Martial Arts Ascending to Immortality Begins with Corpses Taking Pills

The writing style is okay, but the writing has no logic, and the character logic is completely unreasonable. There is a life-and-death feud, a villain, and superior strength. If you don't kill the protagonist directly, where can you play the house? And then it's over and gone? So stupid

The power of ascension in the starting point is getting more and more rubbish. The founder of modern immortals, Xiao Qian, is a Mahayana monk. He can destroy the world and destroy the earth with a single thought. He is invincible in the universe. Now he is not even as good as a local dog. It's really disgusting.

In reality, ordinary computers cannot run large-scale software or they will freeze. How can your tribulation-transcending soul be able to withstand it in an ordinary body?

The opening setting was not good and the protagonist was written as an old monster. The author couldn't control it at all and it didn't look like him at all. It's better to write about foundation building or golden elixir casual cultivation.

There are too many books in Qidian that I can't read anymore. This book may have some problems, but at least I can read it without being picky. It also gives the new author some confidence. I hope the author can successfully show the world in his heart. Of course there are good ideas to say. After all, it is easier to destroy than to create. Will applying some anti-inflammatory drugs while criticizing be more conducive to the healthy growth of the world in the book? I hope everyone can be less violent. Show more care Sorry, I think it's preaching. I'm just posting my thoughts. If you agree, you can copy and paste. Please feel free to do so.

Those two maids should be the heroines, don't use them like tools and then throw them away. There is no point in reading too many novels written by Hei Canshen. The male protagonist should still have some emotions.

Assuming that there is no protagonist Chen Sheng in the future, the human race in this different world will be destroyed. There are two ceilings. The Literary Sage is suspected to be critically ill, and the Martial Sage cannot take care of himself. The demon clan has a great advantage and has placed a lot of hidden stakes in the human race, which makes the people of Liangzhou panic. One moment, espionage is espionage, and the next moment there is internal fighting. Don't forget that there is a big demon who has been born outside the city. He is not dead, and it is only a matter of time before he can make a comeback, not to mention that in the same realm, most demon clans are strong, and only human monks have divine power. Chen Zhenhai must be a traitor. Bi Jing Wu Hua Kai can change the ribs around the protagonist's heart, and changing the appearance and bones is not a problem, let alone the Chen family, and other wealthy families also have traitors, right? Now there is no chaos in Liangzhou City. I will give the author two monthly passes.

This author's pretense is so embarrassing. The author worked very hard to write, but his writing style is so bad. The eunuch is not far away.