Sword God Zhuo Bufan

It's better not to travel through time. The plot of time traveling to Swordsman is boring. And I have to contact women. Either Yue Lingshan or Qu Feiyan. While not letting the protagonist lick him (the protagonist is written to be decisive in killing), he also has to write some emotional scenes in a subtle way so that the woman can lick him. There is a feeling of being both upright and upright. I don't know what the author is thinking. The main line is unknown. There is a feeling that I just started writing without thinking about how to write.

There is nothing attractive about it. There is no plot direction in the first few dozen chapters. They are all descriptions of the protagonist's practice and martial arts. How can you be so popular if you can't attract readers like this?

I'm convinced, there are so many chapters in A Swordsman, so forget it if it's useful. However, this kind of low-martial world is useless. What did you do in the world of "Swordsman"?

From the first time he traveled through the world, the protagonist's personality began to contradict himself, and he was already enjoying himself. When he met Linghu Chong for the first time, everything Linghu Chong did to Tian Boguang was all to save the little nun. When the court is stupid? And you wrote it yourself in the book that the imperial court is very strong here. So what will be the consequences of the Three Swordsmen waiting for them after they find out? You can do it with deus ex machina, but the logic problem is huge.

Too big, too many martial arts, and the content is boring

"Swordsman" only lasts for 100 chapters, so why don't you write a thousand chapters in Jin Yong's book and then end it?

The stakes are too high, no matter whether you win or lose, you will benefit. If you can't write many chapters, you will definitely not be able to continue writing.

Before entering the dungeon, food and grass After entering the dungeon, poisonous weeds

Another one with a lot of martial arts skills. 🤫

The most annoying thing about spoilers is that the excuses are made up and are full of loopholes.

The protagonist is always struggling with communication issues and is very speechless. Everything about receiving goods is just a matter of one sentence from the author. Even if he is given so many martial arts skills, he can't even practice it.

It's a bit childish, three points and one line, fighting projections in space, practicing swordsmanship, fighting enemies, and then going to space again, a bit boring

Abusing the mainstream, they directly changed the Tianshan Child Mother into an immortal, but they did not elevate themselves. Torturing the owner purely for the sake of torturing the owner. . . This is what Han Paopao couldn't do even if he took 13 years to become an immortal. Not to mention the protagonist who is worse than Han Paopao. . . 886

Why is the plot of Swordsman not over yet? This part is so boring.

The extraordinary Nirvana path and the Nirvana monk are not the same thing at all. What is extraordinary is the Shaolin outer sect kung fu, which can be practiced to the point of death at 9 levels. The Nirvana Demon Monk was created by Hui Kechuang. The low-level Marrow Cleansing Sutra will never pass the twelve levels if you practice it to the top.

It feels like the protagonist upgrades when playing a game. The Heavenly Fusion Sword is so powerful, but he is still so useless in reality.

You can still look at it earlier, but it's hard to finish the Swordsman chapter at the beginning.

They all know that they are going to be exterminated, but they still don't run away, and they don't look for cheats in Demi-Gods and Dragons 😅

Come on

Those who wash Guangshen are still knowledgeable people. It makes me laugh to death.