Cultivation Begins With Rejuvenation

The beginning was fine, but when I first started to cultivate immortality, I felt quite baffled from the beginning. Participated in the sect trial at the beginning, and wrote seven or eight chapters for it. After passing the trial, the protagonist regretted it, stopped going, and returned to his family. Okay, in this case, I will be the protagonist and continue to live in the family. It is considered stable. It is just giving up resources for safety. Anyway, you can live forever. As a result, within a few years, the early resources were almost used, and the protagonist went to Fairy City again 🤔 So what is the thinking logic of the protagonist you wrote? Does he care about the progress because he cares about stability, so he grinds slowly, or is he willing to take some risks to obtain resources once the progress slows down? The two waves of operations were inconsistent and I didn't understand them at all. ... But on the contrary, the previous operation of giving up entering the sect was even more stupid. The author tries to describe the gap between the sect and the casual cultivators in various places, and it is an insurmountable gap, but the protagonist's "not joining the sect because of danger" becomes increasingly untenable. Because if you also follow the alchemy master route, casual alchemy masters will actually be recruited by the sect to fight on the battlefield. The reason is that in the eyes of the sect, alchemy masters who practice casual cultivation are not considered alchemy masters. So the question is, will the sect's alchemy master do the same? I'm afraid not. So if the protagonist joins a sect and becomes an alchemist, is there really any danger? Does it mean that in such a large sect, even the people who make alchemy and talismans have to fight monsters and explore ruins? All in all, it is not convincing at all.

Run, there is no point in reading anymore. The protagonist defends himself there to prevent the secret of his rejuvenation from being revealed. Well, the sister surnamed Ning can easily see through this place, and the protagonist doesn't pretend to show off directly. The first hundred or so chapters are all jokes. We got along with each other for a few years in Jueling Land, and then we had sex once, and then we reached the middle stage of Foundation Establishment in several lifetimes with the main character. There was a gap of more than a hundred years, and then we met the main character and revealed his past. The main character mentioned above was so cautious that Gou threw them all into the trash. This immortal has also been cultivated in vain. Author, I really don't know how far behind this version is. Either you just write straight-up novels, harem novels, etc., Or you focus on "career", and everything else is a stumbling block on the road. Taoist lovers don't just refer to wives, but as an author, you insist on mixing the latter with the former, and you are not a human being inside or outside.

After reading thirty chapters, the writing became smoother and smoother, and it seemed to be above average. The abilities related to experience and lifespan are quite to my liking, and I feel that there are a lot of points that can be explored. I hope I can keep them.

In the early stage, low-end games such as Qi refining and foundation building could be seen through by those two women, but in the later stages, the high-end games could never be concealed. Don't say that those two women were able to see through the details, and others couldn't. The protagonist's ability is due to the information gap. As long as others know the approximate ability, you can know everything in an instant by looking up the experiences of the protagonists in the past and the genealogy and growth process of the contemporary protagonist. As long as the supporting character does not reduce his intelligence, it is impossible to hide it. There are too many flaws in the ability to rejuvenate, and it is purely supported by the information gap. Purely relying on poor information is actually a bit of a deception. After all, various abilities are possible in the world of immortality. Even if that kind of ability has not appeared, you can still rely on it if you guess. As a result, you told me that there is no information gap at all. Others just know that those blessed by gods can integrate various laws and use the power of that law (it doesn't matter whether the protagonist is followed by a favored by gods or not) Oh, really, in the later stage, unless the protagonist's camp and the enemy camp are given a strong wisdom halo, I can't think of any way for the protagonist to hide that he can rejuvenate. After all, the meaning of your introduction and protagonist is very obvious, which is to build good relationships and accumulate contacts in the previous life, and then use the contacts to grow quickly after rejuvenating. Without the information gap to cover up, in the later period, besides directly abandoning your previous identity and going the lone wolf trend, you also want to hide your rejuvenation.

It became popular after playing Four Lives, with 22 broken chapters, slow pace, inexplicable hostility and cliched plot. It doesn't take a random person to question the true elixir elders. You have to start from scratch to recruit geniuses to prepare for the next life. One chapter a day is pitiful. Poor grades are what you deserve. Keep it on your bookshelf. It is also foreseeable that you will die.

After breaking through to the late stage of Qi refining, the spiritual consciousness is equivalent to the spiritual consciousness in the middle stage of foundation building, and then the spiritual consciousness in the middle stage of foundation building is as high as 15 feet? ? ? 50 Meters? ? ? Is this right? ? ? Okay, let's just say that everyone has their own way of writing. The interesting thing comes again later. In the qi training period, you get elixirs, and the talismans are divided into junior high, middle and late stages, and then the fun comes. Each period is divided into low grade, medium grade, high grade, fine grade, top grade. Well, this is also everyone's own setting. Here comes the next one. The low-grade teleportation talisman in the late first-order stage can jump 300 miles in one space, and the high-grade teleportation talisman can jump 500 miles. Then it is said that it can escape from the hands of the monks in the early stage of foundation building. Is it funny? ? In the early stage of foundation building, the spiritual consciousness of a monk is 10 feet, 33.33 Meters. According to what you wrote about the golden elixir, the spiritual consciousness is magnified 100 times, which is 3000 meters. You can't find the golden elixir even if you travel 500 miles away? ? ? The data is written as if it has not been thought through.

After reading the public chapter, I just subscribed to a few chapters A "strange" thing suddenly appeared I lost all interest. I was watching Immortal Cultivator, and a weird setting suddenly appeared, which was boring Give me my subscription money back, I won't watch it anymore.

The early stage is really good, it can be regarded as food and grass. Quickly passing through the mortal stage, returning to a child for the first time after cultivating immortality, until the protagonist reaches the foundation-building stage and becomes a guest of the sect, the rhythm and plot are good. After breaking through the fake elixir, the plot began to deteriorate, especially the elixir king, who was extremely poisonous. The protagonist has accumulated throughout his life, and his practice progress is very fast. When he reaches the fake elixir, his life span will increase greatly. If he reaches the point of returning to childhood, the protagonist's accumulation will be too deep. At the same time, many characters in the early stage are estimated to have expired, so the plot is forced to arrange to return to childhood. But life, death, and the changes of time are also a necessary part of this kind of longevity novel. The author is too hasty, and the plot arrangement is also stiff. And this kind of treatment only treats the symptoms but not the root cause. The protagonist of the new life should at least form a golden elixir and look forward to Yuanying, right? Then the lifespan will be longer, is it possible to arrange a plot to return to childhood? Returning to a child once again and embarking on the path of spiritual practice again. The content is repetitive, with few updates, the plot is weak, and readers continue to lose, creating a vicious cycle.

In Chapter 20, you can see that he is a cyber eunuch. I can't say that you are not intelligent, but I can only say that your intelligence is just like that. The palace intends to recruit you as a son-in-law and give you a hug. Are you pretending to be determined to seek immortality? Don't want to write about a relationship between a man and a woman and two female characters appear in chapter 20? You even got into an affair with one of them, and you said that now is not a good time to get married and have children? Isn't it suitable for you to touch others? Play with your hands? I originally wanted to continue reading, but when I saw the author's reply in the comment section, I was so angry that I immediately gave up. What about rejuvenating yourself at the age of 40 and not caring if your wife remarries and gets tied up? In his last life, he was harvested and mutilated, and he was rejuvenated at the age of 40. Even if you have not made much progress in this life, the woman is still 40 years old. How many years older than him is the half-old lady, prince, daughter, remarrying? Are the children twenty years old? I feel like the author is insulting my intelligence. What's even more irritating is that the author said things would get better later and that there was an unexpected way to reunite. I'm looking at that one for you! If this is the case in the past, why should I look back? To sum up, if you survive the 20th chapter of the medium-sized poison, you can probably look back on it, so I will just give it up.

When Pig's Feet continues to get entangled with old friends from previous lives, the book becomes less interesting. Abandoned