The Celestial Emperor Begins as a Prince of the Fortune-Blessed Immortal Dynasty

It was a good story, but personally, I thought the punishment for the twin brother at the beginning was a bit lenient. Such fratricide should be severely punished. No one would want someone like that to rise to power; this kind of behavior should be taboo and not so easily committed. Perhaps it would have been better to write it as one of the older brother's important subordinates secretly plotting against the family elders through other means.

It's good, but there's too much introduction. Focus more on the plot; some things are only briefly mentioned. This kind of genre needs around 1000 chapters to be truly engaging. Too much introduction makes it feel padded.

It's not bad, but the male lead's desire to inherit his mother's clan's power is a bit toxic. His mother was killed by them, which also caused the male lead to be born prematurely. They have a grudge against him for obstructing his path. So, will he kill them in the future?

Some people ask why the author doesn't choose the path of enhancing their foundation and improving their standing. I don't know what the author was thinking; it's just making things difficult for themselves.

For some reason, at first glance, I thought the protagonist's name was "Kan Yijing" (看一睡). 🙂

Is there any connection between this and your first book?

Where did you come from, Dragon Clan? Yours is the only one I've completely bound. Your ending is a bit rushed. Also, the description of the realms is hard to evaluate.

Speechless. Are you just going to sculpt a statue out of clay? At least use some kind of sacred material!

Keep it up! It looks pretty good to me!

The 36 supernatural powers of orthodox Taoism hold a very high status; I hope you can write about them with flair. Keep it up!