Cultivating Demonic Immortality, Beginning with the Tiger Demon Yaksha

I hope the author sticks to his own ideas and doesn't let the protagonist change his appearance just because others say he is ugly, okay? The protagonist obviously looks so cool and looks like he is not a minor character at first glance. If he really changes his appearance and becomes the popular face in the novel, the characteristics will be gone.

How can I put it this way? The main character changed from a majestic appearance to a male and female character. It really made me feel like I had a breath in my chest that I couldn't breathe out. What a Jidao-ryu you did.

Why are there so many twists and turns in becoming a disciple? Why bother if you don't have to become a disciple after spending half a day?

I have been chasing here in the past few days. I will tell you when I see this. In fact, before Taiyi and Budai monks accepted disciples, it was really written into my heart. They were decisive in killing, repaying kindness and revenge. Not the Holy Mother, they have been working hard, but after rushing to accept disciples, they were given peerless skills and top-notch magic weapons. The future master was so awesome, and the sect behind them was powerful. It gave me a personal feeling that it was basically complete. It just depends on how you choose to succeed. Success is really easy, just like going upstairs. I used to go up step by step, but now I am taking the elevator, and then suddenly I lost the motivation to read, and it lost 90% of its appeal to me. Of course, this is for me personally. The author's writing style and upgraded settings, professional vocabulary, and professional skills are really solid. It is indeed a good book. See you again in the future. Maybe I will read it occasionally in the future.

Foretell a wave. Now the protagonist in the book is practicing both Buddhism and Taoism. Buddhism is temporarily ahead in Taoism, but the connection with Taoism has not been broken. In addition, the fundamental Buddhist Dharma that the protagonist currently practices, "The Supreme Secret Nana Sutra," is incomplete. Based on the origin of the legend of Nezha, make a blind guess. In the later stage, when there is no way forward, the protagonist will create his own fundamental method! Just like in the legend of Nezha, the Buddhist protector god General Yacha evolved into the great god of Santan Haihui. When the protagonist finally creates his own fundamental method, he will also change his path from Buddha, and the fundamental demon will change from "Yaksha General" to "Three Tan Haihui Great God"

There are flaws, but it's okay Safety: No major flaws but not enjoyable enough, the plot is old-fashioned but smooth  It is easy for new authors to start high and go low, and they need to practice more The classic plots in the early stage are gone away from the martial arts arcade. To be honest, I have tasted a lot of them. They are like assembly line industrial products, good or bad Now the second map has just arrived with more than 100 chapters. The author wants to use mythology, but is pessimistic about the author's plot design ability, but the plot rhythm is okay. The following is a subjective assumption The plot tension is not enough (pretending to be cool and being slapped in the face is not fun enough), and the new author basically writes the best on the first map, but then it wilts. All I can say is that the author should not just copy the script of "go away" and learn how other people write to show off and slap in the face. The core of the Yakuza-ryu upgrade flow is the cool writing. It's cool to upgrade violently, it's cool to ravage the enemy with big muscles, and it's cool to resolve the core contradiction of the plot. Just feel good and that's it. Don't worry about your unpopular mythical story. No one cares about it. I hope the author will focus on polishing the plot (write a good article that is good). Now that I see it, I feel that this book is gradually becoming boring. The two gods who appear are too high-level, which seriously reduces the tension and excitement of the protagonist's actions. The conflict between the villain monk and the protagonist is completely useless. I don't know what the author thinks, but what is the main contradiction of the protagonist now? There is no enemy, no crisis, and the protagonist can fight in the ring. The two gods blow their breath and it will be gone. Both gods are nervous, and the protagonist cannot participate. As for watching two old men competing for their apprentices, I can only say that I am totally impressed. No malice, I just want to communicate with the author and see what the author thinks. After all, I can't understand it.

Even if I want to write something new of my own, I still have to rely on the old stuff, which feels awkward!

The story in the county town is a classic plot. The tension is well created and very attractive. When I first entered the county town, I felt that the old enemy who introduced Zhang Lishi at the beginning was trying to recreate the plot of the county town, but the author took a different approach and wrote the story of two masters competing for their apprentices. The plot of competing for apprentices was somewhat interesting at first, but a lot of the perspective was focused on the two masters, and the protagonists were too relaxed, making it bland to read. I have been writing about the secret skills that the protagonist has developed and how much his cultivation has improved, but he cannot show it. I originally thought that the rebels were going to go on a killing spree in Lincheng, but it ended very easily. Recently, the protagonist has to cultivate multiple deities, which is a bit like the protagonist in old novels. He wants everything and knows everything. It is very comprehensive and feels like the word count is low. The various settings of the author are very good, and the writing style is also good, but the plot feels like Cunzhi to me. I have practiced a lot of unique skills in the past and have been accumulating. I thought it was going to explode, but it suddenly ended very dull.

I have been chasing the two big guys who are vying to recruit disciples, but they are practicing Buddhism and Taoism, which is a bit nondescript. The two world views and understandings at the bottom are different, so they can't get along.

She has golden fingers in the extreme realm, but she is indeed a super mother-in-law when doing things.