Cultivation into the World of Immortality Begins with Inheriting Game Assets

The plot is okay, but there are too many women. It's a bit annoying to have so many female characters.

I found this book at the bottom of the new book list, which is very suitable to my taste. I have a hunch that as long as this book can last until it is put on the shelves, it will be a stable high-quality book in the future. It can be said that I have found a book among a group of people that I can read in the future. It is not easy!

Perhaps the author should clearly define himself as an author who can write about the emotions between men and women? Personally, I think there are four types of male videos that write about men and women: those who can write about the relationship between men and women to immerse the readers, those who don't write about emotions, the sober type who doesn't write about emotions, those who avoid writing with no sense of existence, those who often talk nonsense but don't write about emotions and are not sober. The fourth type is very confusing. If you can't write the first and second options, you might as well try the third option.

How should I put it? The plot is ok, but the text expression is a bit cumbersome 🥱 It's just food and fodder.

After reading the beginning, the creativity is quite good, mainly because there are too many women. Brother, you are cultivating immortals. Hundreds of rivals compete for success. If you don't advance, you will die. You can learn from your predecessors, the sense of urgency written by the Holy Son of the Sun 😥

Summon Shennong😎

Clusters of heavy artillery bombarded and killed the immortal cultivators. I have a world of immortal cultivators.

At least the early writing is good, and I feel it has potential among old bookworms. Please vote for 7 months first and see what happens next.

It's okay, just a little too much inner drama, less would have been better.

So it's all collected? Personally, I like a single female protagonist, but if there are multiple women who are ambiguous with the protagonist, I support accepting them all.

The author writes very well, and there is no problem in reading it overall. It is just that a lot of times it is a bit pretentious. He can go straight, but he chooses to take a detour and adds a lot of inner drama. I can only say that there are pros and cons. The advantage is that it enriches the character image, but the disadvantage is that it is awkward and not direct to read. I hope the author can be more direct in the future. I vote for two monthly votes. I hope the writing will get better and better.

Begging to read

The age should be doubled. It should be said that the average age is okay (after all, practitioners often fight, so it is normal for the average age to be low). The upper age limit for Qi training in the book was stabbed in the back by reality. In reality, some people really live to be 124 years old.

Not bad 🤔

I quite like the three-no character you wrote (it's purely a personal

Well written and quite interesting 😎

After reading a few chapters, I personally feel that it is better for the protagonist to have a calm attitude. He does not fight or fight, just wants to pass safely. He is willing to ignore all fame and fortune in this world. He is cautious, low-key, and saves his life.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

The author writes very well. I can't read enough. Please write quickly. Write quickly.