Laying Low in the Marsh, Preparing to Become a Dragon

It's been so long since I've seen a book from the world of extraordinary beings that talks to people about reason. 😰 The last time I encountered one was...

Taking the water route and seeking official recognition are two different paths.

It seems to be written fairly well, but it's only natural for humans to eat demons and demons to eat humans. A person wearing a demon's skin who doesn't want to be a demon is just not worth keeping. I've seen a few chapters of it before and saw it again today. Just sharing my thoughts, this is just one person's opinion.

Those in positions of power shouldn't always intervene directly to establish checks and balances. There's no need to intimidate subordinates. A better approach would be to guide two similar groups to self-regulate, perhaps with a truly intelligent steward to assist. It seems like Senju's brain isn't functioning well due to his drug use.

A cheat that doesn't improve itself isn't a good cheat!

The way you're writing it now, you're not going to retain anyone. 😥

It's quite interesting; it gives off a feeling of wandering the mountains.

Seeking a title? Only those without bloodline, cultivation techniques, or resources would resort to this path.

The protagonist's personality isn't particularly compelling; it's hard to describe what kind of person he is. He has a mediocre personality, but his subordinates are vividly portrayed.

It's written really well; I feel like it could easily get you a featured post. But since I'm still a new author, I probably won't be popular yet.