Defeat the Entire World with the Power of the Second Dimension!

🎬 Plot: It wasn't me who harmed you, it was Genshin who harmed you! When the protagonist recalled his past life memories, he became a loser because he had awakened Paimeng as his destiny. However, after awakening, his rich and awesome two-dimensional experience made up for this. In summary, it's fun to play Genshin Impact

① It's a classic useless start, but Paimon makes the protagonist's numerical value increase the least and get the most glares, especially the 4-digit numerical value of the protagonist's sister at the beginning compared to the protagonist's two-digit numerical value (later it increases to more than 100, but it can't compare with the auxiliary) ② The world view slowly spreads out, and the advantage is that it has a strong sense of immersion, but with more than 30 chapters, it seems to be dragging, which is caused by the lack of updates. ③ Paimeng is very good as a guide, but the specific function of the life card is still unclear. I haven't seen the plot of the life card in the drama so far. Does this thing add attribute points? ④ It's enough for the whole protagonist to know Hisoka alone. There is still a line connecting Hisoka for half the day. These days, plots with inexplicable plural time travelers are no longer popular. I frowned while reading that section. ⑤That file girl just locked the protagonist's diary, right? This behavior will not be diluted by the scene where she calls her daddy later, but the more you watch it, the more disgusting you are. Now that everyone is murderous, you have a way to die. ⑥The current color of the card is white, green and blue, and the future is unknown. ⑦ Paimon's search for a new life map is very interesting, but in the Second Age? There is too little room for the protagonist to move forward, so there is no need to deal with these past gadgets, but this little hook is okay. ⑧The protagonist is too weak, and the first team battle was a good one. It really felt like a hunter fighting (but how could the protagonist suppress the hot monkey with such a low value)? I am looking forward to the next plot. The starting point of the protagonist is too low, and the speed should be increased. ⑨ In summary, the book is a good book, a seedling, and worth reading. There are too few two-dimensional books these days. Please work harder, the author.

In male-channeled novels, would anyone really read fan fiction for these male characters? I think there are, but very few. You, the author, are really a genius. Although Uzumaki Naruto is a migrant worker manga, it is indeed popular, but this popularity is more about discussion than it can bring you real income. When you see Naruto fan fiction written, how many people go to work as nannies for Naruto? In fact, most of them just think that this person is no longer there, which can largely explain that fan fiction cannot enjoy the fan economy of Naruto Uzumaki. Then there is Lelouch. This is indeed an ancient classic, but it has been more than 20 years since this series. Fans have almost struggled with life. Now if you look for a fan of Lelouch, you may be able to find him. If you want to find Lelouch, it is probably harder to find than a panda. Then there is Gojo Satoru. This one is indeed a big hit, but he has the same problem as Uzumaki Naruto. You can't benefit from his fan economy. Most of Gojo Satoru's fans are female fans and current fans, and they are not in the same circle as your novel at all. Then there is Rimuru, what do you say about the cute king? You have been the hegemon in this series of Lelouch, Slime. The popularity of this series in China will never be as good as the other three proposed. There are not even a few fanfics to be found, and even comprehensive comics are rarely written. You are really not as good at writing about the cute king as you are about the bone king. As for Paimeng being the guide, it made me laugh. If you are writing a Genshin Impact fanfic or a Mi Family fanfic, this is indeed a plus point, but what you are writing is not, so it is a minus point to mix in the content of the second game, let alone MiHoYo characters. There is no attractive gimmick from the introduction to the beginning, all I can say is good luck to you.

But the plot is a bit too delayed and feels like there is too much nonsense.

The setting is good, but it's a little slow. For example, the card draw has a lot of unimportant characters written all over it, and the section in the library is also very long-winded and gives a lot of ink to the unsatisfactory plot. I feel that the author is a novice, but the writing style is okay so far. I hope that this problem can be corrected.

The setting is okay, but with Genshin Impact, people's desire to watch it is reduced.

People in the second dimension are all otakus. Please replace those male protagonists with those from "Tokisaki Kurumi", "Madoka", "Misaka Mikoto" and the like.

It shouldn't be a problem to slowly write a masterpiece, and the male protagonist's speech feels quite interesting.

The author's basic skills are not bad. Some chapters are well described But the writing strategy is more adventurous If you look closely, there is indeed some foreshadowing, but it is very shallow. There is no link hint The first appearance is in that intense way. Br>It's a pity that although I have no intention of abandoning the book but when I started reading, it was the author's last update. The intense plot soon stopped updating for three days Even if it resumes, how many people will be left is still a question

It would be better if the proportion of animation and other elements could be increased 😏

It feels pretty good, but the writing is a bit verbose in some places.

I couldn't understand the plot. The setting of the protagonist always felt dark and calculated, which was different from the two-dimensional painting style. The sister looked even more familiar. The interaction between the protagonist and his sister reminded me of Amway's coffin. At first I wanted to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, but I was tricked by Hisoka's card, and the uniqueness of the traveler was destroyed in some destiny sea. There was an unknown line. Although it was quickly named in the plot later, it still didn't feel good. Maybe some people would like to read it. You can try a few to try your appetite. There is no problem with the logic of the book.

I am very pleased to see that there are still people writing about two-dimensional cards. I am also writing a novel about two-dimensional cards. The outline is complete, the world view is set, and more than a dozen chapters have been written, ready to be published next month.

I can only say that it is indeed two-dimensional, but it depends on the individual whether he likes it or not.

Genshin Impact is awesome🥺

To be honest, I'm used to seeing orphans, but now I'm not used to being a parent, sister, or brother.

Author, I have a question for you. The protagonist's sister's abilities are Human God and Satella, so why can't the protagonist's life be read along with it? This way, the protagonist will not be such a noob in the early stage.

Have you ever been a 2D person? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted. With references

I thought it was okay at first, but then my sister came out, oh my god, it poisoned me to death.

I say that writing male characters is a thankless task, especially when it comes to writing a bunch of characters that were either the same characters from 20 years ago or characters that broke the mold, exploded in popularity, or had false popularity. A bunch of inexplicable people come to criticize me and retort wildly. Why are they just saying that they are unwilling to spend money to help the author? Some people say that people in the fandom are not in the fandom. To put it bluntly, aren't fanfics only read by people in the fandom? Why would those outsiders who follow the trend pay to watch this? With the same virtues as those in the second-tier gaming circle, if a male character is released and the whole community is crazy about it, he is not a real man if he does not recharge or smoke. As a result, every time he comes out, his revenue will be cut in half compared to the female characters of the same period.

Bringing the two-dimensional dimension into ruin😅