Reborn in the Apocalypse, I Gained the Possession System

I wanted to say before that there are very few apocalyptic protagonists who have the ability to build their own base and kill a thousand monsters. They are not those hard-working losers who are reborn, only to be slapped in the face later or the losers are licking dogs.

Build a safe house? The protagonist is a person who has been killing monsters for five years without superpowers. He built a machete in the apocalypse and cleaned up a large supermarket, which is enough for the protagonist for ten or eight years. Oh, I forgot that the protagonist is also the boss, so there is no need to build a safe house. Isn't it necessary for the monster-killing guy to find his younger brother to lead the younger brother? How can he stay still? There are people who have enough power to feed a city for how many years. In Chapter 5, the protagonist doesn't plan to be the boss and wants to be a dog in another base? I can't understand it

There are a few flaws. A 2099 looks like 1999. If your book was written in the 1990s, there would be no problem. A person you came back to after 5 years in the last days. Not 5 days. Life skills that. Not to mention sneaking in, picking locks, cheating, etc., Are you all good at it? Don't people have to adapt to the environment? As for who doesn't have a phone right now, you are in the end of the world. It's not like I need to say more. You can't tell if the pig's feet are not hanging in the apocalypse and have lived for 5 years. Come on! There is no logic at all at the moment, so it's better to just write it down.

Wow, that's amazing, the system can actually adjust the timeline🤮

A decent apocalyptic article. It's toxic, but it doesn't affect the plot. It's not too toxic overall, but it doesn't have any advantages (selling points). It's just mediocre. My grades won't be very good in the future. It might be better to cut it off. If the author insists on writing well and finishes the book normally, it can be regarded as an average book and his character can be praised.

Don't write about women's emotional love lines. This is a post-apocalyptic story. Just write about a female subordinate and tool person at most. The author should stop thinking about things that even platinum masters might not dare to touch. Without perfect control, this is a crappy story, which can persuade more than 90% of people. The protagonist can give what is not needed for the time being to others, but cannot use almost all the points to one person to try to see if he can recover his powers. Moreover, you have been emphasizing that super dangerous monsters will come out at any time and even the protagonist may not be able to deal with them. The best way is to keep the points until the monsters come and let the protagonist use the points to exchange items to fight, run, and take them to escape. If I can't escape, just wait for me to come back stronger and take revenge. If not, then The protagonist is not kind-hearted, and puts himself in the most dangerous dungeon with no room for error. You are not a perfect data weaver like Huang Ji who can control everything, or you have a sad and passionate explosive skill bloodline like Uchiha. This is completely a bit lacking in ability and brains, and you have to deceive yourself into showing kindness and finally pull the people around you to die together. Not only did the previous persona collapse, but also directly entered the female channel and became the persona of Cheng Xin. The article is inconsistent, the plot may have flaws, but the characters keep falling apart. . . . . Can't be saved

Typos. Plus him. Too much. Story construction. Use him for all other trash fish. Not readable

I just don't understand why you need to write a system. Is it because my skills are not enough?

He is really the king among dogs, it makes me sick to my stomach.