Xuanyuan, the God of Douluo

The plot is pretty good, it would be great if it didn't fall apart in the later stages.

I like the novel very much. I like the author and it gets better and better.

Who is the heroine 🤓

If the author chooses to forgive Ma Xiaotao and Shrek later, then this book will be useless, because after reading a few chapters, my mentality is about to explode. I can persist in reading it, purely because of the writing and the plot. Otherwise, if it were another book, I would not read it directly.

I found that the three protagonists written by the same author have similarities and differences in their respective paths, which are divided into dark lines and bright lines. The secret lines are all the same, go home, one goes back to the fairy sword, the other goes back to the ancient sword, and finally Xiaotuo will definitely go back to the world of Xuanyuan Sword to meet his master and his wife. The problem is that the three people are different. Tianlin's bright line is that he is protected by the royal way. He grew up under the protection of the sect, so his biggest purpose is to protect the sect and his family. Even if he unifies the continent later, he is too lazy to be the emperor, because all he does is to protect the two words, and has no desire for power. Later, he went from protecting the sect to protecting the continent, and followed his own path. Among the three protagonists, he is undoubtedly the most upright. Beixuan's bright line is that he is domineering and aggressive. He is the complete opposite of Tianlin and full of ambition. In order to establish Tianlu City, he can first trick Qibao to death and then force Ning Rongrong to surrender. He can also use his relatives to plot against Lan Dian and occupy their city. He also relies on deceiving Hu Liena and Qian Renxue's relationship to achieve stable development for a period of time. After becoming stronger, he decisively turns against him. Moreover, this person has no hatred in his heart. Even if someone plots against him, But as long as this person is still useful, he can put down his hatred and greet him with a smile. For example, Lingyuan Douluo doesn't have much brotherhood. Ma Hongjun regards him as his big brother. He still has no burden in using him to attract the attention of other forces. He is a complete profitist. Because he is aggressive and domineering, his character is also the most evil among the three. Fortunately, he sticks to the line of not killing innocent people indiscriminately. After all, he is still a human being. The last Yuwen Tuo, his bright line is undoubtedly that he is a chivalrous person who wants to take revenge. One is to avenge himself against Shrek, and the other is to avenge the village against the evil soul master. The protagonists of this line are generally neither good nor evil. No matter what, I hope that like the first two protagonists, he will follow his own path from beginning to end. He will not be like Huo Yuhao, who forgives and then puts it down. In this way, this book will definitely be useless.

One thing to say, I really want to see Ma Xiaotao chase her husband at the crematorium. From Chapter 16, it can be seen that Ma Xiaotao's feelings for the protagonist are no longer ordinary feelings of guilt, but she really likes the protagonist. Judging from Shrek's ancestral love brain, if the protagonist said a few heartless words after running away, considering Ma Xiaotao's character and the protagonist being naked with her for six years, I would definitely regret it, so! I really want to see the tsundere and loser Xiaotao chasing her husband in the crematorium

To be honest, I think with the author's writing style and plot control ability, the three protagonists can be written as Tianlin's time-traveling Douyi, Beixuan's time-traveling Dou2, and Yuwentuo's time-traveling Dou3. I really feel that if the evil-destroying nightmare is a Dou Er fan, then it can definitely try to aspire to the top of Dou Er in the same way as the Lingzhu Divine Sword strives for the top of Dou Er. In the evil-destroying nightmare, Bei Xuan needs to be tempered by ice and fire, so he can definitely use Ma Xiaotao. And Ling Luochen came to replace the original heroines Huo Wu and Shui Bing'er, and because Bei Luo, the father-in-law, left Bei Xuan with two super thugs in Douluo Continent, this way Bei Xuan could take Lan Xiang and the others to kill Ice and Fire in the early stage. After the eyes were taken out, Lan Xiang and the others also had a hundred thousand year old fairy grass to improve their cultivation and a hundred thousand year soul bone to improve their combat power. Beixuan could rely on Wang Bixie's bloodline to try to conquer the ice and fire dragon king's dragon soul and use his identity as the son of the demon emperor. To subdue the soul beast clan, this way there won't be anything like Ning Fengzhi who plotted against Beixuan because he was afraid of Beixuan joining the Spirit Hall, and Beixuan plotted against Ning Fengzhi who died in the Lingzhu Divine Sword out of revenge and profit. In this case, there will not be some readers who chose not to watch the evil-destroying nightmare because Beixuanhui designed Ning Fengzhi As for Yuwen Tuo, I really feel that with his martial arts and skills, he will not be worthy of his master's name if he does not clear the hell dungeon in Legend of the Dragon King. For example, if his first martial spirit has the power of fire, when he goes to the Dragon King period with this martial spirit, he will definitely be treasured by Leng Yaozhu, the deputy tower master of the Spirit Pagoda. In this way, the protagonist can have a new story line with Gu Yuena, and the protagonist can also use the flame as the banner to establish the spirit of passing down the fire. In this way, the protagonist's second martial soul, Xuanyuan Sword, can show its role. , Xuanyuan Sword is the sword of the Human Emperor, and Gu Yuena is the co-master of the soul beasts, and the Douluo plane during the Dragon King period is said to be the unification of the mainland. In fact, it is exactly the same as the Republic of China and the late Tang Dynasty. All forces are divided into one party. The Federation is the apparent master of the mainland, but the result is that even the direct army is not as large as the army controlled by a few soul master families, and Sly inside Ke, Tang Sect, and Spirit Transferring Pagoda respectively represent the schoollord, warlord, and chaebol. Later, the protagonist can join the Federation to conquer the army first, and then nationalize the general Tang Sect, the schoollord Shrek, and the chaebol Spirit Transferring Pagoda. After the mainland is actually unified, he can use the power of the entire continent to unite with Gu Yuena's strong soul beast clan to attack the abyss and fight against Tang Hao. The couple and Tang Wulin, who was possessed by Zhang Wei in the later stages of Legend of the Dragon King, can later allow the protagonist to discuss and fight with Gu Yuena, the co-leader of the soul beasts, as the Human Emperor, on how to resolve conflicts between humans and soul beasts. After both parties resolve the issues, the protagonist can use the Xuanyuan Sword and the elements of Gu Yuena to rebuild a divine realm that is stronger than the Great God Circle. The above are just some of my thoughts. Let's discuss them in a civilized manner. If you don't like it, please don't criticize me. Thank you.

Qiuer

Snow Emperor has helped the protagonist so much and also cares about the protagonist. I think it is reasonable to give him a heroine identity. It's okay for Ice Emperor to follow Snow Emperor and the protagonist, she likes Snow Emperor anyway The plot of Meng Hongchen is too little, there is hope for more plots in the future As for Ma Xiaotao, who is talked about the most in the comment area, I can't guess how the author will deal with it. According to the character of the protagonist, it will definitely not be as extreme as some comments say to be a human pig, but if you have to fight PK like Xuanzi, and then be killed by the protagonist with a single sword, it would seem ordinary I have read this one among the three books by the author. I am a firm harem party member, and multiple female protagonists are very suitable for me 🤓

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Sister Ling Luochen

Yuwentuo

This martial soul system is truly a genius setting, simple, clear and open source. It is basically the novel with the most fans on the entire Internet. I can't even imagine how powerful this IP would be if it were written by a better author and run by the third young master of the Tang family.

It is recommended to be more technical when taking revenge. Don't kill directly. Attack the heart first and then kill. For example, Ma Xiaotao died of a mental explosion, and then the evil fire recurred; Dean Yan died of scheming; Xuanzi died of arrogance; and Mr. Mu died of Shrek.

I hope the author will accept Snow Emperor as the heroine😭😭

The protagonist in the first book was sent away because of a computer explosion and time-travelled. The protagonist in the second book was the brother of the protagonist in the first book who was sent away together because of the computer explosion and time-traveled. The protagonist in this book is the neighbor of the first book who was sent away because of the explosion and time-traveled. The protagonist of the fourth book is the downstairs neighbor of the first book who was killed by the explosion and time-traveled. Then when the fourth book is finished, the fifth book won't be about Tianlin's upstairs neighbor who traveled through time after falling to his death because the floor collapsed due to the explosion, right? ? ?

How about killing all Shrek, and using their belief in Poseidon and their resentment before death to make the poison of faith, which can weaken Tang San by then, killing two birds with one stone. It's revenge, and it disgusts Tang San. As expected of me, I can think of such a good idea 😌😌😌

It feels like the protagonist and Xiao Xiao have no emotional connection. It's purely because Xiao Xiao has given up too much for the protagonist. The protagonist doesn't want to let down Xiao Xiao's feelings. There is no mention that the protagonist loves Xiao Xiao. It always feels weird.

To be honest, the content of your book is really good, but Lei does have a lot of Mandarin.

Please give me some fanfics about Xiao Xiao, the heroine of Dou Er, thank you all (I really like the character Xiao Xiao).

Ice Emperor

I would like to ask what this book says about Huo Yuhao

. . . Why are the protagonists of the author's two books so frustrated in the early stages?

Qualification certification. I don't forgive Ma Xiaotao's praise

You see, I am so angry. Was that Ma Xiaotao killed in the end? Is Shrek destroyed?

It's a decent Douluo fanfic, but the main character looks weird. The author still has his own ideas, and his writing about Noumenon Sect is okay, but it is not as comfortable as reading Lingzhu.

The protagonist is so thoughtful. How to say it? It's a good idea to have, but it feels a bit whimsical. Also, there's really no need to target anyone. It is not hateful to do whatever it takes to become stronger. What is hateful is slander.

To be honest, I feel Ye Xishui is quite pitiful.

The author's newly written evil path + hypocrite + villain protagonist I really hate it. Please read Shenhuo again to wash your eyes.

Yuwentuo🙂