I Plant a Sacred Tree in My Heart

Old bookworms, recommended from the starting point, attracted by the introduction. First, the author's imagination is absolutely ok, the ideas are very novel, and the design of the golden finger is in line with my aesthetic. But I don't know if it's because the protagonist's realm is low and he doesn't plant enough trees, so there's a lot of homogeneous content. This should be one of the reasons why many readers talk about water. Designing the retinue of the sacred tree shows that the author is trying to solve these problems. Another point is that the author made it too difficult to obtain energy. The protagonist is currently at the warrior level. To upgrade each sacred tree to the next level, 100W of energy is required, and the three trees total 300W. When the protagonist reaches the silver warrior level, it will cost 4000W to continue to upgrade. The further you go, the harder it will be to rely solely on charity to improve (otherwise currency inflation is inevitable. Spending a trillion to build Africa is not enough for the protagonist to become a king... And the king currently does not seem to be the final state of the book) And the protagonist now kills a genius weirdo for only 130,000. Even if the weirdness he kills after upgrading is much better and the genius is much better than now, it still feels like a drop in the bucket. I personally hope that the protagonist can balance the energy output of charity and killing monsters in the future, or after the protagonist's realm improves, he can show some special abilities that can directly feed back the society, and achieve alternative charity to obtain huge amounts of energy (similar to the protagonist's early thought of healing others through the Holy Light to earn energy, but there will definitely be more tricks he can play later). Otherwise, it will be difficult to have the real sense of giving if you rely solely on sponsorship for charity. And there is no need for the author to deliberately design the protagonist's abilities to be too positive. Negative abilities can also be used in positive ways, such as the locust trees and mandala flowers in the introduction of the book. It is better to have more diversified abilities. This is my personal suggestion as a collector. Second, the plot arrangement The first thing I want to complain about is the competition... The previous middle school competition was so long that I must have known that the author has been complained about for so long. In fact, the essence of Shuangwen is to experience the pleasure of getting stronger all the time, and the battle is essentially a display of how strong the protagonist has become. In the later stage of the middle school game, basically every battle has the protagonist showing off his new abilities to defeat the enemy. It can be seen that the author deliberately designed this, but I still have to say that the game is too dense and the fun is not outstanding. Especially when the competition is severely homogenized. Currently, the Huajian faction's game highlights one gimmick, but at least it's not a mindless fight. Let's look forward to it for the time being, but if this game is immediately followed by other games, it will really cause aesthetic fatigue. To show the growth of the protagonist, competition is only one of the ways. After enrolling in college, you can arrange various courses, such as practical classes to explore secret realms, various cooperation projects with different schools in the same country or even across the country, and joint actions between different departments (I know the protagonist is just going to college, but let's just do social practice in advance). Let the protagonist's abilities play some key roles, which are more attractive than simple competitions. (As for what to do with the Thor Project during the operation... Setting up a portable current development equipment is the end) And the protagonist is still at a low level, with relatively few trees, and not so many tricks to play. Personally, what I am most looking forward to is the pleasure of planting new trees and upgrading or even evolving the trees (collecting new sacred tree relatives is also good). If low realms are delayed like this, how long will high realms be delayed? This anxiety also needs to be considered. 3. Conflict Many book friends have complained about this. The author's conflicts are really... Very deliberate. The situation of beating the brainless villain to death can be satisfying a few times, but after too many times, the reader will feel bored. There is really no need to design other characters to be so aggressive. There are not many attractive supporting characters in this article so far. In essence, the conflicts are too homogeneous and low-level. For example, the protagonist senses that someone is coming and still lies on the girl's lap without getting up, forcibly creating a dandy impression on others. This is the kind of conflict that is unnecessary and appears to be deliberate. Since the protagonist is set as an arrogant person who regards himself as a savior, he should not be too serious about arguing with some low-level people. It's certainly more reasonable to treat them as a joke than to get seriously angry. 4. In terms of writing I am different from many book friends. I prefer precise settings. But liking the setting does not mean that you like to talk about it. For example, the protagonist relies on solar energy and electric energy that can be seen everywhere to grow, and it is cost-effective to train. This is explained in detail for the first time, and it is enough. There is really no need to say it in such a long way every time. Even if there is a new setting based on this setting next time, the parts that have already been said should be as brief as possible. 5. Emotional Line The author should have initially wanted to write a harem story, and the Bingshan girl named Yan and the senior named Jiang should both be candidates. Later, after being scolded too much, I gave up and started to follow the line of the king of guns (and then I got scolded even more...) But the problem is not actually the author's intention to introduce the heroine, but the way the author introduces the heroine. Different from love games, compared to players constantly brushing up dialogue to increase the character's favorability in order to endure various treatments for hcg, male channel online articles are more like female characters gaining readers' favorability through plot performance. You have to first make the readers attracted or moved and like a certain female character, and then you can naturally let the protagonist and her become partners. Take the plot in the orphanage at the beginning as an example. When everyone is looking forward to how the golden finger will take effect, the useless conversation with the iceberg girl will only make the readers more anxious. How can the readers carefully analyze "Wow, this person is actually cold on the outside and hot on the inside" and feel good about her? If the protagonist accidentally saw her going to the orphanage and was inspired to guess the principle of obtaining energy points, at least the readers would not feel disgusted, right? For another example, if I remember correctly, this female character also has a plot of picking up money. If the dialogue when meeting her later is not so boring, but leads to some doubts and becomes a hidden clue for the emergence of strange situations in the future, will readers still be able to look forward to her appearance? Excellent characters can help lead and streamline the plot, but cannot become an obstacle to the plot. Of course, if it is solely for the improvement of the protagonist's strength without any side plot of its own, it will lose its sense of existence. The method of shaping the senior named Jiang is the other extreme opposite to the Bingshan girl named Yan. Her purpose of existence is to give electric shocks to the protagonist, and she repeats this to the professors and others. She is completely tool-like, so that after the protagonist becomes scumbag, he feels sorry for her, and the readers are confused. Also, the character can have shortcomings, but it cannot be shaped in a direction that is too annoying, or at least you have to set up a shining point that is enough to overwhelm the shortcomings. This shining point cannot be talent or strength, because from the perspective of Shuangwen, these are all empty in front of the protagonist and will be surpassed sooner or later. Intelligence or character are more suitable. And the shining point cannot be just a setting, it must be implemented. For example, why do so many readers hate the character Qin Ya? Her core setting is that of a strong woman who would rather have her own career than be dependent on others. However, the other guys in charge of her are hostile to the protagonist on a daily basis, which reveals that she is actually incapable of coordinating and managing the people under her control, and having ambitions that she cannot support is her shortcoming. The only bright spot dimmed. If the author wants readers to like the character Qin Ya, she should highlight her strong business ability in the development of the plot, not the other way around. This strong business ability is not just about doing things that the protagonist cannot do (because other agents can do it if they are just too busy), but also things that are difficult for other agents to do. Moreover, don't design the female characters to be too utilitarian and strong, otherwise they will go too far and look cheap. Summary: Work more on Goldfinger, reduce the homogeneity of plots and descriptions to improve freshness, and don't make the characters so annoying. This book has great potential.

What the hell have you been writing lately? I originally liked this kind of tree-planting article, but now it's become more and more troublesome.

A very creative work. Cheating is reasonable. Feelings of inadequacy are part of human nature, and sometimes you don't tell the truth when you see through it, and you don't need to explain it thoroughly. Being too straightforward will be embarrassing. No one likes their bad side to be interpreted, such as me. There are also emotional scenes... I really don't need to write much about them.

The two women at the beginning are personally poisonous... One is a cold lady and the other is a considerate loli. How many years ago were they set? They even cooked it cold, focusing on the Ice and Snow Goddess, which was very embarrassing. Why does every goddess have something to do with snow?

Until the end of the inexplicable one-night stand•́ω•̀)¿ ¿ ¿ Anyway, I regret subscribing.

What about book shortage? Raising books? I don't want to read any of the other books. I read them in two or three minutes a day 😭

Come on, the author who comes with the meat suit! 🤫

As you have seen in the comments, there will be less emotional scenes.

ጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ ቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿ ኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈጿጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽ ጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼ ዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈቼዽጿኈ

Where is the author's home? Send me something nice.

What's going on with the author lately? Have you been treated unfairly? Why are the writings becoming more and more evil? The main character is mentally ill. Like those spoiled little fresh meat, this character is only an early mini-boss level character in other books.

I feel relieved to see so many people criticizing the author, which means I'm not the only one who finds it disgusting. This plot really ruined all the good feelings I had before.

Recently, the protagonist is too exaggerated. It doesn't feel like it was written by an author. It's too flamboyant. And the supporting characters are too. . . , Didn't you go investigate? It's the Huajian faction. Didn't the diamond talent belong to Chinese cabbage? I feel like they don't even care.

The author is very good at telling stories. A small thing can fill a whole chapter. The emotional scenes are terrible, and the conflict in the plot is also problematic.

I remember that there is a kind of spirit that is transformed from the fruit on the tree, so...

I always feel that the protagonist has gone astray. In my mind, the protagonist should mainly protect human beings and fight against strange things, and use money to help the poor as a supplement.

The emotional writing is so messy, The pig's trotters are interesting to Qin Ya, and Qin Ya wants to match up, Yan Yu'er and the pig's trotters. Author, are you sure you have the ability to write well? There are also hints of starting a harem, Qin Ya, Qin Xue, Yan Yan, Yan Yuer, and a female researcher. Oh ho, two pairs of sisters. You, the author, don't like this tone. Can't we just write a single female protagonist? If you continue to think like this, no one with a bit of maturity will read your book. The emotional writing is stinky and hard.

The plot collapsed after it was released... The college competition is a "real" pretend-and-slap routine from ten years ago. The vicious female supporting sister appears to humiliate the "female" sister of White Lotus in front of the male protagonist. The commentator of the competition has been belittling the protagonist's strength, then shocked, then continued to belittle the protagonist's strength, then shocked, and finally came up with the famous saying "It's so scary." The female supporting role After his sister was slapped in the face by the male protagonist, the supporting mother appeared and drugged the male protagonist, and then sent the supporting sister to his room. After the male protagonist had fun, he felt responsible for the supporting sister, but he did not want to give her a status, so he decided to raise her as an underground mistress... After seeing this, I just want to ask, has the author changed someone?!? 😅

Isn't it normal for the author to be a eunuch? The early writing was indeed good, but after it was released, it became obvious that the plot and word count were too low. Things that can be described in one or even half a chapter in other novels had to be covered in several chapters, especially the inner descriptions of various protagonists, which made me vomit.

Ah, I skipped the chapter where the scumbag might have an emotional scene, and I became more motivated to read the book. Then I saw the scumbag speaking in a very serious confrontation chapter, which gave me a blow. . No, I want to see the tree-planting angel Thor fight and upgrade the railgun. I really think it's interesting. Although watching orphans is to collect energy, the protagonist still has the heart to treat these children sincerely. He has upright views and has the appearance of an angel. Why why is he a scumbag? There is also the term lover, why It must be a woman. Isn't it good for the protagonist to be strong alone? ,վ^վ,, I just love to see him level up I have been chasing him before, and I also chased him when it was released. But I saw that my lover had not passed the hurdle for a long time, and now I am back to chase him. I must look at the back, I don't believe that it has always been like this 😭😭

Did someone change the writing after it was released? It was originally a first-class novel in my mind, but since I wrote a one-night stand, the subsequent plot fell apart without any foreshadowing. It was forced to write about emotions, and it was still a very bad relationship. Don't tell me what the truth is. This is an online novel, and you have to write a real person. It really makes people feel uncomfortable. I can't stand it anymore, and it slipped away.

Why do you put poison in the beginning? I don't believe there is only one orphanage in a city. Why do you have to go with those two girls who have trouble written all over their faces? Do you think this was ten years ago? Wake up! It's not 10 years!

Uh-huh, the previous 52 chapters defined the protagonist's talent as being able to absorb unowned energy and awaken other attribute talents. As a result, everyone who wrote later thought that the protagonist could only have photoelectric talents, so the talent test report was also burned after reading. Did the relevant personnel delete the memory? 🤔 Ordinary people don't know, forget it, and the people above don't know if the author has forgotten it. . . This is a big bug. This kind of talent involves targeted training. The higher-ups are definitely willing to try to see if they can awaken some special talents, such as space and time, prophecy, deduction, and analysis. . .

You can do good deeds regardless of your heart. On the heart, regardless of deeds, you can also do good. But you must understand that there is an essential difference between them. The former is called the Virgin Bitch, and the latter is the real Holy One. The author can obviously blur the protagonist's performance as a virgin bitch. It was obviously a good situation in the early stage, but you made it look like this. I am simply convinced. Don't you know that what modern people hate the most is the Virgin bitch? Not to mention reflecting real human nature, I am just a reader of novels and know nothing about human nature. Personally, I prefer passionate and royal novels, that is, upright ones. It would be better if some beautiful and pure emotional lines can be mixed into them. I also know that invincible flow is a novel genre in which it is difficult to produce sincere emotions. However, although your shit is not strong enough, it is just right. Even if you wrote a monk article, I have nothing to say. I just feel tired now. Lin Yao is this person. In terms of personality charm, he is not 1% as good as my Brother Zhou. As far as "Monsters Die When Killed", even Li Ang is inferior. From "Players Are Fierce" As some people in your novel said, sometimes the gap between people is worse than that of dogs. Although most people in this era say that one's heart is not as good as one's deeds, but no one's heart is pure. Yes, I don't deny it either. But ask yourself, most of us like people who are the same on the outside as they are on the outside. With the disunity between heart and behavior, such people will be unable to implement their own will. Ever since I saw that monsters will die when they are killed, I have a new understanding of the definition of strong. Maybe some people will say that my comments are unreasonable. But you can definitely read the novel I'm talking about. Although I, Brother Zhou, like to fight, make unreasonable troubles, and take action whenever I disagree, he is indeed one of the most charismatic characters in the eyes of me, who has read novels for nearly ten years, and he is one of the top ones. And personally, I am used to seeing all kinds of characters, whether they are villains or decent characters. Only by unifying body and mind and implementing one's own ideas can the most charming part of this character be revealed. At least this is the case for the vast majority of people. If you can't control your heart, how can you control your body? I think everyone has heard this sentence. Not many people would like a person with two faces. Unless you write to a certain level, unfortunately, many people do not have this kind of writing power. Internet writing has developed to the current level. For most old book friends, if there is only a simple pretense and a slap in the face, and a description of how powerful the practice and upgrade are, it can only make us watch a little fun. Your book is very innovative, and planting a sacred tree in your heart is indeed a good little idea, but there are still similar cheats. For online articles, many creative ideas have been written about over the years, and good writing can indeed make people's eyes shine. But the only things that really last long and impress people are the characters. vWhen everyone talks about Tomb of Gods, the first thing that comes to mind may not necessarily be the protagonist, but there must be those heroes with their own characteristics. When talking about cultivation chat groups, you will definitely think of the Peerless Koi Bai Venerable and Pain Will Make Me Stronger Tyrant Song. That's the truth.

New chapter title: Intermediate Warrior The protagonist, the Warrior, is intermediate Physical data of the Intermediate Warrior The expression of the Intermediate Warrior (aura seeds like this and that, body like this and that) How difficult it is for ordinary people, how difficult it is, and they can only solve it how and how, but! ! ! The protagonist doesn't have to do anything to solve the problem, because the protagonist's abilities help the protagonist save things. What is the difference between the protagonist's mid-level warrior and others (believe it or not, the author will explain it one more time when he fights with others), why are the spiritual energy seeds so awesome, how are the physical qualities compared, what is your gold, I will return the king, and you will return the gold. Then it's like ordinary people, what about the protagonist (how does it seem to have been said before) Then there are other people who think that the protagonist can't do it, what does the protagonist have to do to become gold, because what does it take to become gold. Wouldn't it be better if you had time to write a slap in the face? Although it's old-fashioned and awkward, it wasn't like this before. For example, when I go shopping for groceries, what do you think about the food? How does it compare with others? What is the method of buying groceries? Which method of payment is better? Should I pay with WeChat? How do ordinary people make money? How do they make money if they are the protagonist? Fa, what are the differences between it and other countries? How many types of money are there and what color they are. How much money can I give to a hundred change? Then I jump back and ask where this dish is grown. How is it different from other places? Why did I buy this dish? Why do others use this dish and you use that one? What's the difference? How can I be so good at this, and what is the difference between me and others? Is it similar to the one above?

I'm not qualified to comment after watching a pirated version, but I really can't help but want to say that I have too many subscriptions. Do you want to drop them?

😂This book is so bad. I thought it would be very long. I was so fooled by the pig-footed and brainless pretense that I thought I would change it, but I didn't expect it to be so long.

Why don't you continue? It's a fine product after all, but I can't even look down on it.

Where is the new book? Have you fed the dog? I can't keep writing and start a new book.

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Article Filling Festival Wishing Season"}The ability settings are pretty good, but I can't write emotional dramas. It would be great to just pursue a career without engaging in emotions.