One Piece: Cardcaptor Sakura and I Travel the Grand Line Together

I saw the fight against Hawkeye. You are not an anime fanfic, but you write it like a martial arts fan. Your writing style is too dramatic and embarrassing. It doesn't feel like you are fighting Hawkeye, but more like a sword duel with Ximen Chuixue. You are a junior, and you are asking for advice. Your conversation style is a bit like Gu Long. What type is your book about, what theme is it, and what writing style is it written in? It's so dramatic that it's hard to follow!

Sakura is not a cute little girl, she is an athletic student with a good physique and a magician who loves close combat.

Ha meow~♡

Why does Sakura collect Clow Cards when she goes to other worlds?

There is no reason for poor grades. Enhanced props like those that may kill you if you drink them are generally not used unless you are in a desperate situation. However, the protagonist drinks heavily when there is no external danger. I thought you took Sakura to the wilderness to survive for a while and relied on her cards to survive.

The Clow card is actually a limiter. In order to prevent Sakura's magic power from expanding more and more. If Sakura's magic power is not limited by the Clow card, it will really destroy the world.

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is very poor. It can be seen that the author did not directly use AI to write it.

I just watched the beginning, but I felt it was very unreliable. First of all, why does the protagonist have no memory of saving Sakura? If you really want the protagonist to behave like this, then at least let him save himself and then fall into a coma. Secondly, at the beginning, Xiao Ke was said to be keeping warm, but where is Xiao Ke now? Or maybe because the magic was silent, Xiaoke also entered the magic book, but you didn't mention it at all. There was also the need to eat fish. When you were in an emergency at the beginning, you just ate raw food. But later on, because the protagonist's physical fitness is beyond ordinary people, wouldn't it be okay to make fire by drilling wood? Or should I say that there isn't even a single piece of wood on that island? In that case, it shouldn't be called a desert island, it should be called a reef. When it gets dark, you can just walk on the frozen sea. You don't have a goal, so why don't you just find a random direction? If there are trees, cut them down with a skate to provide shelter from the wind and rain. If not, dig a hole in the ground, and then use the skate to cut the rocks and cut them into slabs to block them. It is better than walking aimlessly on the sea.

When I was a kid, Magical Girl was a small Clow card, with me on this end and Sakura on the other. When you grow up, the magical girl is a shining ruby, with me on this side and Illya on the other side. Later, magical girls are a high-risk contract. I am at the end, and Tomoe Mami-san has no head. And now, the magical girls are two strong brothers, with me on this side and the Three Views on the other side. (´;ω;`)

Shikama Madoka: Are you a magical girl too? Sakura:... I am a cosplayer Xiao Ke: We ordinary cosplayers don't play with the Suicide Squad

It's embarrassing in many places. The protagonist seems to have come out of ancient times. He is half ancient, half modern, and not modern. The whole thing is very abstract. For example, if he recycles the mist, he suddenly says, "I will lend you three of my strength, and you can play a joke about me coming to help you," and then In the new chapter, if you have to have some kind of Xiangpai, Qi, I would rather you just say a single thought in your heart and everything will be fine. This sentence is very dramatic, as if Ultraman is fighting a monster, and suddenly Ultraman shouts, "The Finger of the Desolate Prisoner", don't you feel embarrassed?

It's ugly, the fighting looks like a martial arts style, the recruitment looks like a joke, the protagonist is aloof, it's awkward to watch.

The process of getting people on board was too stiff, it felt like the words the protagonist said were mixed with ice, and the crew members just got on the ship as if they had been sucked into it after hearing the invitation. There is no reasonable explanation for the prophetic conversation in the middle, just like in the game book, and the lines are still read well. It's time for you to get on the boat, so you get on the boat. Why do you know so much before you first meet? Don't worry, it's time to get on the boat.

It feels like most of the people in One Piece attack the protagonist first when they meet, and after being beaten up, they naturally ask the protagonist for help.

Noisy point full 😥, I get tired of picking up too many sesame seeds, and some unnecessary places are written, which makes people speechless.

The protagonist starts on an empty island and eats the thunder fruit. It is a half-invincible story and half-farming story. It is fast-paced and you are welcome to try it.

It's not interesting, the plot is boring and you can basically guess it, there's nothing interesting about it

When will it be updated🙂

You can also write a partner flow in the next book, all about magical girls, and there are many types of magical girls 😏