
Mortal: Xiao Yan Travels Through Han Li
凡人:萧炎穿越韩立
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Poison spot
The most recent one has started to be poisonous. You have prepared so much, not to mention recovering your cultivation level. You are in the early stage of Shen Transformation or the late stage of Nascent Soul, but you have no cultivation level. Then you can just take it away. What a waste of preparations you have.
How did you learn in the early and middle stages?
Don't confuse the morals of Han Li and Xiao Yan
The author's writing is indeed good. Han Li is a native of this world, and his education is similar to that of our feudal dynasty. If he had not cultivated immortality to broaden his horizons in his first life, he would probably have been a doctor or something like that in his whole life, and there would be no Taoist ancestors in the future. But even so, Han Li's morality is considered very good in the entire human world. We cannot use our moral values to compare the morality of Han Li's era. As for Huohuo, who has gone through nine years of compulsory education 🤓, there is no problem in being a good person. At least he does not treat others with courtesy, nor is he ungrateful to his teacher, nor does he treat his daughter as a pawn in the plan. Even if he becomes Dou Emperor later, he will still have the same life and death issues as before. Difficult friends should be brothers, not subordinates 😁 (I am not insinuating anyone, please don't take my seat) So I am still looking forward to this book. At least Huohuo's values are quite in line with contemporary times. Some time-travelers were assimilated by the whole world within three days after crossing. In this way, when you open your mouth, you kill, kill, kill, men, women, old, young, beautiful, ugly, fat, thin, tall, short, poor, rich, good people, bad people, the weak are violently killed, the strong cannot escape pursuit, the whole person is in the world of cultivating immortals. It has become a humanoid killing machine. I don't know what kind of mentality they have in writing this kind of thing. In fact, in the past, people would just laugh and laugh if they pretended to be 13. Nowadays, these new authors are simply unreadable if they don't kill people. If they write about not killing people, or let someone go, they will be called a holy mother. Alas😢
Has the series of online protagonists swapping lives begun?
I don't know how Xiao Yan's character died when he was a mortal cultivating immortals.
Well written.
But there is one thing that is not pleasing to the eye, and that is the problem of Yao Lao. Yao Lao himself is a master of refining medicine, and he will not be so bad no matter how he comes to a mortal. After reading the whole article, Yao Lao seems to be dispensable. Logically speaking, if you get the Foundation Establishment Pill, you have to take a look at it to see if it is possible to change the recipe. The result is not a word, nothing! It would be better not to write about the old medicine!
Why not let Xiao Yan himself come? The fire attribute is mixed with a trace of wood attribute, and the fire and wood spiritual roots are close to the heavenly spiritual roots. With such a stable character, Han Li should be allowed to fight against the Soul Emperor.
Now that Xiao Yan has passed through, doesn't Han Li have to pass through with the little green bottle? They don't pay much attention to spiritual roots there. With Han Li's character, he won't be worse than Xiao Yan, right? And it should be Han Li who has experienced the change of body seizing. Xiao Yan and Yao Lao know that there is something similar to spiritual consciousness seizing the body. It would be too unfair for Han Li to face the unsuspecting Soul Palace without experiencing the body seizing. It would be quite interesting to see where Han Laomo is!
Does anyone know the leveling? Wouldn't he still be like Han Li in the original work and enter Xutian Palace without a Nascent Soul?
A story about a mortal who changes his skin and cultivates immortality. Take a Yao Lao to treat inflammation, and your cultivation will be as useless as Han Li's, but you will still be able to level up, which is basically the original route. Summary: It is better to read the original work again.
Han Li originally formed the elixir at the age of 126 and entered the Xutian Palace at the age of 147. I would like to ask, Xiao Yan established the foundation earlier than Han Li and formed the elixir earlier. He didn't spend 20 years refining the magic weapon, right? He didn't spend 60 years practicing his skills before forming the elixir. Did he advance to Nascent Soul when the Xutian Palace was opened? The main thing is that the plot is basically the same. You can tell by looking at the title list. If you don't want to subscribe anymore, and the plot is still the same as the original work, then what else should I watch?
Have you been suppressing your combat power recently? It's been 20 years since you arrived in Chaotic Star Sea, so why are you still in the early stage of pill formation? Also, why does this external avatar act like it has its own thoughts? At first, I thought it was just a clone that can act independently. Anyway, for me, a clone having self-awareness is an absolute poison. If that is the case, the author could please answer it so that I can run away in advance.
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In fact, when I read this book, besides wanting to see a chivalrous Han Li, I also wanted to see how Huo Huo felt about the contrast between the female characters in the original book and Han Li 😌 In the original book, Han Li basically told the female characters not to disturb her, but not to see anything inappropriate (Yuan Yao: I have no objection). I love cultivating immortals, so please don't disturb me, thank you. Then I want to see Xiao Yan flirting with other female characters. I think it should be very interesting. As for the author's talk about seeing a big harem, what do you think of the theme of harem? Some people love it and some people hate it. Most of the emotional scenes are not very well written. It looks like a harem for the sake of a harem. The basic plot is that the tiger's body trembles and he falls into his arms quickly. Show off your domineering attitude and get into bed quickly. Afterwards, it had to be you. You had no bullshit relationship experience, and you were completely devoted to the protagonist. You were completely devoted to the protagonist, and you were even willing to die without him 😰. I can only say that I was really poisoned by a lot of this kind of thing back then. 😅 Then I will talk about some of my superficial thoughts. Please note that my thoughts are only my own and do not represent those of other book lovers. Please do not make any comments. 🙏 I read a lot of mortal fanfics. Most of the fanfics with more than a million words, except for the brainless and cool ones from the studio, most of the good ones are written closer to the original works, that is, writing a world of flesh and blood. Everyone has their own ideas, and they are not the kind of tool people who come out to promote the characters. Of course, this kind of writing is usually written by great gods. Although it is said that the early progress will be slow when writing like this, but there is a fan base, so you can write like this without worrying about dissuading readers. However, writing like this is basically a dead end for a new author, unless the writing is very good, but except for the kind of brainless and cool writing from the studio, the other ones that are written are basically of this type, such as casual cultivators, and Li Feiyu's attributes of cultivating immortals. Then I say it again. What I write so far is my own opinion. I do not speak on behalf of any other book friends. All the content expressed are my own superficial thoughts. There is no attack on others or criticism of other people's opinions. Okay, that's it, let me continue. I feel that the most enjoyable part of this book at present and in the future should be to take a different path from Han Tianzun, to be a real immortal, and to take a different path in this world of underworld cultivating immortals. It's really that little bit different. The temperament and chivalry of young people draw their swords to help when the road is rough. The evil cultivator kills people and practices martial arts and is paid with blood. This allows Xiao Yan, who has received the education of a peaceful world, to truly change this dark world of cannibalism. This is probably to truly change the human world after cultivating Huohuo to its peak. Some people can't stand others rescuing and helping others. I feel that the world is so dark, and these people are all saints, but I don't think there is anything saintly about it. Although there is an old saying that you don't care about other people's business, but when others are in danger or encounter difficulties, let's not stand by and watch, but don't be sarcastic when you see others helping others. In real life, when I first entered the society, I encountered obstacles everywhere, but to be honest, there are people who add insult to injury, but there are more people who help me, and colleagues and new friends do what they can. It really helped me a lot and taught me a lot. Society itself is a big dyeing vat. The people you come into contact with are different from the people you meet. Everyone has their own views and opinions on social customs and attitudes of people. However, there is indeed a group of people in this society who truly selflessly provide help to others, and most people will do what they can when others encounter difficulties, even if the help is small. Isn't this the same in Tibet this year? Many volunteers went to help rescue people. Many friends from far away could not go there, but they donated water and food, so that the rescue supplies were full in less than a week. The big guys and the rescue team worked hard to build the road. The best thing was that accommodation and food were provided within 24 hours. Another book I like is "I Have a World of Immortal Cultivation". The world there is a true humanitarian cultivation of immortality, and the setting and world view are really attractive. I personally think that the real reason for his popularity, apart from showing off, is that his setting and worldview have taken a different path from others. The cultivation of immortality mentioned in the past was all about the underworld cultivating immortality, but Erba (the author of that book) wrote a different approach, which really made people see another possibility in the world of immortality. So in my opinion, what attracts me most about this book is the bottom line and chivalry of the protagonist, and the fact that Huo Huo really feels in his heart that this underworld cultivating immortality is wrong, and wants to change it, instead of adapting to it, going with the flow, having no bottom line in doing things, taking advantage of other people's feelings, not poisoning a whole city of people and then saying that they deserve it, nor that after becoming a god, he refused to let the mortal forces unify many times, but continued to remain divided. Or maybe it's just that I'm a bit of a virgin myself, and I just like protagonists who have a bottom line, empathy and empathy. I also hope that the author can write more about this aspect. Of course, it is just a suggestion from ordinary book friends and has no intention of interfering with the author's writing. Because in my opinion, writing like this is a refreshing point, a refreshing point that can make people feel physically and psychologically happy, and this refreshing point can also make people feel happy in real life after reading the book 😁 Finally, to summarize, all the above comments are my own suggestions, and there is no compulsion. The author needs to write it in, but I just hope that there will be more descriptions of this aspect and less of the harem. Whether the author thinks it is good or bad depends entirely on the author himself. I have no imposed opinions. I hope that book friends can discuss it rationally and don't point fingers. This author's writing is also very good. Please give me your encouragement 😁
Xiao Yan is also a time traveler. He should have reacted when he heard that he is a cultivator of immortality. What you wrote is completely like a native.
30 Thousand-year-old elixir, just give it to me if you ask for it, it's too extraordinary for ordinary people
Yao Lao only has his soul body left, and his strength can surpass that of Nascent Soul. According to the Dou Emperor's Mahayana Ascension, the Dou Sheng strongman is also a transformed god. In the early stage, it is okay to walk sideways in the lower world.
To be honest, Xiao Yan will not do better than Lao Han in the background of a mortal. Xiao Yan is the pure template of the son of the world. Although his family has a poor background, he has parents and clansmen, a top power princess who follows him wholeheartedly, a top assistant to carry with him, and top skills to practice. Noble people continue to appear to help, and in the end, you can meet the top boss to pass on. This existence is the template of the Son of the World. Look at Lao Han, his own talent is like shit, he finally got the teacher to teach him the skills, but in the end, he is trying to seize the body. He cultivates diligently, and for People can endure as long as they can in life, and they have not met many noble people on their way to immortality. There are no top accessories like Yao Lao who can transmit inheritance and skills. If he wants to take drugs, he has to go to all the troubles to find a single party. He does not dare to react too much when being called around by monks who are more powerful than him. He ascends to the spiritual world and does not care about himself. He killed himself, but as a result, he ascended to the immortal world and was tricked by others. I feel sad just looking at Old Han's journey. He became a big boss in the spirit world at noon, but he didn't have a good time for a few years, so he had to ascend hastily because of the divine refining skills. He almost didn't get killed by others when he ascended to the immortal world. Han Li: It's too difficult for me! If Han Li didn't have this Sky Palm Vase, if there was even the slightest glitch in his path to immortality, you would have to beg him not to die. Xiao Yan is not the case, he is the Son of the Existing World. I suspect that the protagonist of this world has at least two passive auras. One that cannot kill me will only make me stronger. The second one will reduce the accidental mortality rate by 99%.
The physical strength of mortals is really exhausted
With Xiao Yan's mind, even with Yao Lao's soul body, he felt that he would not be able to go far in the world of mortal cultivation. If it were an old coin like Gu Yue Fang Yuan, I feel like it could still work.
Will the Hidden Moon Sect and the Yan family let Yan Ruyan and you, a four-spirited alchemist who can't even build a foundation, go to the Blood Trial? Rather than intuitively grabbing it back for you? Is Yan Ruyan's Tianlinggen?
Ye Fan went to Dou Po, and Xiao Yan came to Mortal. I wonder if any author wrote about Han Li going to cover the sky.
It can only be said that the author is indeed a novice. If you don't miss any of the poisonous points that many veteran authors would not commit, you can only count them as fodder.
I want to see Shi Hao travel through Han Li. Main hammer
The ending of "Spreading Flowers", the first novel that has been followed from beginning to end.
Regarding the fact that I voted four times and the author didn't give me more information.
As title
Since he is no longer in the Dou Qi Continent, and the rules of the world of immortal cultivation can seize the body, why did Yao Lao directly seize Xiao Yan's body?
Finish spreading flowers
After all, another world has ended😭
Change settings all the time, discard new settings, speechless, ugly
Extra
Check the bookshelf every day to see if there are extra chapters that return to Fighting to Break the World 😭
When will Xiao Yan return to Dou Qi Continent?