Become the Dark Lord Starting in Azkaban!

The writing is not bad, but the design is too bad. The natives are not native, and the time travel and I don't know the plot. I don't know what I want to write. The plot is also ridiculous. If you don't know anything, you just go there and dare to escape from prison with someone you don't know.

Become a yarn, a black cat, a whole magical creature, wipe it, abandon it

The setting is very new, but the timing is not very good. It is less readable in the second grade. It is better to be Harry's senior.

The only big bad point is that the protagonist really regards Lockhart as a capable teacher and respects him very much. Based on the protagonist's previous experience, knowledge, and character, this kind of artificial plot is completely unreasonable Other than that, there is no big bad point, except that the story is a bit delayed, and there are some minor bad points. It doesn't matter whether you are aboriginal or a time traveler. If you write it well, it will work, but if you write it poorly, it will be in vain And based on the concept of the protagonist and story development of the book, there should be no heroine. If there is a heroine, it must be Luna. Now the books with the heroine Hermione are basically equated with bad and self-interest.

This is the most interesting Harry Potter fanfic in recent times. If it keeps up, it may impact the ambrosia community.

Is it designed like this for Horcruxes, using Voldemort as a cash machine?

I have a question, it should be "The Leaky Cauldron", not "The Broken Axe"

This hanging seems to be for the seven life boxes 😁

The plot is very smooth and innovative, I love watching it

Being called Dylan always reminds me of Bob Dylan

I've invested and I'm going to finish the book! ! !