Star Dome Train, I Open a Small Shop on the Train

Traveling to a world with supernatural abilities, he became a genius mage dressed in red, with an incomprehensible father and a godfather who pursues pleasure. He often fell out of control, had a strange relationship with a canine spearman, and was about to have a battle with the oldest king, Jin Shining. Understood, I am Tohsaka Rin, tell me where this is. In the universe of the space opera, there are the existence of gods and disasters caused by gods. Primitive people and space battleships coexist, and as the background, several devastating wars have broken out. Understood, this is to link up with the Star Dome Railway. What time is it now and where is the train crew? Huh? What does the assassination of the War Commander mean?

Finally I can post pictures like this

Uncles, aunts, brothers and sisters who like Keli's good daughter come in and like it!

The protagonist died when he entered Omphalos and was stabbed in the back by the official 😁

Xiao Bai'er, the subject matter is not bad, it's the kind of wandering businessman, and he can't break the rope. What about the writing style? He said with high emotional intelligence: It doesn't feel like a studio novel, well, that's about it. I'm quite curious about how Uncle Yang will feel when he sees the Skyfire Great Sword, but I haven't seen it yet (I saw the picture of Xi'er)

He is obviously a fan of Star Railway, but his combat power was defeated by a Purcell elf. Why are the various elves who promote the Purcell trumpet so powerful and awesome? Since the Purcell is so good, why not write a Purcell fan? Don't like it?

It's over. The plot of Ompharos has not been finished yet. This novel is getting a bit more and more unreasonable. The author probably can only keep in a state of patching. Because of the characters of the protagonist and the train crew, it is very unreasonable for your protagonist not to solve the issue of March 7th now, because the protagonist is a treasure chest that can take out anything, and the train crew actually did not ask the protagonist or ask for any solutions. The author's wait for patching will take a long time 🤓 If you write so fast, you will overturn.

Watching MiHoYo, I only care about one thing, who will the protagonist copy?

Hahahaha, it was completely designed by miHoYo, right? Hahahaha, Onfalos's ones are all data people can't get out 😭 Could it be that the protagonist has the ability to upgrade, right? Hahahaha

Sure enough, this kind of novel will unconsciously describe the protagonist as superior to others.

Qiu Kai has no boundaries, conquers no borders, hunts the sea of ​​stars, eradicates evil obstacles, and is powerful in all directions!

There is too much hang-up, the combat power is not very good, some characters are also broken, and they have to intervene in every plot, which makes the plot a bit broken. Why do I feel like this book will collapse😅

I haven't seen such a novice's writing for a long time 🤭

The protagonist is an ordinary person, how delicious can it be? You can buy delicious food in the store or let other masters cook it, but why do you want to cook it yourself?

The first is the motivation of the protagonist. What is the motivation of the protagonist? Trade to get Star Domes or Star Coins? Then why not increase the price? Two yuan of mineral water is sold in the desert. You are really a philanthropist. You don't even bring it back. The second is Teyvat. If only the protagonist goes to Teyvat, there is no problem, but if the train crew can go there but not the train, is that considered pioneering? Finally, it's the protagonist's combat power. It feels like an angel in the beginning but ends up facing the real Creator. He only has realm but no combat skills (although he can also fly with huge bricks). If he is in the same realm, he will die! (Choose one of hunting or destroying)

To put it simply (I have read more than 440 pictures) This book can be read (define it first), and it is considered to be above average for the listening group, and it is average for the reading group (because there are few paid comments later, and many of the previous comments are that the author does not understand the game) The play, and the wording is wrong) Disadvantages: 1. The wording is not corrected, or very little is changed. In the first 20 pictures, almost all of them are included, and the readers helped to say it, and he will not change it (for example, it is VI, not IV), let's just say it! It felt like I was reading a pirated book. There were a lot of typos. If I didn't know, I thought it was to prevent theft. Therefore, the author probably used voice input, and many places were indistinguishable 2. The author's plot that he didn't know was visible to the naked eye, and he didn't put any effort into it. He just relied on random guessing (for example, whether Tianli is dead or not), and it's a private setting. A lot of them (some character designs completely collapsed) 3. The protagonist does not control the degree well, whether it is the character design of the daughter slave, or yelling at the system (in the case of the system, I really felt a little uncomfortable and did not find it interesting) ) 4. The products in the system are not well controlled. The products that have appeared in more than 400 chapters are all classic names that appear in a certain online game (not famous). In short, they are such as strengthening stones and life. For online game terms such as "Heart of Heart" and "Water of Life", the slightly newer and more commonly used terms are "Sky Fire" (in short, they are system products. They don't seem to be purchased from all the worlds. Some of the products are too fixed. It feels like they are from a certain online game world. Taken from the world, there is no feeling of the world at all) Advantages: 1. This point is for the author's private questions. Although there are too many questions, a considerable part of the questions are for the happy ending, so I personally think that it will be easier to accept if it is not seen by people who have an in-depth understanding of it. It can be considered a shortcoming in person) 2. Because the author pursues a perfect ending, most of the things here are done in an interesting way, so the content is quite interesting (I will mention one detail, Aha is often fucked by Hanabi-sama) 4. The author has fulfilled the promise in the introduction, and the characters of all the worlds that appear are all very well integrated. It can be said that there is really a feeling of being together with everyone (Additional note - there are really some small SB Is it true that the author often asks the protagonist to cook without thinking? Or is he eating too much takeout?

The author feels like he is from a previous novel genre,

Groove! As an author, I'm only 5 o'clock when it comes to giving out red envelopes!

Does this book have a female protagonist? This kind of article doesn't have a daily emotional life, and there's no interaction between the heroine and what's the point of watching it?

Nabe was neither green nor easy to talk to, and then Kongzheng disappeared.

Chapters 264 and 265 are particularly embarrassing. My suggestion is not to buy it

There's not even a heroine, there's no protagonist, isn't there anyone you like?

Omphalos is a virtual character and cannot come out. Author, your imaginary plot is a bit backstabbed.

Let me just say one thing, does the author still want the tickets for this month? Been pigeoning for two days😡

Kevin was sealed in the Quantum Sea by Walter. I can only say 6

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