Seventy-Two Transformations Starting from the Crocodile Gar

After reading a few chapters, I was very excited. If you can turn into a fish and don't have to worry about food and drink, why don't you just leave and why do you have to pay taxes?

After reading Chapter 52, I lost interest. There are some parts of this book that are good, such as the need to be on guard against others and the description of safety issues. The protagonist now has his hands and feet tied up to do this and that! Why do you say that? ! Even if the social logic of the fantasy background is there! Once you have the strength, if you still put it here and there, it feels like the sky is falling! The protagonist is considered to have some strength in the local area, whether it is literature or science, there is a development direction, literature, addition and subtraction within a hundred, science, plow, textile and other convenient equipment, even if you don't understand wool, it will not keep warm, and there is no paper for wiping your butt. There is a section in the plot where writing books is precious. Is it possible that the protagonist is invincible in the world and starts printing and making paper? People's behavior and knowledge determine the breadth and depth. Now, it doesn't matter if it is not good-looking, but the writing is very good. From the protagonist opening his eyes to cutting into the area and reaching the point where he is a master in the area, the various characters and plot arrangements are still okay, but it is not interesting to read, so let's go first. In the summer, I read two books about the protagonist being a hunter. Forget it, don't live. I don't know if it was a novice or if it was written like that on purpose!

It seems that eels turn into males after giving birth to babies?

Do you know why you don't like watching low-level martial arts? Without a God's perspective, the world of low-level martial arts will inevitably move towards power and wisdom. The problem is that these two things are beyond the control of ordinary people, and it's very silly and embarrassing to write about them😓

The introduction really shows the level... It feels wrinkled.

It's okay, but the title of this book is terrible. I almost didn't click in. How many times does the author update a day?

It originally copied the setting and the writing was mediocre. The plot at the beginning left a lot of readers behind. The main character's name was also a mess. The results were okay. How could the author still be unsatisfied? ? Still want a big hit? The update is a mess,

Let me talk about a few minor issues: Firstly, it is obvious that the beginning is simply to add some flow, and the writing is quite good, but later on, I have to add more settings, making it confusing! Secondly, although he clearly knew that martial arts existed, the protagonist never thought of finding a martial arts school in the previous dozens of chapters. Thirdly, it feels very awkward to have to include characters from Water Margin! What a drama! To summarize, the first twenty or so chapters were quite interesting to read. After the protagonist went to the black market, a bunch of meaningless settings were added, and then I couldn't stand it anymore!

It is better to change the owner to a god. The pig's feet can change, but the "god" remains the same. The god is more appropriate and has a strong character.

Looking at the introduction, the introduction is awesome, but the results are high and low. The golden finger is so awesome that the protagonist is running around.

I lost interest in reading the main character's name. I didn't pay attention at first and thought it was called Zhen Hao. But when I opened it and saw that it was called Zhen Hao, it was really disappointing.

I saw in the introduction that I can't enter the martial arts gym, so why should I take a look?

Before the transformation, I was short of money and hungry After the transformation, I was still short of money and hungry This transformation was not in vain

I'm a bit tired of aesthetics! There are too many in the same category! At first glance, the first step is okay! It feels boring after watching too much

Those who have a funny name for the protagonist have never seen a big fire.

Everyone, hurry up and fall into the trap. Anyway, if you poison the author to death, you don't have to pay compensation.

Summary: Guide to avoiding writing pitfalls and advanced skills Author: Ziyichuan | Source: Dragon's Sky Core principles and framework 1. Core plot and theme tone - Definition: The core plot is the core conflict and resolution method throughout the book, which must strictly conform to the theme setting (such as the story of a hero using money to fight back, the story of cultivating immortals using magic weapons to break the situation). - Method: - Before opening the book, list the elements related to the theme (such as elixirs, formations, and talismans for cultivating immortals). - All dilemmas and solutions must revolve around the core story and avoid cross-theme deviations (for example, the assassination of the villain by the protagonist of a divine novel is considered a collapse novel). 2. Goldfinger Design - Core logic: I have what others don't have, and I have advantages when others have them (such as the "Grandpa" or 3S-level talent in "Dou Po"). - Combined combat power system: - Traditional levels (foundation building, golden elixir) or systems with inherent contradictions (such as "Lord of Mysteries" potion promotion). - Goldfinger needs to continue to strengthen the "sense of superiority" to avoid the collapse of follow-up orders caused by disengagement in the later period. Practical Skills in Writing 3. Application of Story Cards - Function: Ensure that the plot does not deviate from the core plot and clarify the stage goals (such as Luo Feng becoming a warrior in "Swallowing the Stars"). - Method: - First determine the climax ending, and then deduce the foreshadowing in reverse (such as the shocking scene of soldiers collapsing from exhaustion during disaster relief). - Randomly draw from the theme element library when you are stuck (such as alchemy + 36 calculations "hidden from the sky"). 4. The five works must not collapse - Goals are not missing: use story cards to clarify the short-term, mid-term and long-term goals of the protagonist. - The selling point is not reduced: it sticks closely to the subject matter and continues to give new impetus (such as new goals in each volume of "The Lord of Mysteries"). - Social relations are not blank: when changing maps, keep the previous characters or guides (for example, Liu Bei relies on acquaintances to connect the map). - There is no lack of upper-class status: the protagonist needs to continuously break through the hierarchy (such as clarifying the new godhead level after ascension). - The status gain cannot stop: every 6,000 words must reflect status improvement (such as a senior brother's change from contempt to follower). 5. The five-step method of showing off - The protagonist is strong but hidden → the difficulty of rendering the dilemma → the supporting role is not optimistic → the golden finger can easily solve it → everyone is shocked. - Essence: Create a sense of excitement through the gap between expectations and reality (such as the protagonist of "Demon Slayer" slapping the villain in the face). Structure and rhythm management 6. Three-line structure - World line (antenna): Top-level power conflicts and major worldview events (such as the game of gods in "Lord of Mysteries"). - Plot line (ground line): the specific actions of the protagonist's current class (such as a small county → country → universe). - Upgrade line: The spiral of strength and status needs to be closely integrated with the twin lines of heaven and earth. 7. Gap and Rhythm - Gap: Breaking readers' expectations (such as the invincible team in "Shaolin Soccer" encountering a strong enemy and catching the ball). - Rhythm: Every 6,000 words promote status improvement, and the climax is laid back to avoid dull development. Advanced suggestions for newcomers 8. Self-examination and improvement - Determine whether you can succeed in writing online articles: whether you can independently discover and correct problems in the article (such as deviation from the core message, vague selling points). - Three core questions: 1. Is the tone of the subject matter clear? 2. Is it possible to achieve "five things without collapse"? 3. Have you mastered the five-step method of showing off? 9. Double-line planning of heaven and earth - Antenna: top power and the end of the world view (such as the goal of the world's richest man). - Ground line: the protagonist's current actions and class breakthrough (such as county → country). - Tips: Use major antenna events to force the development of the ground line (such as policy adjustments to promote the protagonist's involvement in municipal events). Summary - The underlying logic: The odd is worse than the right, and the framework is more important than inspiration. - Key actions: Use story cards to constrain the plot, use the dual lines of heaven and earth to plan the long-term, and use the five-step method of showing off to create excitement. - The ultimate goal: through continuous optimization, move from perfect attendance to a monthly income of 20,000, and realize the "return of the great sage". Author's message: The road to online writing is like climbing a mountain. Comprehension determines the steps, and diligence determines the height. Mutual encouragement!

It can be said that the government is forcing the people to rebel. We are so lucky to be born in New China.

The author can't imagine other powerful creatures, including gars and crocodiles, haha

In the introduction, the transformation is quite awesome, either a mythical beast or a divine bird, but after all this time, he has been wandering around in the world of low martial arts, and he is still going to rebel in the Water Margin? Don't you find it embarrassing and inconsistent? Since it is fantasy, it should be written according to the rhythm of fantasy. Isn't it a good point to transform into different monsters and then acquire and use various strange abilities to continuously become stronger?

The subject matter is okay, but the name you gave to the protagonist really makes people feel uncomfortable. It's too fun to play with. My suggestion to you is to reopen it.

How many years does your protagonist live?

The author likes wives, which woman do he hang around with?