
Under One Person, Starting from the Person with the Ability of the Thread Fruit
一人之下,从线线果实能力者开始
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- Completed
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- 519k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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The author forcibly weakened the Line Fruit and Haki, turning their consumption into Qi, which has nothing to do with physical strength. It is estimated that they will not be able to awaken later, and the Haki will also be weakened. No wonder the previous author went crazy and said that the protagonist's cheats were weak, but it turned out that he was directly cut off 😅
Doflamingo is killing randomly even without the Thread Fruit. The powerful physique among pirates cannot be touched by one person. After Luffy's Ape King Gun knocked down Mingge from a low altitude, the ground in the middle of Dressrosa Island was smashed into two halves by Mingge. Mingge just passed out and was beaten on the head by one person? Not to mention Ming Ge's speed. From the time Monet informed Ming Ge to Monet's death, Ming Ge flew directly to Ice and Fire Island in less than an hour. Referring to Luffy and his gang taking a boat from Ice and Fire Island to Dressrosa Island, we know that Ming Ge's speed is faster than ordinary fighter jets.
Very poisonous
Chapter 5: It's so poisonous that even the ancestor Shen Nong couldn't save him.
I saw this book again. After I clicked in and saw the comments in the comment area, I was relieved. I obviously came to read the book for Ming Ge Xian Xian Guo, but the author was so embarrassed that he had to learn the eight magic skills and sell the sheep's head as the dog's meat.
I came here to see the thread fruits, but now they are all eight magic skills, boring
If you want to cut it, why write it? Opening high and moving low like this is just looking for scolding.
You have to get the outline right first. If you want to cut into the events, the fruits have already been borne. What are the Eight Wonders? Isn't this putting the cart before the horse?
The fruit is the path to invincibility, why need to borrow the Eight Wonders again? Goodbye
Forcefully suppress the combat power Haha
What you wrote is really rubbish. Go to work.
After reading Chapter 20, I feel that the protagonist's pretense is too stiff and awkward, and the author's writing style needs to be improved.
One Piece's force value has been lowered by you. It just feels boring. In the world of pirates, the body is very strong.
Why don't we stop making such a big mistake and give it a power that fits the current worldview? I have to give it a big hit, and then I am afraid that the plot will collapse and I will weaken it in various ways. Now I have a good temper, and before I would just scold someone. After reading ten chapters, my low blood pressure was almost cured. Dude, you are the only one, even the studio's AI writing is better than yours.
Pirate Devil Fruit? Haha, it is always the person who is strong, not the so-called fruit ability. If you don't understand this, you won't get far! First of all, Doflamingo himself is strong, so his fruit ability is strong, don't reverse the priorities!
I don't know why I want to go to the company. I can't figure it out. Being a different person doesn't mean that I don't have the inheritance of my skills. I can't figure out why I want to go to the company? The company only treats strangers as a balance, and cannot kill them at will. Temporary workers are the ones who take the blame and can be abandoned at any time. As long as you go to the company, you won't be treated as a tool by your boss, because you have no background, and most temporary workers have backgrounds. As for fighting, the company does not care about aliens' fighting, as long as there is balance. As for aliens' fighting and killing, the company will not care. It will only focus on ordinary people's affairs, such as aliens using their abilities on ordinary people, or killing ordinary people at will. This is the company's management system. I don't know why the protagonist wants to go to the company?
Mengxin has never seen anyone, so I would like to ask, does Xu San and Xu Si have two brothers named Xu Yi and Xu Er?
Disadvantages of Eight Wonders
Shen Ji Bai Lian: It is easy to burn out the brain. Fenghou Qimen: It will cause confusion in one's own timeline and may cause various diseases, such as Wang Ye's warning of being riddled with all kinds of diseases. Hands on both hands: It may make people mature prematurely, change their height, facial features, cognition and consciousness, and may even lead to insanity and loss of self. Turtle Fly Flow: Consume one's own vitality. Juling the spirit and sending the general: It is easy to attract the backlash of the spirit general. If the king becomes insane, there is a potential risk of losing his true self. Liuku Immortal Thief: The user will gradually dilute the human attributes, infinitely expand the dark side of human nature, have endless desire for the flesh and blood of aliens, and may eventually become less human. Qi Ti Origin: Because it is a method learned by stealing the secrets of heaven, the law of heaven will add impurities to it, causing the owner's body to suffer from physical conditions. This side effect can be called "God's Punishment"
Different power systems, compatibility requires a lot of thinking. Forcing the plot to be reasonable is more intelligent. When contacting the company, at least you must act in accordance with the company's rules. Let Xia He catch Lu Liang and the others were immobilized by Sun Wukong? Looking at release and catch? Lu Liang had to cut off his limbs and cut off his tongue to understand the situation with both hands. You can understand it by cutting off your hands? Do you think you are cuter? It would be strange for a pirate and a person to write a book after reading an introduction and not get scolded. It's okay to play straight with smart people, but in front of Zhang Chulan, you just want to hide the scheming stuff that you have mastered for more than ten years and still want Qi Ti Origin? What the hell.
It should be written that Devil Fruit is a version of the Monkey King, and it can only be simulated by the system, so no one will complain about it.
The writing is quite good, but the combat power needs to be tempered a bit.
Regarding changes to Chapter 5
It was an exchange with Xu Xiang, a small person who dared to go to the person in charge of the North China Region, which was a little bit poisonous. It is still a good idea to become a temporary assistant. Or something else... Give me some suggestions, I will make some changes in the next couple of days I feel great to all you lovely readers~
Kaido, Whitebeard, Lingling, Sengoku, Garp, Akainu, Kizaru, Zoro, Robin, Luo, Snake Princess and the poisonous fruit Thunder Fruit have welcomed a new heavyweight.