Saving Up Spiritual Roots for My Next Life

I'd like to mention my views on the steady stream here. I hope the author can take a moment to read this. 1. The advantage of a "steady" narrative is that the protagonist doesn't need to participate in or resolve conflicts. This is because readers can easily empathize with the protagonist.

The writing has gotten progressively worse since the third life, especially the last two chapters; it's hard to believe this is a story from Qidian. The Foundation Establishment cultivator instantly killing the Nascent Soul cultivator—it's completely illogical. Even in the second life, the difference in minor cultivation levels was so huge; did you change the author?

Once we got to the island, this book became unreadable. It was constantly throwing around 50,000 characters, including Foundation Establishment cultivators. The protagonist himself was also a Foundation Establishment cultivator, a Golden Core cultivator. He attacked the island, only to be relentlessly worn down by 50,000 Foundation Establishment cultivators until his death. I just can't understand why he didn't run away. 🙂

At first, I thought I'd gradually build up my foundation through each life and then achieve great success, but instead, I was given a mysterious tree spirit technique right out of the gate, and thanks to my past life's skills, I already had a mid-grade spiritual root! Why bother accumulating spiritual roots?

Chapter Five is poisonous; you want to get to the Immortal Town/Immortal City as soon as possible. With your past life's experience, isn't the easiest way to focus on quickly reaching the later stages of cultivation (with your previous life's experience, cultivation bottlenecks before the Golden Core stage are almost nonexistent), while simultaneously practicing attack, movement, and defensive…

If you're going to plagiarize, at least make some changes. The plot is too similar to other works; show some originality! After reading a hundred chapters, it feels like a third-rate wish-fulfillment novel, inferior to other light novels. The protagonist's characterization is bizarre—he's supposed to be celibate, yet the author insists on writing about women to emphasize his celibacy; it's too deliberate and rather abstract. It's a strange read, which explains the book's poor performance.

Author, why don't you ever use the cheat code you gave the protagonist? You don't need any special opportunities or anything like that; you can write less about those. He needs to accumulate spiritual roots for the next life, but he still has to die eventually. 300 Times without dying in one go doesn't fit the title.

Is this guy fucking insane? He wants to save people while they're still weak and vulnerable, even knowing it will be a hassle, and he still does it? He's absolutely insane.

Since the protagonist can reincarnate into the next life, he can establish a sect when he has achieved a certain level of cultivation. Each time the protagonist enters a new life, he can go to the sect he established to cultivate, and his sect can become stronger and stronger.

It's a magical herb, but the name could be changed; it's not a good name. You could keep it for the next life and change it to something like "You'll see in the next life," or something like that. As for accumulating spiritual roots, how about that? It feels a bit like a light novel, doesn't it?